Mothers Friend Part one |
Melissa had never been in any kind of trouble before. She had never had the desire to do thing that she knew her mother wouldn't approve of. She knew how hard the divorce had been on her mother, so she tried not to add to it. Besides that, she had heard her mothers endless comments about the way her friends behaved toward their parents,and that an old fashioned spanking would do them all some good. She had also heard her mother say many times, If I catch you doing the things your friends are doing, you will be one sorry little girl. That statement always sent shivers down her spine. Until now, she really hadn't worried about it to much. Her mother was now working longer hours,and this gave Melissa some extra free time. Her mother was quite strict and expected that the rules be followed. Melissa had just celebrated her twelveth birthday, and with it came a whole new fancy pants attitude. She managed to hide it quite well from her mother,knowing that if she got caught,she would most definitely be punished. "Melissa, Mrs Akens from the store said that you were rude to her yesterday," her mother stated. "Mom, I wasn't at the store yesterday, I was here and at Kaci's. I wasn't at the store, and you know she is sort of old," Melissa replied. Her mother looked at her, not sure what to think, but she had never had any trouble with Melissa before, so maybe it was just a mistake. Things kept happening as time went by, and her mom began to get suspicious about her child and the things she was up to. In the mean time Melissa just kept deceiving her mother and breaking the rules. She came home just before her mom every day, and barely got her chores done. "Mom, I have to much homework to get it all done lately, but I will try harder," she promised as she sat the table for dinner. "I have to be careful, my mom is getting suspicious," she told one of her friends over lunch at school. "So does that mean your not coming to my house after school any more?" her friend asked. "Well just for a few days, until my mom is satisfied that everything is still the way she wants it," Melissa replied. When the school day came to an end, Melissa had suddenly changed her mind and went anyway. She never gave it a second thought that it would someday catch up to her. No matter how smart Melissa thought she was, he mother was smarter. One day her mother changed her lunch hour to around the time Melissa was just getting out of school. She went to the school and watched for her daughter. Melissa exited the school with her friends, and they all walked down the street toward home. Some split off as they went along. Everything seemed normal until they got to Melissa's street, but Melissa kept walking. She watched as Melissa broke the rule of going home after school, to going to a friends house. Once Melissa arrived, she did what she always did, and called her mother to report in. They had re routed her calls to her cell phone, so when Melissa thought she was calling her mom at the office, she was actually just down the street. "Mom, I'm calling to check in," Melissa replied. "So your home then?" her mother asked. "Yup, home," she replied. It was all her mother could do to keep herself from going in and confronting her lying child, but she knew she had to wait for the right time. Her mother did this for the next three days. She followed Melissa to different houses after school, while she lied to her mother about what she was doing. She also lied about why she couldn't get her chores done. To much homework is what she was claiming, but when she checked with Melissa's teachers, Melissa had little or no homework at all. Finally Friday came, and she decided this would be the day that her child would fess up and take the punishment that she so rightly deserved. Becky took off work early and headed for the school. She once again followed Melissa as she headed for the downtown area. A small group of kids went to the local hangout for softdrinks and to visit. Again she called her mom and told her she was home. Becky was so mad, but she bit her tongue and headed for home. She sat on the sofa and waited for her lying child to come home. When Melissa walked in the house, she headed right to her room, not even noticing that her mother was seated on the couch. Melissa went into the kitchen and made a snack. When she came into the living room she got a very big surprise. "MOM!! she shouted as she dropped the plate on the floor. "You're home early!" she stated. "And I would like to know where you've been," she replied. "Um um, after I called you, Kaci and I went to the library," she replied with a stutter. "Is that the story you're going with then young lady?" her mother asked. "Yes," she replied, not sure what to think. "Well let me tell you something young lady, I am no fool ,and you are in big trouble," she scolded. She then told her child she knew about the lying and her breaking the rules. She told her of her suspisions of her behavior and as she spoke, Melissa began to get a tingling feeling in her bottom. She remembered the threats her mother had made, and what she said her friends needed. She knew she was going to get spanked by her mother. Her mother then reached into the couch cushions and pulled out the biggest heavy duty spatula she had ever seen. It had a very long handle and the spoon part of it was at least the size of her mothers hand. Melissa's eyes got big and her mouth dropped open at the sight of it. "Melissa, I will not tolerate you lying to me and breaking the rules I have set for you," she continued to scold as she shook the spatula at Melissa. "Mom please!! Melissa cried, as she tried to avoid her mother disippointed glare. "Do you have anything to say young lady, before I wear your bottom out," she asked. "Mom, I'm sorryyyy, Melissa cried. "Please, I won't break the rules again or lie any more." "No, I know you won't. Not when I'm done blistering your butt." Becky grabbed Melissa by the arm, and planted the first few smacks to her soon to be naked backside. {Smack} No mommm {smack- smack} owwhoww {smack-smack-smack}momm owwww nooo. As the smacks decended, Melissa tried to wiggle away and protect her butt from her mothers angry decending hand.This hurt more than Melissa thought it would, she had underestimated her mothers strength as she couldn't escape her grip. {smack} oww {smack-smack}mom stopppp {smack} Becky had stopped smacking, and was leading Melissa toward the sofa. "Mom, I'm sorry,please no more please," she cried as her mother seated herself on the sofa, and preceeded to pull Melissa across her lap. "I will not have you lying and disobeying me like this, Do you understand that, and when I'm done, you are going to be very sorry indeed. With that, she yanked on Melissa's shorts and pulled them down to her knees. "I promised to blister your butt, and thats what I Intend to do," she replied, as the spatula hit home. Over and over, Becky applied the dreaded instrument as yelps and howls came from Melissa. sounds that she didn't know she could make. Over and over, the spatula decended, Melissa kicked and yelped as her mother laid down the law. No matter how hard she tried, the spanking continued. It wasn't long before Melissa was reduced to sobbing, by her mother and that now dreaded instrument. When Becky finally stopped, Melissa's bottom was a deep crimson and a bit swollen. When she was released, she jumped and danced around the room trying to get some quick relief to her stinging throbing bottom. Melissa left the living room and headed for the safety of her room. "Melissa, come back right now," her mother scolded. Melissa walked back over to her mother and stood in front of her. "Yessss mama," she cried out in hiccups, while she nursed her sore stinging bottom. "You have thing that you need to do before you can go to your room and feel sorry for yourself. I am keeping this around, and don't think I won't use it again if I have to little girl," she scolded. Do you get me? "Yesss ma'am, Melissa replied, as she looked right into her mothers eyes. Melissa got right to her chores, stinging bottom and all. A half an hour later, her sobbing had turned into soft cries. She walked about the house and did all of her daily chores, at the discretion of her mother and the new found friend. When her chores were done, Melissa was sent to her room to get ready for bed. Melissa wasn't going to argue with her mother, so she quickly obeyed. Becky came up to her room to check on her well punished daughter. As she tucked her into bed, she once again reminded her of the rules, how much she loved her,and that they were not to ever be broken again. After the sting of that spatula hit home, Melissa knew her mother would have nothing more to worry about, but she couldn't help but feel a little angry at her mother, for handing out such a harsh punishment for such a tiny crime. Posted Replies Susan It's a verrrry nice story! You did a fine job on mother/daughter relationship. Such a creative mother, must have had spies in her family. Hope your muses don't leave you:) Best, Haron Hi, Thanks for the fine story. I guess melissa learned what can happen to a young lady when she lies to her mother. Steven. Great story Susan. I especially like how Melissa felt her crime was tiny. Sounds like there might be some future stories involving Melissa as I'm not quite sure she learned her lesson with an attitude like that. Beth |
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