Author: Daydreamer
Posted: February 9, 1999
Mara II: Bitter Sweet, Bitter Sorrow
Dear Friends, This is a dreadfully dark and intense story, much more so
than even my other tales. There are scenes of violence
against a woman, allusions to domestic abuse, inappropriate
responses from the male character, and several things
related to miscarriage and the loss of a child.
This story has the potential to be very disturbing. The heading
clearly says "graphic violence and disturbing imagery." I
do realize, however, that sometimes that is not enough. It's
very easy to fall into a habit of skimming the disclaimer and
jumping right into the story, which is what one of my beta
readers did.
And then, this story really upset her. In fact, the term
"disturbing" was used in initial comments on the first
draft from four of my five readers. Two of them elected
not to continue and passed on doing beta on this one.
Several of my readers suggested this additional disclaimer
and also, that one particularly "disturbing" scene be clearly
marked so that readers could opt to skip it if they so
desired. I have done both. I have taken every step I can
to make it clear to you, gentle readers, that this story
has the potential to be extremely distressing to some
folks. I've done all I can to be up front and open about
the content, despite the fact that I dislike revealing the
course of the story before you even read it.
So, if you choose to read Mara: Bitter Sweet, Bitter Sorrow:
YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED.
In other words, if you don't like it, or it upsets you, or you
find it disturbing and have nightmares, PLEASE, do not
feel you need to share this with me. I have no desire to
receive such feedback, and your reactions, if negative, after
the warnings and disclaimers I have posted, are your own
responsibility.
This story is extremely close to my heart, touching on
several themes that I have grappled with. If you choose
to read it, and find its tale intense, but are able to appreciate
that intensity, and can appreciate a story of struggle and
adversity and the difficulty people can have in getting
beyond the baggage they bring into a relationship, and
surviving together against great odds, then I would be
most humbly grateful to hear from you.
Sincerely,
Daydreamer