Straight Through The Heart

Part 11

By Sandy

 

Cupid pressed his cute little button nose up against the window pane and gazed inside. Boy! Didn't those two ever get enough of each other?! (sorry, bitterness of author seeping through) Danny and Michelle were sitting entwined on the couch, cooing and gazing lovingly into each others eyes. The opulant surroundings of the Santos family compound on San Cristobal were virtually ignored by the two lovebirds who made a beeline for the first cushy place to recline, barely breaking lip-contact since exiting the taxi. Cupid smiled sadly and wondered again if he would ever feel the magic of this mortal love or if he was destined to forever experience only the hum-drum ecstacy of God-like pleasures. Suddenly, his pensive mood was interrupted by a terrible rucus brewing just outside the door...OH NO...the "Uninvited" had arrived.

The Santos women, Carmen and Pilar, along with Ben, Dietz and various hangers-on were noisily making their way to the front door of the Villa. Carmen, clinging tenaciously to the lapels of Ben's expensive suit, tore her gaze away from the smarmy lawyer only for the brief moments it took to bark orders at Dietz.

"Dietz....get the luggage and don't forget to tip the driver...Dietz!! watch it with my bag...you'll jar the secret smuggling compartment..Dietz!...DIETZ..where is that Man??..Ben, darling, you shouldn't have to carry that heavy briefcase..leave it for Dietz..DIETZZZZZ!!!!"

Dietz, struggling under a mountain of luggage, was trying to get Pilar's attention to see if she would lend him a hand but, she was too distracted, gazing at her herself in the mirror of her compact and mentally planning her wardrobe for this evening. In the glare of the San Cristobal sun, would she look better in the mini-mini red dress with the slit up the side or should she go a little more conservative in the white dress with see-thru panels? Hmmm...decisions, decisions. But, then Pilar gave an un-ladylike snort and tossed her hair,

"Not that anyone would notice what she was wearing...Really..Mommy was all over that Ben W-A-R-R-E-N, Danny and Michelle only noticed each other, and Bill and David were not even here to vie for her attention. Not that she really wanted either one of them...I mean David could never afford to keep her in the style to which she was accustomed, how much did a disgraced cop make? and lately Bill was proving to be very difficult with his non-stop talk of computer programs and unless she was packing illegal bonds in her knapsack, she did not see the need for those little visits to his bedroom. How vexing!"

Cupid watched enthralled from his hiding place as the lovely Pilar scrunched up her nose, deep in thought. He just KNEW she was thinking of something deep and profound. One so lovely must also be blessed with great intelligence and sensitivity. He must have her for his own true love. He lovingly carressed his last arrow and contemplated just letting it fly here and now. But, alas, he had promised the mortal, Dietz, a chance with the raven-haired witch of his dreams and Cupid was a cherub of his word. It would take great skill to line up both Santos women and strike them with this his last potent arrow but he was confident that he would succeed. Tonight he would know the pleasure of mortal love with the fair Pilar and no one, not his Mother Aphrodite or any of the other jealous gods or any flimsy mortal would stand in his way.

Inside Villa Santos, Michelle wrapped her arms around her husband and bent to whisper in his ear, "Danny, I have a PLAN. A really good idea on how to spend our first night in San Cristobal...."

The door to the villa burst open as the uninvited guests stumbled into the room and were treated to the sight of the half-clothed lovers. Danny jumps up, yelling furiously, "MOTHER! PILAR!...WHAT THE HELL...!!" , Michelle, scrambling to cover herself falls off the couch in a mass of tangled clothes, Carmen, clutching her throat turns to the smirking Ben Warren and stoic Dietz, while Pilar stares confusedly at the scene and wonders why....

"Uh Oh", Cupid thought. His one measely arrow just wasn't going to cut it in this madhouse. It was time to call for help. It was time to call out the big guns....It was time to call........................


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