ALL GOD’S CHILDREN

 

the thirty-fifth tale

 

EMBERS OF HALA

Part One: The Day of Change

 

written by Mark Bousquet

 

NECROPOLIS

Throne Room of Thanos

EARTH STANDARD YEAR 2201 / January

 

Thanos, the Mad Titan, allowed himself the pleasure of a smile.

 

At long last, the end of the Eternal War was about to begin.

 

 

 

ASGARD

The Residence of Kovar the Accuser, Kree Ambassador to the Council

 

Kovar held a palm-sized communication device in his hand, starting at the words that had come to him nearly eight hours past.  He couldn’t believe what he was reading, but couldn’t dare disbelieve the words, either.

 

THE DAY OF CHANGE HAS ARRIVED.  WHO’S SIDE ARE YOU ON?

 

 

 

HALA

Garbage Management Facility

 

In-than inhaled deeply on the cigarette in his mouth, then dropped it to the ground, crushing it beneath his boot, “Gotta get moving.”

 

He talked to himself, as he always did, as he always had, a strange boy unfit for the military academy, no home to return to, no hope to look forward to.  There weren’t many occupations one could hold on Hala that weren’t tied into the military, but even the Kree realized that there were those who would serve no purpose inside the armed services and made certain that there were things those few could do that would serve the empire’s needs.

 

Taking out the garbage happened to be one of them.  Not that the military couldn’t do it; not that the military didn’t still do it when they had enough privates that needed punishment, but as the Eternal War raged ever longer, the military had become stretched further and further across the Everything, allowing for “unranked” – the Kree slang for those not involved in the military – to have more to do on homeworld.

 

In-than didn’t mind.  He could care less about the Kree military and their desperate need to come up with newer and better ways to kill people.  He liked to think of himself as an artist; even though he knew he wasn’t very good, there were so few artists of any kind wanted by the empire that he could claim himself as such without upsetting anyone.

 

Helped with the academy women, too, who were looking for something other than a jarhead, ego-driven private to spend a night with every now and then.

 

Pulling on his thick work gloves, the pink-skinned young man moved across an open area towards the latest garbage drop when a sight above him caught his attention.

 

The sun was bright that morning, unusually bright for this time of year, and In-than had to shield his eyes to make out the objects that soared across his vision.

 

“What the hell?” he asked himself as the general alarm was sounded, his eyes straining to make sense of what he saw, then shuddered as his world was draped in darkness.  Tilting his head as far back as he could, he saw a vision that turned his blood to ice.

 

A Kree Interstellar Warship, the pride of the Kree’s Cosmosian Navy, had done something In-than thought it could never do, and certainly something it was never intended to do.

 

It had entered planetary atmosphere.

 

It was heading for the capital city.

 

It was firing.

 

 

 

ASGARD

THOR ODINSON HALL OF PEACE

 

Captain America, the Cosmic Protector, stood alone in the Communications Wing, watching images from the Allied Worlds play across screens.  The words of Nick Fury came back to him, haunting him as much today as they had the day his old friend had spoke them: “We lead lives of violence in a desperate search for peace.”

 

The Eternal War.

 

Nearly two entire centuries gone in the struggle to end Thanos’ Crusade to end all life.

 

And why?  To goad Captain Mar-Vell to rise from the dead and face him in final conflict.

 

Steve Rogers had long ago stopped worrying about why madmen caused the damage they did, concentrating instead on finding ways to stop them.  A heavy sigh escaped from his body; there were times when he felt like the very old man that he was.  He didn’t care if his body was as healthy today as it had been back in the 20th century, his psyche aged with every passing second.

 

Dani wasn’t helping.  Her scheme, plotted out with Balder, to draw Bruunhilde out into the open to face her in one-on-one combat angered Steve, in part because Dani had almost died and in part because he was kept out of the loop.

 

“You’re thinking of me,” a soft voice came from behind him.

 

“I am,” Steve replied, not turning around.  “You should be in bed resting.  The doctors-“

 

“The doctors have treated me,” Dani replied gently, walking silently across the floor to place a hand on her lovers’ back.  “What troubles you, Steve?”

 

“Everything.”

 

“Me?”

 

“Your ill-conceived plan.”

 

Dani rolled her eyes, “Am I going to get a lecture from the good Captain?”

 

“No,” Steve answered softly, shaking his head.  “But … nothing.  Never mind.”

 

Dani’s voice was barely a whisper, “I know you’re upset with me about Bruunhilde, but you were away and the opportunity was there.  I couldn’t risk sending out a transmission-“

 

“I know, I know,” Steve waved his hand, stepping away from Dani’s touch to move directly in front of a blank set of screens.  “Do you know the Kree haven’t reported anything all day?  Their government run news agency signed off last night and then never came back this morning.”

 

“It happens,” Dani answered, knowing that it was useless to force Steve to talk about anything he didn’t want to discuss.  “They do it at least a few times every half-Standard year.  Usually means there’s something going on there they don’t want anyone to know about.”

 

“But even then there’s something that goes out through one of the channels,” the Cosmic Protector answered, moving to a keypad to punch up a set of data.  “These are the public logs from Supremor Base and Shipyards 1 to 10.  No entries after Standard Time 20 Hours, 56 Minutes.  No ships coming in, none going out.”

 

“You think something is going on?”  Dani asked, her curiosity piqued.  “Hala is a strange place, Steve.  We’ve seen things like this before why you were away for those two years.  Of all the Allied Worlds, Hala is the most political and most likely to stay to themselves.  They do things all the time to keep us suspicious of them; it’s their way of showing they care.”

 

Captain America said nothing, wondering if Dani and Balder’s plot was making him see conspiracies everywhere.

 

 

 

SHIPYARD-9

Near Hala

 

Captain Ven-Soon stared, along with the rest of his crew, at the sight before him.  “By the devils!” he cried, the words escaping his mouth of their own volition.  He stood on the bridge of Shipyard-9, a Kree military post near in short range from Hala, one of ten such defense stations placed strategically around the Kree homeworld.

 

A Warship, the KE-RETRIBUTION, for some unknown and unimaginable reason, was dropping into Hala’s atmosphere.

 

“Shipyard-9, this is Shipyard-7, what the hell is going on?”

 

The words slapped Ven-Soon hard.  Panic was setting in.  The Shipyards, including the crews that helmed them, were defensive units that had gone too long without seeing battle.  Thanos had never attempted to launch an assault on Hala – indeed, had stayed away from direct assaults on all the Council’s homeworlds – and Ven-Soon had been one of many senior officiers who had been pressing the Kree Parliament to rotate troops out into the depths of space so that these crews had battle experience.  They had always been rebuffed.  Cost effectiveness was sited as tha main reason, though Ven-Soon didn’t see any budgetary concerns in the homes of Parliament members.

 

Now, with the panicked crews watching helplessly, it became clear to Ven-Soon that he had been correct.

 

Angrily, he snapped on the com-link at his station, “All Shipyards, this is Captain Ven-Soon of Shipyard-9!  Cease your weakening pleas for help!  You are Kree!  Shipyard-3, Retribution was docked with you for repairs.  What is the meaning of the Retribution’s actions?”

 

Silence.

 

“Shipyard-3!  This is Captain Ven-Soon!  Report!”

 

Silence.

 

“Captain Ven-Soon, this is Captain Un-Yar of Shipyard-2.  From your position on the opposite side of Hala, you cannot see what we, here, closer to homeworld, can.  Shipyard-3 does not respond because … it has been destroyed.”

 

“An entire Shipyard?” Ven-Soon asked, keeping his voice calm.

 

“Yes.”

 

“How?”

 

“The Retribution fired on it, Captain.  We have been searching for signs of life since the attack.”

 

Ven-Soon could feel the men around him stare at him with wider eyes.  “A Kree Interstellar Warship has fired upon one its own?  Why weren’t the other Shipyards informed of this blasphemy?”

 

“The Retribution has been jamming all signals in the area, Captain.  We even have reports, unconfirmed at this time, that they’ve been jammind deep-space transmissions for the past twelve to fifteen standard hours.  Only when it entered the atmosphere of Hala did the jamming cease.”

 

Ven-Soon had to ask the question, “But … why?  Why would the Retribution attack the Kree, her own people?”

 

The voice cracked over the com-link, “We … don’t know.  By the makers, we don’t know.  It just- no … by the makers, no!”

 

“What?” Ven-Soon snapped.  “Shrabnit, Captain!  What is it?”

 

“Gods help us, Ven-Soon.  They’re firing … on the capital.”

 

 

 

A TITAN SPACE-CRUISER

Outside Hala’s Orbit

 

“It is the waiting, I dislike most,” Ikaris announced to the Eternals before him.  “The waiting for the kill, the waiting for the Chaos that comes when blade strikes blade, each searching for the rich vein of blood.”

 

“For once, Ikaris, you and I are in complete agreement,” Bruunhilde, leader of the Angelux, announced from the opposite end of a platform inside their spacecraft’s main hangar.  A thousand Eternal warriors and Angelux war-maidens stood in military rows before them, awaiting the command to attack.  Ikaris and Bruunhilde stood on a platform at the front, addressing the troops that they would soon lead into battle.

 

“For decades now,” Ikaris continued, loving the feel of the leather armament that clothed him, “we have waited patiently for Thanos to place his pieces in proper alignment, striking on occasion, in small raiding parties, but kept from the glory of a battalion strike.  Today, that all changes!”

 

“Today,” Bruunhilde grinned, her red, ionic eyes blaring intensely, “we launch an assault on Hala!”

 

The warriors beneath them roared in approval.

 

“And when we are finished,” Ikaris pounded his fist onto the railing, “millions of Kree will be dead, and Hala itself will be unrecognizable from a burning pit of Hell!”

 

 

 

HALA

Parliament Building

 

Democracy was still new to Hala, and it had not taken long for people to see that a democracy was not the proper way to run the Kree Empire.  The Kree were military people, conditioned to look to a stable authority figure, but in the disappearance of the Supreme Intelligence back at the start of the Eternal War, chaos had reigned for many years, with assassinations and coups continually upsetting the balance of power as anyone near the throne with dreams of rule plotting to take illegally what they could not achieve otherwise.

 

Democracy, at least, provided some stability to an empire in desperate need of stability.

 

But as time wore on, as those in power became more and more entrenched, as the democracy began to take on the appearance of the military, the plotting had begun again.

 

The supreme ruler came from the Parliament – the public did not vote for their Emperor.  It was deemed to important a position to be left to the mass population.

 

General Ochken was the Emperor, at the moment, and he could feel his empire crumbling around him.

 

Looking out the window of his palace, he could see the Retribution on the horizon, a massive display of Kree engineering and military might that was not made for atmospheric travel.  What it wanted, no one knew.  Who was in charge, no one knew.  Why it was doing what it was doing, no one knew.

 

It was as if an entire crew of a Kree Interstellar Warship had suddenly gone rogue.

 

“Why aren’t we firing at the ship?” Ochken demanded.  “Entering the atmosphere of Hala is to be considered an act of war.”

 

“There’s nothing we can hit it with that will cause any damage, short of nuclear strikes,” an aide replied, fear blazing across his voice.  “And if we use nuclear strikes, we will be damning ourselves anyway!  The military feels it is best to not attack until we have to!  Until they give us reason!”

 

Ochken turned, glaring at the aide.  “Oh, is that what the military thinks?  Why am I not surprised?”

 

“Sir?” the aide asked, but Ochken had turned back to the window to watch the Retribution approach.

 

Just in time to see the Warship open fire.

 

 

 

ASGARD

THOR ODINSON HALL OF PEACE

 

“What the devil is the meaning of this?” Kovar the Accuser asked as he stormed into the Council’s assembly room.  “Who called this meeting?”

 

“I did,” Captain America announced, standing by his chair.  “I thank you for joining us, Kovar.  We did not want to start until you arrived, since this meeting is about the Kree.”

 

Kovar took a deep breath as he stomped angrily to his seat.  “Politics,” he mumbled, taking his place at the wooden table next to Ash’lin, the Shi’ar Ambassador. He glanced angrily around the room, noting the presence of Balder, Captain America, Moonstar and Ash’lin. “I see that Skrull 4 is still missing, even though we all know now he isn’t the traitor.”  Kovar shot a look to Dani and Balder.  “Any word from the Skrull Ambassador?” 

 

“No, and I am afraid that we cannot wait for him,” the Cosmic Protector said, trying to keep Kovar calm.

 

“What of the cyborg, Beta Ray Bill?” Kovar demanded.

 

Steve shot Balder a look, but the Asgardian King didn’t return the gaze.  Instead, he calmly answered Kovar’s question, knowing that the Accuser was attempting to side-step the question that hadn’t yet been asked by Captain America.  “You know that Ben-Vell and Eshir discovered the Olympian village inside Jotunheim, correct?” * Kovar nodded.  “Beta Ray Bill is investigating the discovery.”

 

*AGC 30: JONAS

 

“Alone?”

 

“He’s a big boy, Kovar,” Moonstar interjected, growing impatient.

 

“And the Earther?  Empire?” Kovar asked, ignoring the Valkyrie’s unspoken complaint.

 

“On a mission,” Balder announced, his voice staying calm.  “With the Orphans, investigating the Realms of Franklin.  We did not-”

 

“Well, then?” the Accuser asked, interrupting the King as he threw his palms up.  “What is it you wanted to see me about, America?  What Kree business do you need explained?”

 

Steve Rogers placed his palms on the table, as an image of a blank screen was holographed into the air between them.  “We would like to know why Hala has not transmitted anything since late last night.”

 

Kovar’s face twitched, “I don’t know what you’re talking about.”

 

“This,” Captain America said flatly, pointing at the image of the blank screen, “is the Alliance Channel feed, the communication link between Asgard and Hala that is always supposed to be open and clear for official use of the highest order.  It’s not working.  Why?”

 

“I told you,” Kovar grit his teeth, “that I don’t know what you’re talking about.”

 

“Ooh,” Ash’lin interjected, playing up her emotions to grate on Kovar.  “Isn’t this exciting?  The Kree are playing hide-and-seek with the Council and Kovar refuses to even acknowledge anything is going on.  For someone who claims to dislike politics, Ambassador, you sure do like to play the game.”

 

“Silence, woman,” Kovar snapped, his eyes locked onto Captain America’s.  “It is a deeply sacred, and private, religious ceremony taking place at Parliament,” he explained, trying not to rush through the explanation, his voice low and hard.  “A blackout has been placed into effect in order to-“

 

Ash’lin coughed, smiled, “He doesn’t know, either.”

 

“I said, Silence!” Kovar boomed, rising to his feet.

 

“Enough, Kovar,” King Balder said quietly.  “If there is a problem on Hala, it must be raised here.  The Kree are an important member of the Council, and we have a vested interest in-“

 

“I said it was a religious ceremony!” the Accuser thundered, slamming his fist onto the table.

 

Tensions across the room rose swiftly, but the vocalizations of their thoughts were held in their throat as the image of the Alliance Channel feed burst to life.

 

“No … he’s dead … dead … ” Kovar’s voice trailed off as the Council looked in disbelief at the image before them.

 

The Supreme Intelligence.

 

“I broadcast this to all intelligent worlds,” the Supreme Intelligence announced, its bulbous head grinning.  “But especially to those on Hala.  Your one true ruler, the Supreme Intelligence, has returned.

 

“And he is not happy.

 

“In my absence, you have constructed this effrontery to our very existence as Kree, a democracy!  I sit aboard the KE-Retribution, surrounded by its crew, a crew that Parliament will no doubt brand as traitors, but I, and all true Kree, will call heroes!

 

“Captain, on my command … open fire.”

 

The image of the Supreme Intelligence was replaced by an image of the Retribution inside Hala’s atmosphere, its monstrous size thundering slowly toward a shimmering city.

 

The Retribution opened fire.  The Attack on Hala had begun.

 

embers of hala to be continued …

“The Day of Change Has Arrived. Who’s Side Are You On?”

 

 

 

YGGDRASIL

comments to northern022@hotmail.com

 

After the two-issue plunge into the Realms of Franklin, we’re back on solid, good ol’ cosmic opera footing for this arc, as Thanos’ troops lead an assault on the Kree homeworld of Hala.  Two of the characters of this series that haven’t gotten the page-time they deserve have been Ash’lin and Kovar, and this arc should provide an insight into the Kree Ambassador’s mind.  Changes are coming for the Kree, and Kovar will be forced to decide just where it is he stands with the Empire.

 

Mark,
 
As ever, I enjoyed AGC #33-34.  It's always interesting to see writers play with the format of stories, especially in a genre that's usually so straightforward.  While some of your rhymes in #34 were real groaners ("Esh, I'm confused/And I look awfully funny/For you here's some news/There's a bright green bunny"), most were really very clever and good.  They were a hell of a lot better than I ever could have done in any case, and they fit the Seuss/Silverstein tone of the issue well.
 
#33 was a hoot as well, of course.  Doom's idea of torture for the girls was hilarious.  There really is nothing so frustrating as a cool toy without any batteries, is there?  Genius.
 
Would have liked to have some better idea of (a) how the kids got into the Realms of Franklin, and (b) what exactly happened when the Tribunal "closed them off".  I got the feeling you left this info out intentionally, either because you felt it needed to be left up to the reader's interpretation or you wanted to explain it at a later date, but it felt like a simple lack of description.
 
Anyway, looking forward to things getting serious next issue.  I love that title for the next issue.
 
Russ Anderson

 

Thanks for the letter, Russ.  Glad you liked the change-up in style for those issues; it was an interesting experiment to attempt.  With the poetry, I honestly just tried to sit back and let them rip, so I’m glad you thought there weren’t as many groaners as I did. ;-) 

 

In 33, I liked the idea of Doom’s torture being a “boy” thing, given that this was Franklin’s personal idea of torture, with Toomi being completely unimpressed.  At some point, in the distant future, if Marvel can keep their “grown up” line going, I think some writer is going to come along and write an incredibly mind-blowing series based around Franklin Richards’ power and the effects that has on reality.

 

As for the scenes with the Tribunal, I can understand your complaint, but yes, I did leave it out intentionally.  I thought those scenes didn’t add anything to the issues and I liked the idea of the reader being put into the same position as the characters inside the story, where the Tribunal wouldn’t spend time explaining himself to them any more than he wanted to, and the characters wouldn’t know exactly what and why the Tribunal did what he did.

 

Hope you liked the return to the serious stuff.  This should be a fun arc to write.

 

 

NEXT ISSUE: AGC 36: EMBERS OF HALA, PART TWO

 

-- Mark Bousquet …

20 October 2001

Northern Bear Productions