___________ Group poem. ___________

Please, not green pea soup! Leave me now before I love your devil thoughts Abandon my head, as you did my heart Touch me in the night and leave me distrought Broken down to ashes in the dark Tomorrow we will arise anew A new flame in the smoldering ash Is there a new sensation in the black around me? bad thoughts, ghosts, skeletons in the closet Black and blue is how I left you Your ghost shimmers cold in the deep unlight Your image tells the tales of a horror Your plight naked as a jay bird lefet helpless in the night A sharp pain shoots through my spinal cord...
white pain feels like the brightest flame inside my tumor ridden brain I want to caress your broken soul To taste your pale blue lips, to feel your fettered whole Oblivion remains... My only refuge from you Shattered as the innocence of a child, young and abused Never to be whole again Live on for tomorrow, as the past is soiled, and the future uncertain, you will learn

(Shit stinks from the fettered minds of the oblivious remains of the dead refuge shattered and abused by the tumorrow ridden spinal whole)


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