A word of warning from the author.

This story is somewhat out of character from my other stories. It also spawned more comments on the newsgroups than any of my other stories. I'm happy to say that they were all favorable. I know that sounds like bragging but when you read the story you'll understand what I mean.

Avoiding the Train

She put her clothes back in order and washed her face. Even so, when she came out of the bathroom her eyes were still moist. He held his arms out and said that he forgave her. She avoided his embrace and just shook her head. Then she said, "Let me ask you a question. If my car was stalled on the railroad tracks and I saw a train coming should I keep trying to start the car and hope I can get it going before the train hits or should I trust the engineer to see me and stop the train?"

He didn't have to think before he answered, "Neither. You should get out and run. The car can be replaced but your life is too precious to risk on the silly idea that the obvious collision can be avoided."

She sighed and said, "Even if you loved the car and didn't want it to be crushed?"

He didn't see the point in this discussion and was getting impatient. "That doesn't make any difference. No matter how you feel about the car you can always get another one. Your safety is what's important."

She looked at him and wiped the last tear from her cheek. "Yes, you're right."

She continued as she walked to where he hung his coat on the chair. "Suppose the car I loved had a mechanical problem that couldn't be fixed and might explode while I was driving. Don't you think I'd be better off without it?"

He watched her take his keys from the coat and as she fiddled with them he answered, "Of course. That's the only option. What are you doing?"

She turned to face him and ignored his question. "Today has been very enlightening. I've always liked it when you spanked me and the sex afterwards was great. But that's all it was supposed to be. Just fun and sexy, not punishment."

He offered a half-heated apology. "I'm sorry if I spanked you too hard but you have to admit that you deserved it."

Another sigh. "It's not the spanking that's the problem. You've spanked me much harder when I wanted you to. That's what I'm talking about. It was when I wanted it. OK, I screwed up and will suffer the consequences but it had nothing to do with you. Nevertheless you decided I needed a lecture and a spanking. You also announced that you intend to continue that practice whenever you think I need it. The train I see coming towards me is you. We're not even married and you've already decided that you have the authority to punish me. It's time for me to get off the track before things get worse. I love you and will miss you terribly for a while but I'd be foolish to stay. This afternoon I saw a part of you that really scared me. I'm getting out while I can."

She almost got to the door before he stepped in front of her and blocked the way. "You aren't going anywhere young lady. If I have to take you over my knee again and spank some sense into you I will. Ugh."

He doubled over as her knee met his groin. She dropped her engagement ring on the floor and put his key to her apartment in her pocket. She stepped into the hall and took a deep breath. The car was flawed beyond repair and now it was destroyed.

She walked out of the building and through her tears she could almost see the train. It had safely passed her and was even now fading into the distance.

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