5. Establish a reason for the dance. (story, joy, desire, sorrow, etc?)
6. Watch your tense and do not change it.
7. Describe with movement the music. Smooth, urgent beat, etc. Dance is moving music.
8. Do not be afraid! This is your expression .. something you have the right to do in your own way.
9. Never copy another sister's dance. There may be hundreds of whip dances, each beautiful and each correct.
10. Sometimes a piece of cloth is sexier than nude. But not always.
While none of the tips here are "rules" that MUST be followed to write a good dance..they are pieces of very helpful information. It would be a good idea to keep what's said here in mind while writing. Hopefully, these tips will help you create a wonderful dance of your own.
Any dances posted within this site are merely examples of different types of dances that Gorean slaves perform. They were put here to help teach other slaves. Please do not copy these dances and try to pass them off as your own. Every dance a slave does should be an original..something they composed themselves. To use the words and hard work of another slave only proves that the you are not capable of pulling your own weight and finding your own special ways to please a Free Person. It's doubtful that a slave who finds her work to be copied will be very happy about the situation, nor will her Owner(s).