A-kun: Okay, if you have any replies to make about this, send comments to: akun15@hotmail.com  And since I'm still messing around with my stories, I'll just have to summon some random friends to help me MST this.  Helper #1!

Tifa Lockheart: Huh?  Where am I- oh, hi A-kun.

A-kun: Hey, Tifa.  Okay, Helper #2!

Genma: What the hell?

A-kun: Genma, just get ready to MST.

Genma: Um, what do we do?

A-kun: We comment or make fun of the story.  Now, the final Helper!

Chu-Chu: Chu!

A-kun: Great to see you, Chu-Chu.  For those who don't quite know any of these characters, Tifa Lockheart is from Final Fantasy 7, Genma Saotome is from Ranma 1/2 and Chu-Chu here is from Revolutionary Girl Utena!  I claim no ownership over the story we're MSTing or these characters.  And remember, I belong to Kelloggs.

Tifa: How did THAT happen?

A-kun: TharzZzDunN sold me for some quick cash and the rights to Jupiter (the planet, not the senshi, yet).

>Date: Mon, 30 Nov 1998 11:21:57 -0900 (AKST)
>From: Myrriden 
>Subject: [ffml][fanfic][ff7]Such a Change

Genma: [John Cleese] And now, for something completely different.

>  This is the first part of an idea I'm currently working on.  The next
>part will be an attachment in HTML so that the italics and other nifty
>little changes come through.

All (save Chu-Chu): [blink] [o_o] Huh?

>  Basically this came to me as an idea of 'what if' Vincent didn't get
>shot by Hojo?  What if he killed Hojo that early, and decided to raise
>Sephiroth?

A-kun: Then why didn't he do it SOONER?

>  I'm probably going tack on a few more short chapters like this before I
>quit, because I heart simply isn't in FF7 stories.  If, however, someone
>is willing to finish it in the guidelines I will set, then they're welcome
>to.
>  This is rather rough, so take heed!

Chu-Chu: Chu-chu chu chu chu chu chu chu-chu chu!

	[The others burst out laughing.]

>---------------
>Final Fantasy VII; Such a change

Tifa: You know, I look at that title and I keep waiting for Myrriden to finish it.

>By myrriden
>--------------
>Chapter 1
>
>	The light flared in his eyes, making him blink. "Lucrecia?" 

Genma: Bless you.

Tifa: [Bapping Genma] That's her NAME.

Genma: Oh!  Sorry.

>	"Right here," she whispered, kissing his cheek. He held her close.
>"Well, now, Vincent! This tells me something I'd rather hear from those
>lovely lips of yours." 

Chu-Chu: Chu-chu chu-chu-chu chuuu!

Tifa: [lightly bapping Chu-Chu] Get your head out of the gutter, Chu-Chu.

>	"I love you, woman," he grunted. "Will you be mine?" 

A-kun: That sounds more like Cid talking, not Vincent.

>	"Always and forever." she broke the embrace, and bounced off the
>bed.

Genma: Boingy-boingy-boingy!

> "I have to get to the lab early, Vincent. Hojo came up with another
>experiment from Professor Gast's work. He asked me to help him." 

A-kun: [Lucrecia checking her shotgun] And I'ma aimin' 'o finish this little sure-aid.

>	"Alright." Vincent too, slid out of bed, grabbing his blue pants.

[Suddenly the doorknob starts rattling.  Vincent in a panic, leaps out of the window as Lucrecia tosses on a pair of underwear and a shirt.  Hojo enters.]

Tifa: [Lucrecia] Hojo!  You scared me!

Genma: [Hojo] Why are you wearing Taz Boxers and a Turk shirt?

Tifa: [Lucrecia] Oh, I was feeling masculine today...

Chu-Chu: [crossing his arms] CHUUUU chu chu-chu chu?

Tifa: How is it that we can understand Chu-Chu?

	[A-kun shrugs.]

>"Mary asked me to train some of the new Turk recruits. She doesn't have
>much faith in that young fool Tseng. It's about time, too.

A-kun: Yeah!  She shouldn't have faith in ANYONE!!

> He's still
>searching for Gast and that Ancient." 

Genma: [Vincent] That loser couldn't find Gast if he passed it!

Tifa: That's Proffessor GAST, not Professor GAS!

>	Lucrecia sighed, "Why don't they forget about them? We have enough
>information from Gast's work.

Chu-Chu: [Number 5] Chu chu-chu.

Tifa: I wonder how many people saw the movie "Short Circuit".

> What more can we learn from those poor
>souls?" 

A-kun: [Lucrecia] Come on, let's stop picking on my co-workers!  Hojo may be completely unfit to do anything. scientific or otherwise, but let's at least stop running him up the flagpole.

>	Vincent snarled, "You mark my words, love. Hojo is searching for
>power, only. He doesn't care who it kills as long as it makes him famous.

Tifa: He did seem quite unproffessional in his research.  He also seemed to be just as surprised as everyone else when things happened.  Things moved, people breathed in and out, trees break wind, cats meow, dogs bark, Sephiroth becomes the son of Evil...

>He'd kill those two, or subject them to horrible tests. Personally I'd
>die." 
>	"Silly. I'm sure Hojo knows what he's doing. He's a sweetheart to
>the rest of us." 

Genma: This Hojo sounds like an extremely unbalanced person considering the two different sides that Lucrecia and Vincent are discussing.

Chu-Chu: Chu chu-chu.

>	"That's because he feels you are of his own species," Vincent
>growled. "You know how he feels about you and I!" 

Genma: [Vincent] Why, the man ate nine cans of beans and stood outside our room all of last night!  He's just not mentally balanced!

>	Lucrecia bent over, and gave him a kiss. "I'll be back soon,
>Vincent." 
>	Mary swept her black hair back behind the nape of her neck.

A-kun: WHOA!  She was in the room TOO!?

> "Well,
>here are the new recruites. Killjoy Rude, Adrianna Morians, Bill Archer,
>and 'Slim' James Hoople." 

Tifa: Killjoy?!  [Tifa begins snickering, then bursts out laughing.]

Rude: [enters] ............. It's not funny. [leaves]

Chu-Chu: Chu-chu-chu chu chu, chu?

Genma: Yeah, what _is_ the deal, Tifa?

A-kun: Even I'm mystified.

>	"Damn, Mary," Vincent groaned. "They're a bunch of kids! Hey..."
>he pointed at Rude, "How old are you?" 

A-kun: [Rude] ...........................................................................

Rude: [enters] ....... that's not funny either.

Genma: So, how do we know he's not just muttering under his breath?

>	"23, sir. he replied. 
>	"What weapons training do you have?" 
>	"Extensive training in all materia types, weapon drills in
>projectile weapons." 

A-kun: Unusual, considering he uses a boxing style.

>	Vincent glanced at his registry, "You have a child?" 

A-kun and Tifa: [O_O] HE HAS A KID?!!?

Genma: Why is this surprising?

Tifa: Well, I guess we really don't know all that much about the Turks, but... well, the way he and Reno usually talk... okay, Reno more that Rude, well, you just don't get the picture of a married man!

>	"Yes, sir. I'm training him to join Soldier." 

Genma: What's the difference between the Soldiers and Turks?

Tifa: First of all, that's SOLDIER.  Secondly, there are four divisions of fighters in Shinra.  The Mecha or automated defenses, the ordinary fighters, the Turks (who are like elite spies/martial artists) and SOLDIERs who are humans who have been injected with Jenova's Cells and then exposed to Mako Energy.

>	"Good for him." Mary interupted, "Anyway, my young friends, you're
>about to try and join the Turks, a _very_ exclusive company working for
>Shinra as the 'protectors'.

A-kun: And spies and thieves and backstabbers and killers and... need I go on?

> As a norm, we are the best Shinra have to
>offer. You'll all be trained and tested for some period, maybe even coming
>with us at times. 

A-kun: Note, that last sentence feels wrong.  Maybe "Maybe even joining us on missions occasionally."  Otherwise, the hentais will laugh at that line.

>	'But the Turks only employ four at a time, so only one to two of
>you will be able to join. We'll be waiting for Korrie to arrive. You will
>adress the three of us as sir, or ma'am respectivly. Anything to say,
>Valentine?" 
>	"Of course," he grunted. "Listen to her kids.

TharzZzDunN: Listen to her kids?!  Dammit all, I knew this company was being run by a bunch of full-diapered snotnosed cry babies!!  Now let's go burn Microsoft down to the ground!!  [Joins a horde of disgruntled small business owners who set off with torches and pitchforks, to kill Dr. FrankenGates '98.]

> The rest of us
>Turks, except possibly Tseng, will probably go easier on you than her. She
>lost her maternal instinct a long time ago," Mary flashed a cruel smile,

A-kun: [Bill Archer] Yes, sir.  Wetting 'em now.

>"But I'm a real sweetheart." The recruits looked at the imposing figure
>dressed in the customary blue suit with something bordering on disbeleif.
>He looked even more cold than an iceberg, and twice as treacherous.
>Compared to him, a blood crazy doberman seemed a pleasant thought. "One
>more thing. None of us lie. We have no reason to.

Tifa: That's one of the things I liked about them.

> We tell you something,
>you had better listen and heed it. Other than that, we should get along
>beautifully." 

Tifa: Thanks!  Oh, you mean 'get along beautifully'.  Shoot.  And here I thought it was a compliment.

A-kun: I think you're beautiful.

Tifa: Yeah, you and half of the Hentai Kingdom.

A-kun: Actually, as prominent as your 'talents' are, I do actually care more about the fact that you A) know martial arts, B) have an independent spirit, C) are quite intelligent, and D) are really a good mix of tough and nice.

TharzZzDunN: Plus she's at least a nine on the 'Schwing-o-meter'!  Tent pole!

>	He turned his back, and ambled of.

Chu-Chu: Chu chu-chu chu-chu chu chu chu chu!

A-kun: Yeah, that should be 'ambled off.'

> Rude to the opportunity to ask
>Mary, "Ma'am, I may be speaking out of turn, but may I say something?" 
>	"Go ahead." 

Tifa: [Mary] You won't speak much otherwise.

>	"He scares me much more than anything I have ever seen." 
>	"Good." Mary smiled, giving the poor recruits the impression of a
>field full of rabid tigersharks. 

Genma: I know Tigersharks actually exist, but I can't help getting the image of some sort of weird cross between a cat and a shark.  meow-ROOOOOARRRRR!

>
>	Vincent stretched his arms, focusing all mental energies through
>the muscles, feeling them untense, eager for movement. 
>	Years ago, he had been the best hinra

Tifa: 'Shinra', not 'hinra'.

> had to offer, single
>handedly saving some idiotic pilot and his wife from a burning plane
>singlehandedly.

Chu: Chu chu chu.

A-kun: It's the author's version of them, Chu-chu.

> After several more feats that amazed Shinra, he was
>drafted into the Turks, and joined almost immediatly when one of the
>leaders died on mysterious circumstances. 

Genma: [Vincent, glancing left and right] Yeah, that's the ticket, yeah...

>	Vincent was charged for the murder, but several testimonies stated
>he never lied, and the true murderer was discovered, thanks to Vincent's
>own discovery. He joined immediatly, and set about making the Turks the
>most feared company on the planet,

Tifa: [;;^.^;;] Anooooo, the Turks are a group, not a company.

> easily overcoming the newly emerging
>Soldier corps, people showered with Mako energy. 

Tifa: [;;;^.^;;;] Not to nitpick, but SOLDIER is always capitalized.

>	He'd been hard put as leader of the Turks until Mary and Korrie,
>two friends from his old days, joined. Korrie had been his old girlfriend,
>but after a marriage to another man and three kids, all of whom but one
>died, she was ready

A-kun: [;;;;O_O;;;;] to admit that Vincent wasn't going to give up, apparently....

Tifa: [sweating profusely] Vincent seemed rather cold, but I never expected THAT!

Genma: Hmmm, perhaps if the Author put in some more detail about what actually happen to said family.

> for a new career. Mary joined simply because Vincent
>was a legend in her hometown, and she was determined to become just as
>famous as him. 

Genma: And boy, did she earn the name 'Queen of Blowj-'

A-kun: Genma, kids might be reading.

Genma: ... uh, ahem, I bet she earned it in a respectable manner.

>	Korrie took time off to care for her son, but Mary stayed by his
>side, making overtures of friendship. The truth of the matter was, Vincent
>absolutely scared her. She knew nothing could stop him if one day he
>decided to kill her. 

All (save Chu-Chu): [;;;;;;;^.^;;;;;;;] Anooooo....

A-kun: Is it the other way around or what?

Genma: Did you stupidly promise that your son would grow up to be a man among men, then dragged him off to a cursed training ground in China too?

>	Then Korrie recruited Tseng, a man who knew almost nothing of war,
>but learned quickly. He and Vincent disliked each other due to Tseng's
>lust for power, but recent years had tempered his wanting into a
>simplistic desire to be the best at his job. He knew he could never
>replace Vincent, who was just too good. 

A-kun: ..... I know I should making a comment because that paragraph seems a bit disjointed somehow.

>	Vincent never liked killing. He did it simply because it was his
>job, but he took no pleasure. That was the simple reason Mary and Tseng
>never gained his friendship. They enjoyed their work, even the killing.

A-kun: [raising his bloody scythe] Of course, why do a job if you don't like it?  Unless it's a temp job.

>Korrie just considered it a way to pay bills, and as she had no intrest in
>him anymore, he was willing to become her friend.

Genma: Um.... couldn't you just become a doctor or something?

Tifa: Maybe it's all she's good at.

> She shared her worries
>and secrets with him, and he always gave excellent advice. 
>	But he scared her. Vincent was so cold, always so cold and
>distant.

Tifa: Actually, from what he told us of his past, I got the impression he was more emotional then he was when we were adventuring.

> When you spoke, he gave you the feeling your words were being
>anylyzed and memorized for future use.

Chu-Chu: Chu chu, chu-chu-chu chu-chu chu chu chu-chu chu chu-chu-chu.

Tifa: [bapping Chu-Chu] I thought I told you to keep your mind out of the gutter.

> But she cared about him, and
>trusted him absolutely. 

Genma: [evil voice] Fool, BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAA!

Tifa: Genma, you do that too well.

>	A sudden snap of his wrist against the wooden dummy shattered it.

Tifa: [Vincent] AAAAAAAAAAAAAAIIIIIIIIIIIEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!

>Sighing, Vincent set up another, wanting to return to his memories. 

Tifa: [Vincent] Dammit, I wish I had listened to my mom when she told me that milk built strong bones.  Now, even Dan Hibiki could kick my ass!

Genma: So, he's set up another wrist?  The hell?

A-kun: Ah, the Frankenstein approach to restoring limbs.

>	Everybody was so scared of him.

Genma: BOOGA-BOOGA-BOOGA!

> Always around people frightened by
>his coldness.

A-kun: [Vincent] I'm cold?  Maybe if I put down these buckets of Dry Ice....

> It really wasn't his fault.

Tifa: [Ryouga Hibiki] RANMA!!!  THIS IS ALL YOUR FAULT!!!

Genma: You've seen Ranma 1/2?

Tifa: Are you kidding?  We have the complete manga series, both movies, all the OVAs and the first TV season in every room in the Highwind.

> He had emotions, and felt
>empathy for Korrie's problems. For this reason only did he try to help
>her. 

Tifa: [Vincent] Yeah, otherwise, I just couldn't stand that [normal] oh, wait, Korrie isn't Scarlet.

>	Then she introduced him to Lucrecia, the most beautiful woman he
>had ever seen.

Genma: Once he managed to get that turkey off her head...

> Her soul, unlike other people, was so pure.

A-kun: [Vincent] Compared to the scum that's on this planet, Lucrecia is the Goddess of Purity.

> Clean of the
>influence of the outside world. From the start, Vincent loved her. 

Genma: Even though she was confused on the concept of a pen and paper.

>	Her eyes, a glorious green that shined with a energy of pure
>goodness, of the planets holiness.

Tifa: HEY!  That's Aeris's schtick!

> She walked with complete grace, her
>stiff Shinra design smock seeming to come alive under its own power to
>carress her. 

Genma: [Vincent] After it nearly strangled me to death for the ninth time, I had to shoot the damn thing.

>	It was not long that she submitted to his charms, perhaps seeing
>how lonely he was. She was never scared of him. Never afraid he might snap
>and kill her. Never afraid. She was his dream. 

A-kun: [Vincent] She was also more naive than Mihoshi, Gourry, Amelia, Ryouga, Ranma and Kasumi combined.  But at the sex was _FANTASTIC_!!!

>	"Hey, man." A voice interupted his thoughts, "Sir, I mean. Sorry
>'bout that. Dude, do you like know martial arts and all that?" Vincent
>turned to see 'Slim' standing in the doorway.

Genma: [Slim] HOOOOOOCCCKKKKK, P-TOOIE!

Tifa: [Slim] You know them Mar-shi Arts?

A-kun: [Boomhower, from King of the Hill] Thatding-dangole'internetislikeding-dangole'clickclickclickclickandnakedchickseverywhereman.

> "I'm asking 'cause I'm from
>Wutai. My poppa taught me martial arts when I was a kid, y'know. My bro
>took to it more, but he's destined to be the leader or some shit o' Wutai. 
>	'Poppa wern't to pleased when I joined Shinra, but he didn't argue
>much wit' me. But, do ya know martial arts?" 

Tifa: [Slim] Yeah, what wit' dat ding-dang ole' war goin' on between Wutai and the heartless, blood-sucking Shinra, I thought it would do the family some good to go off and join the Turks, 'cause they're so upright and not affliated with Shinra, y'know?

>	Vincent nodded, "I've studied it." 
>	"Wanna spar?" 

A-kun: No discussion of what kind of martial arts, the forms of weapons and such, they just go at it, huh?

Tifa: [sarcastically] Of course.  It all depends on what belt you made.

Chu-Chu: Chu, chu chu chu-chu chu chu-chu-chu.

>
>	Rude smiled at the picture of his son, Reno leaned on his
>shoulder. "Man. Your kid's cute. Think he'll be bald like you?" 
>	"Hmm. I don't know. My dad says baldness is hereditary, and I lost
>all my hair when I was seven. Maybe." 
>	"Hah. My kid's got this bright red-brown hair. Musta got it from
>his mom." Reno pointed at his dark brown locks in emphasis. "How 'bout
>you, Morians? Archer?" 

A-kun: [O_O] Now Reno's gotta a kid?!

Tifa: [;;;;^_^;;;;] I'm sure his dirty slacker look appeals to someone.

A-kun: But he can't be more than 24 when the game starts!  Not to mention he and Rude are always on duty, when would they have the chance to get married?!

Genma: I hate to say this, being a man who has never cheated on my wife despite my shady dealings concerning my son, but they've probably had more than a few run-ins with prostitutes.

>	"I don't have any children, Reno." Archer smiled, "Though I have a
>girl I plan to have a future with."
>	"Shaddup, Archer," Adrianna giggled as his hand slid up her leg.
>"Turks can't date each other."
>	"Where does it say that," Archer asked.

Tifa: [holding up a Turks Manual] Nowhere.

A-kun: How'd you get that?

Tifa: I asked Elena for one back in her naive days and she just gave to me.

A-kun: And what do you mean by 'Back in her naive days'.  I thought she was still kind of naive up to the end.

>	"Good God, Slim! What happened?"

A-kun: [Slim] What *HIC* does it look like?

Tifa: [Archer] It looks like you just spent the whole night at a biker bar, insulting everyone who passed.

A-kun: [Slim] Then that's what I *HIC* did. *THUD*

>	Everyone turned at Reno's statement to see Slim standing against
>the door, grin still present, but faded amidst the bruises. His arm was in
>a splint, and a tattered bandanna held his leg straight. 
>	"Damn, guys," Slim grinned, "Never ask Valentine for a fight.
>He'll kick ya ass. Then I was stupid enough to ask him to train me a bit
>in off time." 

Tifa: What are you guys talking about?  He and I sparred and I kicked his ass.

A-kun: Did you use a Limit Break?

Tifa: Just 'Dolphin Blow' and 'Final Heaven'.

A-kun: Tifa-chan, that would stomp more fighters.

>	"He beat the shit out of you?" 
>	"Over-estimated me," Slim corrected. "'Cause I stood up so well in
>the fight. But that was the level o' my endurance. Once he started to
>train me, I collapsed, and sprained my knee. Lucky he had an Elixer on
>hand." 

Genma: I've played enough video games to know that's spelled 'Elixir'.  And that they restore Magic Points, not Hit Points.

Tifa: Yeah, that's like bandaging a broken pinky before taking care of a grievious wound.

Chu-Chu: Chu!

>	"Man," Reno whistled. 
>	"Damn straight," Rude blinked. "That Valentine fella gives me the
>creeps. He's so scary...and cold! He reminds me of a vampire or 
>something." 
>	"Or something," Adrianna shuddered. 

Genma: Or etc.

Tifa: Or other.

A-kun: Or Miscellanious.

Chu-chu: Chu chu-chu-chu.

>	Slim grinned, "Oh well." 

Tifa: At least he has a good attitude about it.

>
>	Vincent laid full on the bed,

A-kun: How about 'spread-eagle' or 'laid back'.  'laid full' gives me a perverted thought.

> a small smug smile spread across his
>face. Lucrecia was due anytime now. The wine was ready, the ring shined,
>the minister locked up, a bit angry, but ready to tie Vincent's and
>Lucrecia's knot. 

Genma: [Minister] MMMMMM-mmm-m-m-mmmm-mmmm-mmmmm-mmmmmmmmmmmm mmmm mmmm mm mmmmmmmm mmmm m m m!

A-kun: [Vincent] No.

Genma: [Minister] MM MMMM MMMMMM MMMMMMMMMMM!!

A-kun: [Vincent] That's quite a mouth you've got, Father.

>	In fact, he smiled as he heard the door open and close softly,
>there she was. 

A-kun: [Vincent] GYAAAH!  Don't do that!

Chu-chu: Chu chu chu?

Genma: I agree, Chu-chu, where was she?

>	Lucrecia paused at the doorway, "Vincent?" 
>	Her voice was so sad. What happened? "Yes, my love?" 
>	"I need to talk to you." Instantly he was off the bed, holding her
>hands. 

Tifa: [Lucrecia] DON'T _DO_ THAT!

>	"What is it? Are you hurt?" 
>	"No," she smiled weakly. "I'm fine, Vincent. But...I have news for
>you...you won't like, I'm sure of it." 
>	"What is it?" 

Tifa: [Lucrecia] Well, it seems those constant wedgies have been making Hojo stronger and, well, I'm not sure I'm doing enough damage.  Could you please help us?

>	"I'm pregnant," she whispered. 
>	He reared back, surprised, but smiled fondly, "Why would I..." 
>	"It isn't yours, Vincent. I...didn't cheat on you...it's an
>experiment." 

Genma: So, you cheated on him for an experiment.

>	He sat on the bed. 
>	"Hojo...said that I was the only one...

Tifa: And she didn't even think that maybe they should get a volunteer?

>he discovered Jenova cells
>made people stronger. He said he needed someone intellegent and strong
>enough to bare the child...I accepted it, Vincent. I need to do this
>Vincent...if it works...the strongest child..." her eyes were filled with
>tears. "I'm sorry...I should have asked, but I was so excited! The
>chance..." 

Chu-chu: Chuuuu, chu chu-chu-chu chu-chu chu-chu?

Tifa: You're right Chu-chu, I don't see her as a power-hungry woman.  Even for a strong kid, most women would usually prefer having their kid with a mentally stable person.  Not to mention usually having the kid's father be someone they actually like.

>	"I..." 
>	She collapsed in a chair, "I didn't realize until it was to late
>what it would do to you, Vincent. I was so greedy, I didn't think of you." 

Genma: Actually, why did it have to be so split-second?  Why not wait until you could talk it over with Vincent?

A-kun: In the original story, it made more sense because Lucrecia fell for Hojo, who was supposedly more mentally stable back then.  Vincent made a vow to let her be happy, so long as Hojo didn't do something outrageously dangerous.

>	This irked him, "Never, Lucrecia! Never could you be greedy. But
>the chance to be a mother was too strong." She was so surprised, she
>didn't see the tears on his down-turned face. "I...I love you, Lucrecia. I
>wouldn't stop you even if I could." 
>	"Vincent...I'm so sorry..." 
>	"Promise me, though, in nine months you will be mine, and mine
>alone." 
>	"I..." 
>	"Promise?" He looked at her, showing her the tears. 
>	"I...can't, Vincent! What about my child?" 

A-kun: Hojo may be nuts, but even he wouldn't take on Vincent.

>	He turned away, "If it must be that way, Lucrecia...I won't be
>greedy...I can share you with someone who needs you. But...as long as you
>will be my wife...I will gladly accept whatever the fates throw at me." 
>	Lucrecia came over and hugged him tightly. "I...love you,
>Vincent..." 

Genma: Hey, it just occured to me.  What about the fact that Hojo hasn't even tested these cells on other creatures first?  And why a fellow scientist as the first test subject?  And why does Hojo have to be the father?  Surely there's a couple in Shinra who would be willing to have a child for the experiment.

A-kun: Like I said, in the original story, it made more sense.  But, not bad.

>		End of Chapter 1
>
>
>----
>-/\/\- out
>
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A-kun: Not bad, Myrriden, but it needs some refinement.  But, I would like to see how different the future of this world will be like.

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