The Place 2 Be

THE SEQUENCING OF SHAKESPEARE’S SONNETS

"Let him show his skill in the construction."
William Shakespeare - "Cymbeline"

In writing the plays, Shakespeare obviously considered the dramatic devices he should incorporate to optimise their dramatic effect and entertainment value. The structure of the plays played a large part in their success as a simple word-dump and wheeling in and out of characters do not a successful play make. Light and shade, soliloquies, fighting scenes, romantic moments, periods of light and comic relief and musical interludes all required effective placement to provide a dramatic experience that would pull the crowds in. At a higher level, the mix of comedies, histories and tragedies all presented greater consideration of audience entertainment.

Within the sonnets, their structure was a key component of their success. Whilst a sonnet via its content may be essentially celebrating the beauty of the subject, the way the sonnet was structured was a key factor in how those sentiments are conveyed. First, the sonnet by definition, must have 14 lines. Each of those lines must have 10 syllables. Those 10 syllables must be iambic pentameter giving rhythm and pace to the line. The 14 lines must comprise 3 quatrains and one ending couplet in an ababcdcdefefgg rhyme scheme. The sonnet typically pauses for thought at the end of the second quatrain and proceeds through a resolution in the third quatrain and a conclusion in the final couplet. The numbers in a sonnet, indeed what Shakespeare called his "eternal" and "gentle numbers" are evidently important.

The word Nature appears in 14 sonnets: 4, 11, 18, 20, 60, 67, 68, 84, 94, 109, 111, 122, 126, 127.

The words Rose/Roses/Rosy (a potential pun on the young man's name of Wriothesley, both in spelling and pronunciation) appear 14 times in the sonnets: 1, 35, 54 x 3, 67 x 2, 95, 98, 99, 109, 116, 130 x 2.

The word sun that the young man is likened to appears 14 times in the sonnets: 21, 24, 25, 33 x 3, 35, 49, 59, 73, 76, 130, 132, 148.

The author's name, Will, in capitalised form hence denoting a person's name also appears exactly 14 times in the sonnets: 2, 5, 41, 135 x 7, 136 x 3, 143.

Hence, the number 14 equating to the 14 lines in a sonnet appears to be echoed throughout the sonnets for subjects and metaphors of significance.

But what of the sequence of Shakespeare's 154 sonnets. Is there any greater super-structure or internal structures to the series that are worthy of note, or are they just a haphazard collection of a selection of sonnets that just happen to number 154?

SONNETS 1-126

Sonnets 1-126 are arguably addressed to the same addressee, a young man whom the poet may have befriended after a formal commission that resulted in sonnets 1-17 being written. Sonnet 126 is clearly the end point of the series for 4 main reasons of content and structure:

This series of 126 sonnets liken the male subject to the sun: "And scarcely greet me with that sun, thine eye", and encourages him to sire a son, as in sonnet 7: "Unlooked on diest unless thou get a son". It was typical to classify the sun as male. Conversely, it was typical to classify the moon as female to the point where Queen Elizabeth I was referred to as the moon goddess. There appears to be two over-riding major sonnet series here: the male 1-126 series, principally addressed to the young man likened to the sun and the female 127-154 series, principally addressed to the dark lady and other females, e.g. Anne Hathaway in sonnet 145. Throughout Shakespeare, balance is represented through black/white, hot/cold, night/day, rich/poor, noble/common, etc., and that Shakespearean trait appears to be represented again here in sun/moon and male/female. There is also good evidence in the sonnets to believe that Shakespeare sees himself as earth in this triumvirate, as in sonnet 146's: "Poor soul, the centre of my sinful earth".
SONNET 5

Sonnet 5 has the line "A liquid prisoner pent in walls of glass". Whilst in this context pent means "confined", pente is Greek for "five", hence pentatonic, pentagram, pentagon, etc.

Coincidence, or does this sonnet's positioning at number 5 deliberately correlate with this use of a word that also means 5? And the word pent is in line 10: 2 x 5.

SONNET 7

Sonnet 7 compares the Young Man's life to the progress of the sun in the course of a day. It tells of the sun rising in the "orient" in the first line and the Young Man dying like the setting sun in the final line, unless he (punningly) sires a sun/son, in a common reference to the sun's qualities of rebirth the following day. The sonnet explicitly refers to the day in: "Like feeble age he reeleth from the day".

With 7 days in a week, perhaps also alluding to the 7 days of creation (including God resting on the seventh day), this day-long theme positioned at Sonnet 7 may be deliberate. Perhaps also a reference to Sunday.

SONNETS 126-154

As mentioned above, series 1-126 is addressed to a male and can be termed the sun series. Conversely, this series, 127-154 is addressed to females, principally the dark lady, and can be termed the moon series. As though to enforce this there are precisely 28 sonnets in this series that correlates with the 28 days of the lunar cycle, and the female menstruation period.
SONNET 128
Sonnet 128 is the only other sonnet in the series (the other being Sonnet 8) that is specifically centred on the theme of music, describing the female subject playing a harpsichord or virginal. With 8 notes in the standard diatonic octave, i.e. the white keys on any keyboard instrument, and 12 notes in the standard chromatic octave, i.e. the white and black keys on any keyboard instrument, this sonnet is surely deliberately placed at position 128. What is particularly striking is that this beautiful and gentle sonnet contrasts sharply with its predecessor, the first about the "mourning" Dark Lady, and its successor, the graphically lustful 129, which supports deliberate intent in its positioning and numbering.
SONNET 133
This sonnet contains the line: "A torment thrice threefold thus to be crossed" which is numerically represented by 133: 1 (the singular torment), 3 (thrice) and 3 (threefold). Fitting for this sonnet's number: 133.
SONNETS 135 & 145
Sonnets 135 & 145 are both playful punning sonnets. Sonnet 135 puns extensively on the author's first name "Will" a suitably perfect 14 times in a 14-line sonnet and alludes to the poet's surname via the word vex, Latin for to shake. This is a name sonnet clearly naming "Will Shake.", William Shakespeare.

Sonnet 145 puns on the poet's wife's first name and maiden name particularly in the 2-line closing couplet: "'I hate' from hate away she threw" punning on Hathaway, and immediately after that "And saved my life" punning on "Anne saved my life".
This is a name sonnet clearly naming "And Hate away", Anne Hathaway.

The numbering of these two name sonnets as 135 & 145 is distinctive, uniform and attracts attention. The two characters share, via marriage, the same last name of Shakespeare, and these two sonnets' numbers share the same last digit of 5 that resembles an S. The 3 in 135 resembles a W on its side and the 1 in 135 is printed as an I providing this name sonnet with its own monogram of "I, WS" (I, William Shakespeare) via the numbers 135. And the 4 in 145 resembles an A providing this sonnet with its own monogram of "I, AS" (I, Anne Shakespeare) via the numbers 145.

Nowadays people do this all the time on vehicle registration plates using digits in place of letters to playfully recreate their initials, names or words, e.g. N16 DVS for Nigel Davies, J3 NNY for Jenny or S4 LSA for a Salsa dance instructor. Numbers 35 and 45 were unsuitable as the 1-126 series is addressed to the Young Man whilst the 127-154 series is addressed to women including the Dark Lady and Anne.

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n the very next sonnet, 136, which is directly linked to 135 as another Will-punning sonnet, the poet tells us that "Among a number one is reckoned none" so following his direction we should disregard the 1s altogether leaving these two sonnets, 135 and 145, with monograms of WS and AS. And in the very next line of Sonnet 136 he says "Then in the number let me pass untold" as if referring to the significance of the previous sonnet's specific numbering and his identity in it, especially after dropping the 1, compared to 136's.

In these playful punning sonnets Shakespeare seems to be winking at us by playing with the digits in this way to give these sonnets their own monograms. On its own, 135 may have appeared fortuitous, but with this unique pair of name sonnets naming both William Shakespeare and his wife, their positioning appears to be deliberate to exploit their number-punning potential.
SONNET 144
Sonnet 144 speaks of the battle between 2 spirits, the first an angel and the second a devil: "Two loves I have, of comfort and despair, Which like two spirits do suggest me still...". In alchemy, there are 4 spirits: Quicksilver, Orpiment, Sal-Ammoniac and Brimstone. Chaucer wrote of these in his Prologue to the Canon Yeoman's Tale:
"The foure spirites and the bodies sevene,
By ordre, as ofte I herde my lord hem nevene.
The firste spirit quyksilver called is,
The seconde orpyment, the thridde, ywis,
Sal armonyak, and the ferthe brymstoon."

There are also 4 elemental spirits that rule over the 4 elements. The Fire spirits are Salamanders; the Water spirits Undines; the Air spirits Sylphs; and the Earth spirits Gnomes. Shakespeare was obviously aware of these: Falstaff, for example, calls Bardolph's nose "a burning lamp," "a salamander," and the drink that made such "a fiery meteor" he calls "fire.": "I have maintained that salamander of yours with fire any time this two-and-thirty years."- 1 Henry IV, iv, 3.
Given the singular speaker of this sonnet, the 2 characters of the angel and devil, both of them spirits with whom the number 4 is strongly associated, and sonnets 44 & 45's obvious references to the 4 elements, the numbering of this sonnet as 144 appears to reflect the speaker (1), the angel spirit (4) and the devil spirit (4).
SONNET 154
Sonnet 154 is, of course, the final sonnet in the series. This and its predecessor though are of a type and quality that make them somewhat incongruous as the series would not be diminished had these two been absent. The first 152 sonnets are unique to the author but 153 & 154 are reworkings of a well-worn Cupid theme. If they are not present through absolute merit, they seem to be present to deliberately achieve a series of 154.
But why 154? Other poets carefully planned how many sonnets were in their series, such as Drayton's Idea numbering a grand climacteric 63, Donne's La Corona numbering a climacteric 7, Wroth's A Crown of Sonnets dedicated to Love numbering a climacteric 14. As demonstrated above, this isn't a haphazard bunch of sonnets that could just happen to number 154. There must be good reason behind the manifest intelligence we've seen in the content, structure and numbering of these sonnets for them to number 154. So why 154?
These are 154 Shakespearean sonnets. A standard Shakespearean sonnet comprises 14 lines. Notably, when we divide that specific 154 by that specific 14 it yields a perfect 11. But what significance could 11 have? That was the age of Hamnet when he died, as well as the day in August on which he was buried. Elsewhere, Sidney's Astrophil and Stella, which evidently influenced the sonnet sequencing elsewhere, has 11 songs amongst its 108 sonnets. But these seem to be of no key significance and are critically outside of the sonnet series. Surely any significance that 11 could have must be internal to the series itself.
The number of sonnets divided by the number of sonnet lines that yields a perfectly divisible number is essentially a "sonnet key" which the author is using to signal the solution. And, when we turn to sonnet 11, there it is: "threescore year". The numerical solution that the author has constructed from the numbering of his own series of sonnets is: 1564. We can hardly expect the author to have written 1,564 sonnets to arrive at this key number so he has provided 154 and the missing 6 is pointed to there in Sonnet 11. And not just the digit 6 that we could arbitrarily position whereever we wished to yield 6154, 1654 or 1546. It is specifically 60 ("threescore") meaning it has to be positioned where its value in the answer is specifically 60: 1564. And to remove any doubt as to what the author means we are even given the unit of currency that he is talking about: these are not flowers nor angels, but years. We have specifically been given the year: 1564. The year of the author's birth - the sonnets "Showing their birth and where they did proceed".
And if we apply 60 to the numerator part of the sonnet key formula, for consistency we must also apply it to the denominator part of the same formula, and when we do that to 14 it yields 164, containing again the same significant year of the author's birth: 64. (How the clinching 500 is reasonably obtained (the "five hundred" of Sonnet 59?) currently evades me.) Whichever way it slices it leads us to the same conclusion. As well as even sonnet-key Sonnet 60 and birth-year Sonnet 64 themselves being distinctively personal Time sonnets, even when we add 60 to 14 it yields 74, the one sonnet in the series that speaks to the reader and explicitly tells us that the author's own life is woven into the sonnets' lines. And to remove any final doubt on Sonnet 74's significance, the individual digits of 74 again equal our sonnet key value: 11.
The author has indeed built a monument more lasting than "marble", "brass" or "hammered steel" that memorialises not his subject, but himself. He has created a monumental series of 154 "eternal numbers" with an unambiguous, internally consistent, perfect formula to reach the solution that he unequivocally signals. He has left his own fingerprint, a watermark, his unique signature, a personal irrefutable date-stamp of his year of birth to "shine more bright in these contents". Sonnet 55, the visually punning number that echoes "5hakespeare's 5onnets" doesn't describe the subject whom he never identifies - it describes Shakespeare.
"Shakespeare's Sonnets" were written by William Shakespeare of Stratford-upon-Avon, born 1564.
Sonnet 74
But be contented when that fell arrest
Without all bail shall carry me away.
My life hath in this line some interest,
Which for memorial still with thee shall stay.
When thou reviewest this, thou dost review
The very part was consecrate to thee.
The earth can have but earth, which is his due;
My spirit is thine, the better part of me.
So then thou hast but lost the dregs of life,
The prey of worms, my body being dead,
The coward conquest of a wretch's knife,
Too base of thee to be remembered.
 The worth of that is that which it contains,
 And that is this, and this with thee remains.

My attention has been brought to Alistair Fowler's Triumphal Forms by some of my readers which I have now at last obtained a copy of.  The book suggests the pyramidical pattern that the number series 1-153 can form as an influence for Shakespeare's sequencing of the sonnets and the positioning of certain key numbers in that pyramid, particularly the climacteric sonnets and 1-17 forming the base of the pyramid, as being of particular note.  In addition, the fact that the sum of all the numbers in the 1-17 series equal 153.

I have difficulty reconciling Shakespeare's choice of 154 sonnets with the perfect pyramid that 153 would offer, even if Sonnet 136 is discounted due to its line "Among a number one is reckoned none".  In fact, this line implies that Sonnet 1 should be discounted that would destroy sonnets 1-17 forming the base of the pyramid and the positioning of all subsequent sonnets' numbers.

However, the pyramidical qualities of the series 1-153 are certainly intriguing:

                                153                                
                              151   152                              
                            148   149   150                            
                          144   145   146   147                          
                        139   140   141   142   143                        
                      133   134   135   136   137   138                      
                    126   127   128   129   130   131   132                    
                  118   119   120   121   122   123   124   125                  
                109   110   111   112   113   114   115   116   117                
              99   100   101   102   103   104   105   106   107   108              
            88   89   90   91   92   93   94   95   96   97   98            
          76   77   78   79   80   81   82   83   84   85   86   87          
        63   64   65   66   67   68   69   70   71   72   73   74   75        
      49   50   51   52   53   54   55   56   57   58   59   60   61   62      
    34   35   36   37   38   39   40   41   42   43   44   45   46   47   48    
  18   19
20
21 
22
23
24
25   26   27   28   29   30   31   32   33  
1   2
3

5
6   7
8
9   10   11   12   13   14   15   16   17


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