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Once again ladies and gents this AN has been written some time after its completion so I forget much of my motivation. Again I feel there are some one liners I especially like, especially concerning good ol' Lawson, a favourite at the park but also again it was purple prosey and disjointed because I kept coming back to it during an exam period. Still, I think Dane's apathetic but slightly arrogant personality coming to for. The dialogue was flat in this chapter but I wanted to get across Sothis's madness, not the viciously sadistic kind, but a whimsical, can't hold the thread of a conversation alzeimers kind. Frankly when this was written it I still hand't put much thought into Sothis aside from the basics, and still haven't so if I want consistency I'd better get to it. More importanlty however here is the first cameo of the Cosmic senshi, Sailor Ruby in red, Sailor Epsilon in purple and Sailor Virtue in pink. Later I hope to bring them out more fully because I think only Epsilon, belonging to Syrie, was the only one to show off a bit. Oh well. Onto the next chapter!
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