| Fucking Teenyboppers... (i'm not saying that i'm a poet... but these stupid tricks are definitely not) |
| (dis mah Fav) No Title I cant find tha words to say To tell you dat i feel dis way I want you to tell me what can I do To make me want you next to you If you look at me, you'll understand All I want is to hold your hand I felt this way for so long It hurts me that I dont belong Wanting you is all I dream My heart aches I wanna scream I smile and laugh just thinking of you Together now I wish its was true I always imagine of your gentle touch If only you knew I felt this much Not being with you Im falling apart Cus I dont know how to get your heart If u could only see the love in my eyes Of all those nights I sat and cried Just look at me im standing there Just call out my name and Ill be there How long the wait... i dont know When that day comes Ill let it show If only you knew my feelings for you Ill stay hopeful that youll feel the same way too |
| now honestly, is this kinda bullshit even considered poetry? I know im sounding really bitter and arrogant but holy shit... look at this "poem." we have cliches amongst cliches with cliches overlapping cliches in this damn waste of effort. these 13 - 14 year old girls have got to put the pens down and find another way to express themselves. they think that theyre writing love poems but theyre just scratching the surface. there are 3 components that categorize this "poem" into the true teenybopper poems: 1) All teenybopper love poems can be substituted for a sappy love song 2) The words (love and above; start, apart, or heart; eyes and cries; you, true, do, or too; etc) should be present and have no inner-meaning but just a superficial way of rhyming words together 3) Its always about a hidden love or love never happened. Dreaming and wishing will go good for the sadness affect. |