Sweet notes: Okay, here’s the deal. I am looking for a Beta reader desperately. I recently found ‘Bad fanfic! No biscuit!’ and I am scared out of my wit, mainly because my writing breaks a bloody lot of the rules on there. So I have come to a decision. I will improve the shit I pass off as writing (after looking at that site, you cannot MAKE me believe any longer I have talent) and in the process, I will get a Beta reader. Oh, and this is going to be a short chapter.
Warnings: Yaoi, shounen-ai, Kai x Tyson, a bit of humour, lemon, a tad psychological… but think about it, if I can read it and comprehend it… how much trouble do you expect? Also AU Sci-fi. A bit of H/C.
Disclaimer: If pigs were flying, hell was frozen over and judgement day had come, I would own Beyblade’s… look outside, if any of these three isn’t happening, it probably isn’t mine.
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Losing: Chapter 13, The joining and the rejection.
~ By Sweetdeily.
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It was as if everything in that one moment stopped and was swallowed by two clashing colours. It was as if the room was bathed in brilliant light, as if the two bodies locked in the most intimate of embraces suddenly exploded with light.
Red stood majestically swooping down on blue in a dangerous flight. Blue moved up into the red, powerful storm raging around the fiery arrows that were trying to break into it, the colours erupted in fierce battle before blue was pinned.
There was a moment in which all was silent and still, before the colours started blending together…
It was with this blending that Tyson felt the most wonderful feeling flowing through his body from the place where Kai’s organ had entered him. It was like having found something that had been lost for a very long time, like being filled in a way that he was meant to be, hearing the voice he hadn’t heard before. Feeling the hollowness from minutes ago disappear in a wave of completion. As if he had found a toy from eight years ago. Complete fulfilment in that one moment.
He could feel Kai above him, could feel some sort of astonishment inside his mind… and something horrible.
Rejection.
The feeling seemed to push at him, and when he found his voice again, when the colours died down, he cried out at the rejection.
He cried out when he felt the ice cover something he had not been able to touch yet was meant to touch.
He cried out when he felt himself being pushed away on all levels.
He cried out when his mind was empty and his body was suddenly abandoned and through his cries he saw Kai. He saw Kai’s look of horror. Kai’s look of fear.
He saw Kai reject him, in every possible way.
Worst of all, he felt it.
Unable to move he watched as Kai fled from the room.
The door closed and left Tyson confused, frightened, abandoned and rejected in every possible way.
He had done nothing but relax into the strange feelings.
He had been taken of his virginity, a layer of his purity and then thrown away.
Can you even imagine what he did next?
~ To be continued…
Sweet notes: did I mention that the Beta reader gets to read the next chapter before everyone else? Lol… I think we call that bribery where I’m from. Email me if you want to Beta Read for me. I’m going to be re-doing a whole bunch of my Digimon fictions, er, if you wanna see them, they’re on my site. Oh! And I’ve made a lovely little Kai x Tyson banner for people’s sites, email me and I’ll send it to you! ^^
. Glossary.
Upper level: The upper level of the world, pretty much a whole bunch of really tall buildings (think 80-200 storeys) with air ways, a place where most of the pure humans live.
Lower level: the real earth, beaches, and parks junk yards. Few pure humans live down here. It is overrun with non-humans.
Pure: otherwise called, ‘pure humans’ these are people with no genetic implants, no biological altering, no technology inside them at all. They are dwindling in numbers.
Genetics: people who were grown in test tubes basically, they vary in design and powers usually better at things then normal humans. Some people are altered after birth to become genetics; they usually live short lives.
Virtual holographs: Pretty much walking ghosts, they have no real substance and are only brainwaves coming from computers.
Cyborg: Most humans are either cyborg or genetic, cyborg being made of various metals, some cyborg never were human to start with, others are altered to a point they no longer are. They are pretty much robots. (Think the Borg… if you watch StarTrek)
Flesh collectors: cyborg made machines. Most cyborg get into fights and have their flesh ripped up, as they are incapable of regrowing this skin, they require new skin. This is what the Flesh collectors do. They find skin. Dead or alive is not important.
Moonain: A mysterious race of humanoid aliens. Said to be an ambassador of these people on earth. They resemble the Human Angel, and it is speculated that they have come to earth many times. They neither confirm nor deny this accusation. They have giant angel wings and are never directly seen unless the Human government has trades with them. They live on the far side of Neptune and refuse to allow a colony of more then four hundred humans to share their side of Neptune. They are incredibly mysterious. Most humans only ever see them once or twice on TV or in books. They seem to enjoy human media and allow any and all kind of writings or movies with their kind in them. They do not appear to have any children in their race, and refuse to explain why. Despite their similar structure to humans they are said to be very different mentally.
Hover board: A floating skateboard.
Insectiod domination: Several planets in different universes are controlled by large insectiod aliens which are extremely aggressive, Earth was once a prime spot for domination due to its large amount of food (humans) luckily the Moonain have easily fought off all attacks on Earth and the surrounding solar system.
Beastial warfare: Animal like aliens who seek to conquer other planets by using the animals already on it. There is a protective shield around Earth due to an incident in 1986, which almost escalated beyond control.
The Experienced: The Moonain version of dating. Not much is know about it’s effects on other races.
EMP pulse: electro magnetic pulse. It disrupts any electrical system within a certain radius. Although the current existing EMP’s aren’t quite as powerful as the one Max used.
Rejection: (Dictionary definition) to refuse to have, take, recognise, etc. To cast out or off. Something rejected as an imperfect article.