a.       Areas of Strength—creative story, interact with the audience

The story is created by one of the group members and the director write the script. We are the only group (in our class) use our own story.

The story background is quite similar to our diary life. Audience can be more familiar to our story. And at some act, we have actor to talk to audience. This let audience be in our drama, not same as watching at the screen.

b.      Areas to Develop—the time between act and act is too long

Some of the tool we didn’t know the position clearly and use more time to find them. And one of the problem is I forgot to control the music for one act. It wasted time again. [We have allocated the tool again and each member responds for the same tools.]

I find one of my bad point is my voice is not strong enough. I don’t know why. Maybe I feel shy or due to my illness. I should or must speak louder in the ‘real’ show.

c.       Areas of Concern—the technical problem (background music, microphone and the phone call)

We only have recorded 1 minute of the background music. It’s too short. And we will have a long version later

Lecturer may help microphone problem but it cannot be sure that it won’t out of order again.

We use the mobile phone to send the phone call but it used time to be collected.

We can solve the problem by using the tape recorder.

d.      Other comments—

I also find one problem that we only depend on the tool but not ‘act’. Ever there is no table I still can image there is a table and act like there is a table.

If the show is too long I would like cut the show to shorter and I don’t think this will effect our though of the story. Now, I still think we cannot concentrate on our main idea. Some plot can be deleted.

 Based on the above self-assessment, give your creative product mark out of 50:33