Forgive Me, Please.
by The Unknown (screw.you@gurlmail.com)
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Summary: Three years after the rape Jane and Brandon have sex. Evan is
released from prison with one thing on his mind.
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WARNING!!: This has some sexual content in it so if you're squeemish
about this stuff don't read it! Also note that the characters are in
their 20's.
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Scene 1: Show the Lawndale prison cafeteria. We see Evan walking to a
table carrying a tray with crap on it. He is about to reach the table at
the corner when he trips. Food splatters everywhere. It also splatters on
Knife, and Brad.(1)
Knife: Hey, you little shit, watch where you're going.
Evan: Sorry.
Brad: Sorry ain't gonna cut it, kid. (He rubs his head on the floor hard.)
Evan: Ow!
Brad: Yeah, ya better be sorry, little boy.
Evan: Oh, man.
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Scene 2: We see Evan in his cell writing in a diary.
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Dear Diary April 5, 2002.
Well, it's been 3 years in prison for the rape. I feel well kinda bad for
raping that girl Jane Lane. I don't know what got into me. It was like a
force deep within in me that did this. I tried to stop after that but I
sexually assaulted some girl Stacy Nibblett on a date. Prison life is pure
hell. Each day I am subjected to beatings by two guys. I feel really bad
diary. If only she would forgive me.
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Scene 3: Show Joanna, Steven, Medow, and Eric of F.L.I.P rehearsing.
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Joanna: O.K, let's see here. we're going to practice "My Alter Ego".
Eric: Man, that's all we ever practice.
Steven: Don't you have any other songs?
Joanna: Well, no.
Medow: Ha! I know that look.
Joanna: What look?
Eric: You got something, don't you?
Joanna: Yeah it's called "The Crappy Song". Wanna hear it? O.K. (picks up
guitar. Starts to play.) Crap!crap!crap!CRAP!CRAP!CRAP!
Medow: O.K, we get the point
Joanna: Good. Look let's just skip today. I'll call you back when
something inspires me.
Eric: O.K.
Medow:Come on, let's go.
(The two walk out together. Eric with blonde slicked back hair, blue eyes,
a baby face. Medow with blonde hair, blue eyes, and pretty short. 5'1" to
be exact.)
Steven: So, can't get inspired, can you?
Joanna: Not yet.
Steven: All well that's O.K. (he kisses her on the lips)
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Scene 4: Show Jane and Brandon at the Lane residence.
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Brandon: So, you ready for our all day date?
Jane: Yeah. What are we doing anyway?
Brandon: Oh I was thinking first the movie, then a picnic, then the
carnival, then we could go to a hotel.
Jane: Sounds good.
Brandon: Really?
Jane: Yeah.
Brandon: You sure?
Jane: Shut up before I change my mind.
Brandon: O.K Well, let's go.
(In the car.)
Jane: So, what are we going to see?
Brandon: Hmm. Haven't decided. Up to you.
Jane: I don't care. Umm, uh, I guess that remake of "Titanic". I hear both
Jack and Rose die.
Brandon: Cool!
(At the ticket counter.)
Brandon: Two for "Titanic", please.
Ticket Seller: Agh here's ya tickets. Enjoy the flick.
Jane: O.K do you want me to save us a seat, and you can get the snacks?
Brandon: Nah. How 'bout you?
Jane: O.K you want a large coke, and Milk Duds?
Brandon: Yeah.
Jane: O.K see you in there. I'll wave.
(Brandon goes in the theater, and see's no one there.)
Brandon: Alright!
Jane: Alright what? Oh! (Notices the empty theater.) Woo Hoo!
Brandon: Front, or back?
Jane: Middle.
Brandon: As you wish.
(Three hours later.)
Jane: So Rose falls down, and gets chopped up by the propellers? And Jack
also falls trying to save her. That was way shorter than the original.
(Sorry all you Leo fans. I couldn't resist.)
Brandon: Most of my attention was on you.
(They've been making out the whole three hours.)
Jane: So, now the picnic?
Brandon: Of course, Madam Lane.
Jane: Oh shut up with the country accent.
Brandon: Ready?
Jane: Yeah.
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Scene 5: Show Evan in his cell. With Knife, and Brad.
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Brad: Hey.
Evan: Look, just leave me alone.
Knife: Ya know we've been hearing rumors that you might get off for
parole.
Evan: Yeah, right.
Brad: Nah they said possibly. Tommorow.
Evan: Mmmm hmm. Sure sure.
Knife: And that means we get to have one more day of fun.
Brad: Come on, little boy.
Evan: Hey, leave me alone!
Knife: Nope sorry. (He picks up Evan, and throws him against the wall.)
Evan: OW!
Brad: Hmm. I believe the last thing you did was kick that girl. (Starts
kicking him) How do you like it? HUH!?
Evan: Ow! Stop it, please. (Starts to cry.)
Knife: Oh the little boys crying. (Drags him to the toilet, and dunks his
head in.) Wash yer face, cry baby.
Evan: Oh, please, somebody HELP!
Guard: Hey, YOU TWO ,CUT IT OUT!!
Knife: Why, he deserves it.
Guard: STOP! OR I WELL TAKE DRASTIC MEASURES!!
Brad: Oh, fine!
Evan: Thanks.
(Midnight. Evan squints to write in his diary.)
Dear Diary April 6, 2002
Well diary. Rumor has it I'll be free tommorow. On parole that is. I
suffered, a bad beating by those two guys. I really want to talk to Jane,
say I'm sorry, but I know that's not enough. I took something from her. I
was like--well you know--the little boy that wants a toy, but can't have
it, so he steals it. Kinda like me. I wanted to go out with her. She said
"No" and I raped her. But also call me crazy, but it seemed something
enetered me after she rejected me. It was like a force controlling me to
do this. Yeah I know it sounds crazy. I wonder what she's doing now?.....
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Scene 6: Show Brandon, and Jane at a hotel.
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Jane: I'm tired.
Brandon: That was fun.
Jane: What the carnival, or the picnic?
Brandon: Both.
Jane: Hmm.
Brandon: Hey umm listen. We've been dating for three years. Do you think
you're ready?
Jane: To do it?
Brandon: Yes.
Jane: Do you have protection?
Brandon: Of course.
Jane: O.K
Brandon: Let me go get ready.
Jane: Uh huh. Umm, Brandon?
Brandon: Yeah?
Jane: I, uh, umm, er, uh..
Brandon: Is anything wrong?
Jane: I wasn't a virgin before the rape. I know I should have told you
some time ago.
Brandon: That's O.K. At least you were honest.
Jane: Thanks.
(Brandon goes into the bathroom to get ready. Jane turns on the T.V)
SSW Announcer: On the next "Sick Sad World", porn stars who do the Foo Foo
Nasty. With animals.
Jane: (Turns off the T.V) I'm going to be sick.
Brandon: Huh? Why?
Jane: Oh I found something repulsive on T.V.
Brandon: O.K so you ready? (He's standing there wearing boxers only, Jane
is still dressed.)
Jane: Yeah. (They stare at each other for a moment. Brandon leans foward
to kiss her. They kiss gently at first, but then in more passion. She
removes her shirt, revealing her black bra. Brandon leans her down on the
bed, then moves slowly to her neck and sucks it gently. Jane looks at him.
His hair in cute little dyed plantinum blonde spikes, along with a few
sets of brown spikes. His baby blue eyes, his cute face. Then he also has
a well built body. In fact Jane thinks, "More built than Jess." He worked
his way down to her bra, and unhooked the clasp in the front. He slipped
it off with his teeth, and dropped it on the floor. He then licked her
right breast. She gave out a small wimper. He then removes her pants, and
underwear, and let his fingers explore her cunt. She gives out more
whimpers of pleasure, and a few moans. He removes his boxers. Then he
grabs his cock, and inserts himself into her. Despite being a non-virgin
Jane has to bite her lower lip to keep from screaming in pain. He looked
at her; the kissed her forehead, nose, lips, and chin. She whimpers;
obviously aroused. He rocked back and forth on her, his cock going in and
out each time. Jane dug her nails into his back, harder at each thrust.
He smiles at her, and does it faster. She bites her lower lip harder, but
the tears come falling. Brandon looks at her then kisses her.)
Brandon: Jane. You alright?
Jane: mmm,hmmm.
Brandon: Do you want me to stop?
Jane: No. This feels too good.
(He works to her neck, and starts sucking on it. He rocks back and forth
faster and faster. She gives out a few moans of pleasure. She finally
reaches her orgasm. She claws at his back, and gives out a low moan. They
collaspe in each others arms.)
Brandon: How was it?
Jane: Great. (They hear a knock at the door.)
Brandon: Oh geez. Just a minute! (Show outside the door; we see Daria and
Trent.)
Daria: Sounds like Jane was listening to porno tape.
Trent: Nah. Not her style. (The door opens. We see Brandon in just his
boxers. His hair is mussed, and he has scratch marks all over his chest
and back. Daria and Trent's eyes go wide.)
Daria: Jesus Christ. Were you just mauled by an animal?
Jane: Oh, Shut up!
Trent: Janey?
Jane: Yes. What do you want?
Daria: Here, we were told to give you this note.
Jane: You interrupted our fun for this?
Trent: The question is. Were you doing it, or killing him?
Jane: Ha ha! Trent. Gimme that! (She snatches away the note; then reads it.)
Dear Jane,
Meet me at the Lawndale cafe tommorow at 8 am. I can't tell you who I am
just now. I well be wearing a white T-shirt, and khakis, and sitting at
table three. Bring somebody with you.
Jane: Umm, sure.
Brandon: Well, are you going to?
Jane: I suppose.
Trent: Well, see ya, Janey; don't forget to trim those nails.
Jane: URUGH!! (She throws a pillow at Trent. It hits him upside the head.)
Brandon: Should we get back to bed?
Jane: Yeah.
(They crawl back in bed together. Jane snuggles close to Brandon, buries
her face in his chest, and falls asleep. Brandon looks at her smiles,
strokes her hair, and falls asleep.)
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Scene 7: A dream sequence. Show Jane with Brandon.
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Brandon: Jane, you're a fucking bitch.
Jane: What?
Brandon: You heard me. You're a no good bitch with a fucking cunt who
wants damn prick in you!
Jane: Hell, no!
Brandon: (He turns into Evan)
Evan: Come on, little girl, let's have some fun. (He grabs Jane, who kicks
him away. She starts running as fast as she can. Evan is close behind. He
tackles her to the ground, but some how she manages to escape. She runs
into a chain link fence.)
Jane: (Shaking, and clawing the fence.) SOMEBODY HELP! PLEASE!
OH, GOD, SOMEBODY HELP! (Evan corners her. She drops down and cowers
with fear, and starts to cry.)
Evan: Jane, Jane, Jane...
Brandon: Jane, JANE!
Jane: Ack! (Starts to cry.)
Brandon: Jane, what's wrong?
Jane: I had a bad dream.
Brandon: About Evan?
Jane: Yeah. Only in this one it started out as you, and you turned into
Evan.
Brandon: Jane, I wouldn't hurt you.
Jane: I know. Umm, what time is it?
Brandon: 7:30. Guess we better get ready.
Jane: Yeah.
(Brandon puts on a shirt, and a pair of jeans. We see Jane putting on her
bra, and panties under the covers. She then gets a black shirt, and jeans
and puts those on. She then brushes her hair a little.)
Brandon: Ready?
Jane: Yeah.
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Scene 8: Show Jane, and Brandon in the cafe. We see Evan at table 3. He has on a
cap, and pair of shades on.
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Jane: Well that's table 3. Might as well get this over with.
(They walk over to the table)
Jane: O.K Mister. . .
Evan: Jane, it's me. (He removes his cap, and sunglasses)
Jane: Oh, my God! You're supposed to be locked up. What the hell are you
doing here? Oh, wait, never mind; you are probaly here to rape me?
Evan: No Jane I'm not. I got out on parole. Jane I... how do I say this?
Look I realized I hurt you. I violated you, and I know you probaly have
visions of killing me, but Jane, if you could, find the heart to forgive
me, please?
Jane: (She looks stunned.) Evan I don't know what to say. I mean you
treated me like I was an object you could just screw when ever you want.
I don't know if I can. It's a big step.
(Cut to outside. For some reason we see Joanna running at top speed. She
enters the building gasping for breath, muttering something)
Jane: What the hell are you doing here?
Joanna: Darkness, darkness..
Brandon: Jane, she's scaring me.
Jane: What is it?
Joanna: Come outside.
(Cut to outside)
Evan: What?
Joanna: I just had a vision. My home is being destroyed.
Jane: You came screaming, because your house is being destroyed?
Joanna: No. I'm not from Earth I'm from the DarkWorld.
(Stunned looks on all. Fade to black where we see the words "To be
continued in 'Our Alter Egos'".)
O.K you thought that was weird bizzare? Will boys and girls you haven't
seen nothing yet. "Our Alter Egos" is going to be as bizzare as I can get.
(And beleive me, I can get really bizzare.)
The one reason why I did this story is because it sorta teaches the value
of forgiveness. Which as we see Jane doesn't forgive him off-hand. Well,
seeing as this is a lead on to "Our Alter Egos", I'll stop now.
NOTES:
(1) Knife and Brad were introduced in "Are You That Guy?"
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