這個畫本來是畫華山的雲海的

這個畫本來是畫華山的雲海的,就是直著那張相和上面那張相的那種,結果粉彩老師寫在畫背的評語是:

"浪畫得太輕,沒有水的質感"這樣的話,看到的時候真教我哭笑不得o

When my teacher returned this picture to me, I found that he marked some words at the back, that was:

"The waves are too light, it don't like water".

Facing these few words, I can say nothing. Actually, I hope to show the 'Cloud Sea' around the Mountain Wah

like the photos on the above, but not the waves hit the reef.