This is my song page...  every once in a while, I'll put the lyrics to a song that I have written up on here.  I would definitely appreciate comments and criticism from anyone as to how yinz guys think that I could do better in the future.  All of these songs are copywritten, so no stealing; you WILL be prosecuted.  That said, here are my lyrics...
		"Something stirs inside; I tend to not know pride just long enough until things subside, allowing me to abide... I cry after the carnival: the emotional cerebral. Signs flash through it all... and then I come to realize the shuddering freeze in her eyes that gets me to analyze just why it is that the carnival won't show its sideshow:  harmful to all, detrimental, seriously mental, elemental in my mind, at least.  Then the mind finds peace in knowing this and the growing concern for what I discern from what I've learned; and I am the tall one too small to not fall in the hum drum roll of it all." "Carnival in the Darkness" --Hobbes