Spring Time

Sample I .

  Spring is the time to get outside and watch beautiful things . It is very interesting was the sun is very beautiful but the best the trees and  the green grass and the people works in plant trees and the flower is very beautiful and going  to the people  the journey . Mu'tah is very nice in spring and I like it in spring .

                                                                         

                                                                                Mu'tah school  for girls

Correction

   Spring is the time when people like going outside to watch beautiful scenes . Going outside is very interesting with the sun shining and the green trees . People  busy planting trees . people go in journeys and enjoy the flowers and beautiful things . Mu'tah is very nice in spring and I like it in spring .

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                                                                                       Medeen school for girls

Sample II.

    The spring is when everything is green , the trees and flowers . most animals  breed at this time so in our village saw many baby animal and we have fresh milk , butter , laban ( jameed) and many dairy products which many people in the village do .I like my village in spring with lots of flowers and green fields . In spring people felt happy and goes to journeys .

              

                                                                                            Khaldiah school for girls

Correction:

   Spring is the season when all the land is green because of the grass in every where . There are lots of green trees and flowers in spring . In spring most animals breed ,so you can see many young animals specially sheep and we have fresh milk , butter , and other dairy products and all is home made. I like my village with lots of flowers , and green fields with animals around . In spring people feel happy and fresh and they go in journeys to enjoy the beautiful scenes .

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                                                                              Mutah school for girls

Sample III.

    The spring in my village is very beautiful so we enjoyed to live in it when the spring come . the trees have green leaves and become more beautiful by the wonderfull flower .And we can see the grass cover the land . So we feel more comfortable in the spring .

                                                                           Mutah school for boys

 Correction :

    Spring in my village is very beautiful  ; that’s why we enjoy life in spring .Trees are covered with green leaves and become very beautiful with wonderful flowers everywhere. All the place  is covered by grass and we feel very happy and comfortable in spring.

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