Boldness
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SCENE 1 - CHARLES TOWN PORT
A pair of bright, stormy green eyes, in the shadows. A port,
where men are working, hauling sugar and tobacco from and
onto the ships. They seem powerful, alive, vibrant, straining
with sweat and the hot sun, laughing, husky, brawny, see Carl
Sandburg's Chicago. The well-dressed port officer, next to a
sign that says WELCOME TO CHARLES TOWN seems wispy, almost a
non-person.
We see the owner of the eyes, a young woman (and we do mean
young) named ANNE. She's hiding in the alley, observing
everything, visibly drunk on what she sees. An indistinct
shout, her head and her eyes dart to the left.
The OFFICER is turned from us, walking up to a small
schooner, waving and shouting. The crew are busy unloading
goods stamped SUGAR. One bag is tossed with a pile of other
bags, it notably lacks a seal of approval while the others
do.
The OFFICER shouts at the sailors, and they point to a
smallish man off to one side, hunched over a journal and
alternately writing and eyeing the bags getting thrown down
from the ship to port. His name is JAMES.
The OFFICER walks up to JAMES and lays a hand on JAMES'
shoulder, perhaps more roughly than required. JAMES turns and
looks at him.
The OFFICER glares down at him, and points to the lack of an
official seal on his bags. JAMES eyes the bags. ANNE watches
everything. JAMES looks up at the OFFICER, a head higher than
him. He closes his book, and takes a little pouch off his
belt and jangles it, the ring seeming to hang unnaturally in
the busy dock air.
The OFFICER scrunches his face, turns red...and puts out his
hand. The purse hangs in the air, suspended in neither hand,
before resting with a shuffle in the OFFICER's hand.
JAMES nods, looking serious. The OFFICER turns, looks down
the street at several WELL-DRESSED GENTLEMEN walking by and
talking. The OFFICER turns to JAMES and shouts and makes
angry gestures, and carries off one or two sacks of unsealed
sugar. The WELL-DRESSED GENTLEMEN look on and nod.
ANNE watches, and keeps staring at JAMES. He turns back to
his crew, shakes his fist, and they resume unloading the
schooner. He opens his book again and starts ticking off
sacks.
One sack...two sacks...three sacks of sugar. ANNE sets her
shoulders, fluffs up her hair, and emerges from the alleyway,
starts edging towards this man. The WELL-DRESSED GENTLEMEN
see her. One of them looks at her reproachfully. She does not
notice, continues advancing, her stride growing bolder now.
She's stopped by the GENTLEMAN, who lays a hand on her
shoulder. She looks up at him and her face, just now bright
and set, falls.
The GENTLEMAN gestures to his servants to take her left.
SCENE 2 - THE CORMAC ESTATE
Aspect-to-aspect. Slaves working in the fields, the sign
"CORMAC PLANTATION", law books, a stern-looking man. ANNE is
looking out the window as her father WILLIAM (the stern man)
lectures. We cannot hear him, she is not listening. His hand
slams to the table, and she turns to face his big Irish
physique. Despite the significant size difference, she seems
unperturbed. He looks tired and frustrated, and points left,
out of the room.
ANNE rises, turns to leave. Her father's palm slaps the desk
again. She rolls her eyes, turns back, and curtseys for him.
He nods approvingly, and she leaves the room. He slumps,
seeming weak for the first time, his head in his palm.
In the hallway, ANNE passes a portrait, clearly of her
mother. She's a plump woman, well dressed, but not a
noblewoman, not by a long shot. In the corner of the room,
inconspicuously, is a maid. ANNE eyes the maid, and then
winks and salutes her mother's portrait without any sense of
respect at all.
She makes her way to the door where a servant bars her way.
She looks up pleadingly at him but he shakes his head, no.
There's a knock behind him, and he turns and opens the door.
An older yet physically adept gentleman, Anne's TUTOR, stands
and smiles at her. She rolls her eyes, but comes with him to
the library. She passes her father, headed the other way.
WILLIAM passes the portrait of Anne's mother. He turns and
stares into it, looks like he's almost about to cry. He looks
through double doors into the dining room, at a spot on the
floor, and it only brings him closer to tears. He looks again
to Anne's mother, and sighs before going on.
ANNE's tutor drones on, and she, not hearing, reads a book
labeled "Goethe". On the page, she follows with her finger,
"Whatever you can do, or dream you can, begin it. Boldness
has genius, power, and magic in it. Begin it now."
She looks up, those eyes wander and seem to grow clear when
she sets them on the swords crossed on the wall.
Her TUTOR, clearly a wiser sort than her father, notices her
change of interest. His eyes flick toward the swords. She
motions with her head. He smirks, and nods.
SCENE 3 - THE GARDENS
The clash of blades. In a clearing formed by high hedges,
ANNE and her TUTOR duel. ANNE's style is quick,
temperamental, and laced with flair (twirling the blade,
twisting it, drumming her fingers on the grip). Her TUTOR is
more reserved, slower, preferring to make a quick counter
attack after one of ANNE's is too strong and not well-aimed
enough. They both score touches, and neither really has the
upper hand. The hedges and some other miscellaneous plants in
the garden are cut a bit, though, symbolism. This is clearly
a friendly, educational duel.
Until ANNE makes a sweep and takes off the top button of his
coat. He looks down, and looks up at her, shocked. She grins
and then quick as a flash takes off the second button. Her
tutor is visibly unsure whether to laugh or to yell, and she
take the opportunity to relieve him of a third and fourth
button in quick succession. He decides to laugh, and even
adds a polite clap after stowing his sword under his arm. She
bows obnoxiously and while doing so begins taking off his
buttons from the bottom.
Now that really is too much, and he resumes his blade. ANNE
pouts at him like she doesn't deserve anything for what was
only a little joke. He lifts one eyebrow at her. She lifts
both at him. Twice. Finally getting the picture, the TUTOR
takes a long look at ANNE, from bottom to top. They toss
their blades aside and step closer, almost miming two fencers
closing. As they come together and kiss, an image of JAMES
flashes through ANNE's mind, and she becomes more ferocious.
Nearby, a serving maid watches the events, and titters to
herself.
SCENE 4 - EVENING AT THE ESTATE
In the main hall, ANNE'S TUTOR shows off his semi-ruined coat
to WILLIAM as both laugh heartily yet politely, as
upperclassmen are wont to do. Nearby, ANNE waits, her entire
demeanor emitting a "bored now" feeling. A word floats
overhead, a single word she catches.
TUTOR
...Goethe...
ANNE's face softens, she seems contemplative. She rises,
being sure no one notices her, creeps quietly into the
library, opens a window, and lets herself outside with a
soft, sharp hiss as her shoes land on the grass. Anne pats
down her petticoats, and spies a woodpile. On top of the pile
is a hatchet, which her eyes linger on but she turns away
from and makes her way as quietly as she can down the road.
She slips between the bars of the fence and is off down the
road.
SCENE 5 - CHARLES TOWN PORT, EVENING
Everything is different now. During the day, the port area
felt open, wide, bright, even in the alley. Now all appears
close, humid, crushed with odors and sounds. ANNE peeks out
from between two buildings, and espies the local grogshop.
Checking to be sure no respectable types are around, she sets
her shoulders, fluffs her hair, and presses out into the
open.
To her, the night seems strange, wild, shapes begin
distorting, buildings move away from her. She is alone in the
wide square before the port, and feels it keenly. But she
walks tall, and proud, and unconcerned.
SCENE 6 - THE GROGSHOP
The door of the grogshop opens and in steps ANNE. The
grogshop is a rough and tumble place, the smoke hangs thick
in the air (and some of it smells illegal), as do the oaths
and whores (most of which seem illegal), hanging as thick
around the men. They entertain themselves with stories, with
cards, or with the women. This is clearly the kind of place
where you could get raped and nobody'd notice.
ANNE is by far the best dressed in the establishment, as well
as one of the few pretty ones ('pretty' in this case being
without noticeable scars, replacement limbs, a pug nose and
pig face, or missing things). She walks forward, takes a
place at the bar.
The BARTENDER fills one mug, two mugs, three...and the third
is passed to ANNE. She puts down a gold piece on the table
and drinks up.
A reasonably well-dressed YOUNG MAN, about ANNE's age,
clearly drunk, wanders up to her. He's okay...blond kid,
noble obviously, fairly good looking.
He comes up to ANNE and whispers in her ear. She shakes her
head, takes another drink. He leers at her. She turns away
from him, takes another drink. He grabs her by the arm,
swings her around. His face is darker now, his intents match.
She takes another drink, trying not to look worried. He (and
we) can see the worry on her, and he slides his hand along
ANNE's arm. She sets her drink down, shakes her head. He
grabs ANNE by the breast and gives her a wicked yank.
ANNE almost freezes as he moves in (I leave it to your sick
imagination to wonder with what). Her fear is palpable, a
part of her, a kind of coldness, blueness. Her hand sweeps
along the counter and meets her glass. The tink of her
fingernail against the metal mug restarts her, and with a
wordless cry she grabs the mug and bashes it against his
head. The mug goes clattering off harmlessly, but he's out of
it enough that ANNE slips out of his grasp and in one fluid
motion has lifted a chair off the floor. She's gone to flame,
now, her anger is more fearsome than her weapon by far. She
swings the chair into the young man, and he sprawls himself
over the bar, bleeding in several places. ANNE bashes the
chair onto him until there's little left of it, and several
RUFFIANS appear out of nowhere and take her by the arms.
She's crying and angry and it all becomes indistinct and hazy
through the tears.
SCENE 7 - ANNE'S ROOM, AFTERNOON
ANNE sits on the windowsill, staring out the window. Aspect
to various parts of her room (think Elizabeth's from Pirates
of the Caribbean), until we see the door. Silhouetted there
are two men, WILLIAM and the YOUNG MAN, talking. We do not
hear. ANNE ignores them forcefully, staring out her window
towards the busy downtown and port area of Charles Town.
People are going about their business, wandering at random,
free, buzzing...and she is up here, silent, caged. ANNE looks
on, and her face is a transition to...
SCENE 8 - ANNE'S ROOM, YEARS AGO
A younger girl, ANNE stares with eyes wide and mouth open as
the fort booms with the report of the cannon. In the harbor,
a fleet of ships, spanning from rock to rock, blockades the
pass. The fort fires, but the cannonballs fall short. The air
is thickly purple and grey with dusk, haze and battle. The
younger ANNE's stomach rumbles, and she pouts, but she can't
take her eyes away. A boat is rowing ashore, close, and she
spies it, squinting and then going wide again.
In a differently decorated room than her elder's, she pulls
herself from the window and searches in the trunks and
drawers until she finds what she's looking for, a real brass
spyglass. She takes it out, cradles it, wipes it off with her
dress, extends it, and peers at the advancing boat.
In the time it took her to find the spyglass, the boat has
landed, and she focuses on one of the ant-like figures
emerging from it.
BLACKBEARD, tall, with his matches alight and the ribbons in
his beard gaudy against the flat black of his clothes, his
six pistols shining on his chest, looks around and takes a
deep breath. He calls for something, and one of the GENTLEMEN
run up and hands him a mug of grog. He swigs it in a gulp,
smacks his lips, offers some comment, and then makes another
loud request. A chest is brought before him, and he and his
second open it and peer in. All eyes turn toward BLACKBEARD,
and he meticulously counts the contents before nodding. ANNE
focuses her spyglass a little more, and can clearly make out
the word "MEDICINE" burnt into the top of the chest.
BLACKBEARD closes the chest, calls, bows obnoxiously before
the GENTLEMEN. His SECOND grabs the chest and hauls it in the
boat, and BLACKBEARD waves his finger at the GENTLEMEN, pulls
out his cutlass, and waves it around before turning back to
the boat. He steps onto the little craft, resheathes the
cutlass, and says the command to start rowing.
In her room, ANNE gasps with wonder and the beginnings of
puberty.
SCENE 8 - ANNE'S ROOM, EVENING
Footsteps. ANNE turns from the window and her memories to her
father WILLIAM, entering alone. He offers a stern finger and
a compassionate expression to ANNE, who takes both with equal
unreadability. WILLIAM produces a ring, and gestures towards
outside. The YOUNG MAN's shadow is gone.
ANNE's face crunches into furious anger, and she turns
haughtily back to the window. WILLIAM looks crushed, then
angry. He snaps the ring's box shut with a loud SNAP!, and
slams it on her dresser. ANNE refuses to flinch. Spinning on
his heel, WILLIAM exits, and we hear the heavy thud and
clickity-clack of the door being slammed shut and locked,
which is verified when we see the door.
ANNE turns toward the door to make sure he's really gone. She
comes to it and tries it. Locked. Again, a vision of JAMES
passes before her, and she takes a sheet off her bed and rips
it.
SCENE 9 - EVENING AT THE ESTATE
ANNE's ripped bedsheet rope, alas, only made it halfway, and
she lands with a soft 'shrush' in the bushes. She emerges,
pats down her petticoats again (they look rather beat, now),
and espies the woodpile. The hatchet is still there, but in
the rising moon looks dangerous...exotic. In two steps she's
next to the woodpile, and with only a moment's hesitation,
reaches out and wraps her hand around the axe handle. With a
sure hand she rocks it out of the wood it's been thwacked
into, and sets it into her dress belt at a jaunty angle
before creeping away again, seeming to melt into the shadows
except for the bright red of her hair and the silver gleam of
the hatchet.
SCENE 10 - THE GROGSHOP
ANNE enters, and briefly scans the room. Sitting in a
secluded corner, illuminated by a sickly yellow lamp hanging
on a nearby post, sits JAMES, hunched and suspicious looking
over a deck of cards (bottom dealing, of course). None of the
bullshit wandering around the bar, we focus on ANNE as she
strides through the crowd over to JAMES' table. She pulls up
a seat. JAMES and the other PLAYERS turn and stare. All are
clearly impressed and in wonder of what the hell she's doing
there. She extends a hand, and with a shrug, JAMES deals her
into the game.
ANNE is dealt the Queen of Diamonds, the Six of Diamonds, the
????, The ???? And the ????, in that order (wands clubs,
swords spades, pentacles diamonds, cups hearts). On the wall
behind her are five knife marks in a cross pattern (this
should be relatively non-obvious but noticeable). One even
has an axe in it, the center one we see as she gets the Queen
of Diamonds.
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SCENE 11 - THE CORMAC ESTATE
As the night wears on, ANNE and JAMES arrive at the
plantation. JAMES is looking about, greedily drinking with
his eyes the riches he is about to inherit. ANNE pays no
attention, except to glance at the woodpile whence her axe
came. She knocks on the door, foregoing the knocker. After a
short wait, the door creaks open to reveal the servant, who,
upon seeing ANNE, and then seeing JAMES, understands it is
entirely not his business and to go wake up WILLIAM. He opens
the door and shows ANNE and JAMES the way in.
They sit in the main hallway, and exchange Knowing Winking
Glances before WILLIAM descends the staircase in his
nightgown. He looks from ANNE to JAMES to ANNE again. ANNE
flashes the ring on her finger and grins devilishly.
WILLIAM stares. WILLIAM blinks. WILLIAM raises a fist and
slams it against the wall, gnashing his teeth. He points to
the portrait of ANNE's mother and makes croaking noises but
can't quite figure words. JAMES, for his part, looks worried.
WILLIAM points out the still-open door. ANNE flips him off
with her wedding finger. Some servants emerge out of nowhere
and grab ANNE and JAMES about the necks and throw them bodily
out of the front step. ANNE yells wordlessly, and turns, and
the last thing she sees is WILLIAM, smouldering mad, making a
'break' motion with his hands before the door slams shut.
ANNE jumps to her feet, mad enough to be croaking herself,
and stares at the door twitching as JAMES rises, clearly
crestfallen that he's not rich. He makes a mumbling and ANNE
spins around, for a second her focused anger and hatred
centered on him. He withers under it and ANNE's continence
changes instantly, and she's over to him and hugging him,
kissing his cheek. He looks at her, lost, like 'what now?'
She sighs, and looks around a last time...but then something
else grows in her eyes. Close up on her eyes, as a fire burns
in them.
In the next panel, a fire is really burning. ...down the
plantation. From their hiding place near the fence, JAMES and
ANNE chuckle mirthlessly as they watch the slaves and
servants and even WILLIAM rush about, trying fruitlessly to
put out the blaze. In the light, JAMES pulls his journal out
from his shirt, and pages through it. He squints and
concentrates a few pages, scans down one, and then lights up.
He swats ANNE on the shoulder, and she turns to look, and he
marks the spot with his finger. Right above his thick, meaty
digit is a line that says "JUNE 5...DEPART TO NEW
PROVIDENCE". He points specifically towards "NEW PROVIDENCE"
and looks to ANNE, and she nods in agreement.
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