Hey ya'll I want you to peep these poems and let me know what you think of them.

i aint gunna pretend like i wrote em, cuz i did not at all, i got no skillz in that area, but i would like some feedback,
ok, thanx a lot.
 

The Lord's hand lies heavy upon this heart
weakened already
but still faintly beating
struggling to break free
from all that binds it to this world
hatred and pain, hurt
only these eyes can see

On my knees I cry
"Heal me Lord"
the weight of this world is too much for me to bear
He gathers me up in his arms
gently brushing away the hatred and the hurt
In his arms I am set free
lifting the burdens from my shoulders
transferring them to His own
slowly with each nail
a little groan
through parched lips
I can hear Him say
"My child I love you"
"Now can you say the same?"
 

hit me up with your thoughts,
and i will pass em on.
gracias.
scorpion49@oocities.com