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The Scarlet Blade
- Jason Caits-Cheverst
Sample for an Article on Magic and Technology
in the Redwall World.
Written for the Sentinels of Mossflower
circa Winter 1999.
The leaves rustled above the heads of Shadow
De Vulpes and Tayla Firehue. They were walking, not particularly conscious
of one another, towards the main clearing of the newly strengthened Sentinels
boot camp until Tayla spoke.
"Did you hear that?"
De Vulpes looked up, startled. "Sorry?
What? I was daydreaming. If that was why I saw some pillock with a rifle
and in full battle armour standing in front of me..." She trailed off into
incoherent mumbling, evidently confused about something.
"Say again?" Tayla asked, her face showing
bewilderment and awkwardness running through her mind at the idea of making
friends with a near stranger.
"Jumping ahead on the conversation a little,
aren't I?" grinned De Vulpes sheepishly, almost frightened it seemed.
"Aye, you are! I couldn't make any sense
of what you just said," Tayla returned the smile, trying to show a willingness
to be friends. "And I doubt you could either."
"You're right," Shadow continued in her
polished accent, "I don't know what came over me... I just saw it. Sorry,
I think 'it' was a he," They had reached the clearing and were now continuing
towards the leader's tent.
"Tell you what," Firehue confided, breaking
course and heading for an obscure corner of the encampment, "If 'it' was
a he then I'd better get whatshisface, Yaves, I think it is? Anyway, I'd
better get him to do some hypnotherapy on you. That is, if you'd like it?"
she trailed off under Shadow's stern gaze.
"Actually, that might be useful," mused
De Vulpes, after an initial shock of irritation. "He could get these visions
out of my system."
"Other visions?" asked Tayla, confused
and frankly worried. If hallucinations were the deed of the day, what would
come next?
"Yes, other visions. Haven't I told anyone
about them? I keep seeing him standing there, always pointin' some way
or the other..."
"We'd better get you to Yaves right away."
"Oh no, I'm not going to the camp sanatorium
yet," De Vulpes protested, "I'm staying in the sane part of this world
for now!"
"You daft old battleaxe!" laughed Tayla
Firehue, "He won't stick you in a loony bin! He'll just help you to focus
your mind on the image of this man and then he'll tell you what the visions
are all about! Or something like that. I don't really go for that sort
of thing myself."
"Good." said the daft old battleaxe. "I
haven't gone mad yet."
"What we have here is a case of spiritual
intervention." Yaves whispered to Tayla. "Now, Shadow, I want you to delve
deeper into the vision. Focus on the man’s hand. Now, where was this vision
of yours pointing?"
"Toward the mountain. Always toward the
mountain." De Vulpes replied in a faraway tone.
"Good!" Yaves smiled. "Now, can you concentrate
on the mountain?"
"Yes." Shadow looked concerned.
"Okay. I want you to walk to the mountain
and tell us what you see on the way there."
"I’m walking - no, it’s almost as though
I was running, I’m moving so fast. The mountain’s coming up in front of
me now. I’ve just entered a huge cloud of mist, and very thick mist at
that." Suddenly, De Vulpes flew into catatonia, almost as if trying to
get something off her. Yaves dashed around the table in the middle to supress
her then help her up.
"What happened?" Tayla asked, concernedly.
There was quite a commotion building up outside now, and Yaves had to shout
to be heard.
"She’s suffering from neural shock! We
have to get her out of here now!"
Suddenly, a booming voice came from outside.
"Make passage! Make way, you irritating people, or I’ll..." The threat
of their friend and only other survivor from the old days, Lilac Blacktip,
quietened everyone outside immediately, ‘til only a few murmurers and whisperers
were left. She entered the tent.
"We have to get her to a paramedic tent
now," Yaves spoke quietly. "or she may die."
"What exactly happened, anyway?" Lilac
asked as they carried Shadow out of the hypnotherapist’s tent and towards
the centre of the camp.
"The hypnosis went wrong. I’m not sure
what exactly happened, but it involved the mist around the eastern mountain."
"The eastern mountain?"
"Yes," Allinsor answered as they came
to the paramedic tent. "She keeps having this vison of a strange man -
I fear it is Dylan Sable."
"He’s dead!" Lilac looked puzzled.
"What about his other title?" asked Tayla.
"‘Spirit Runner’, wasn’t it?"
"That’s the ground I was thinking along."
Yaves said, matter-of-factly. "Why else would he have the title? In fact,
I sometimes suspect he has become our guardian spirit." They were in the
tent now, and had fixed the oxygen mask over Shadow’s head.
"Are you serious?" Lilac thought what
this would imply for the whole camp. Then she realised she had read thousands
of books, and had come across situations just like this several times in
any work of fiction. Star Trek especially.
"Perfectly."
Shadow choked and spluttered. She coughed
and sat up on the stretcher. The surprisingly firm hand of Yaves suppressed
her from getting up. "You’ve just been in neural shock. Stay there for
a while. And, keep the mask on. You might go into it again if you haven’t
got enough oxygen. As I was saying, I’m perfectly serious, yes."
"How is it possible?" Tayla pondered aloud.
"Sable met a peaceful end, after a lifetime
of fighting and bloodshed, did he not?"
"Aye, carry on." Tayla was impatient for
a coherent answer.
"Well, the spirit which can conquer its
inner feelings is the most valuable part of the community, is that not
true?"
"Yes..."
"Well then! Dylan’s spirit was that of
a noble warrior, and with extensions into the ethereal world, well, he
must have been the most powerful creature imaginable in those days."
"Before the advent of gunpowder and the
technological boom that followed it." Tayla pointed out vehemently.
"True, but don’t forget, his spirit did
have a rifle. I think he’s managed to find a substitute for gunpowder in
the ethereal world."
"It’s possible..."
"I see him again!" De Vulpes looked astonished,
as she stared at the back wall of the tent. She gasped, as another familiar
luminescent figure appeard by the Spirit Runner. "Errrm... I think you
should know that you’ve just appeared by his side, Yav! You’re handing
him something... You’ve gone! Just like that! Dylan’s fading away... He’s
gone too."
All present were staring at the back of
the tent, when suddenly...
"Silverstone, I need you."
With a gasp, the creatures in the tent
whirled around, only to see the Spirit Runner as clear as day, standing
with his hand leaning on Shadow’s stretcher. His face was sombre, etched
with worry and grief.
"Me? Why?"
"The logical squirrel as ever, Silverstone.
It will take some explaining. I shall start at the beginning. As I am now,
I have not been given the secret of gunpowder and automation yet by you.
In time, you will bring this secret to me using a process called the Kulik
process, transmit your mind into the ethereal realm along with a pouch
of gunpowder and a trigger mechanism. The device is to be found in the
tombs of the house Canos from the Thorn wars. There is, however, a problem..."
Lilac whacked herself on the side of the
head, to see if it made any sense then. "What?"
"What do we need to run this thing?" They
stared at the device before them. A slab of marble, above which hung a
triple-faceted series of mirrors.
"Come through here! They’ve sent back
the temporal focus device!"
"The temporal focus device?" Yaves asked.
"What the hell does that mean?"
"Yes," replied Sablefur. "It will be one
of the greatest creations of goodbeast kind. It focuses time from different
periods into a small area, giving the creature there more time to say,
make a ‘split-second decision’."
"So, it's a weird piece of techie gubbins.
How do we get it to work?" Tayla was inquisitive, as ever.
"We clean it. We must evict the grime
of centuries from the hydroxylate synthesis inverters, devices which effectively
create energy from the air around them."
"So all we need’s this!" Tayla produced
a cloth from some hidden pouch. "And what exactly are 'Hydroxwate sythesis
Everters', anyway?"
"Excellent." Dylan smiled, ignoring Tayla's
question.
A rustling noise came from the next chamber
in the labyrinth. Gale Stormdancer’s head popped around the doorway. "Firehue?
Yaves? My god, even Blacktip and De Vulpes! I thought you were long dead!"
"We thought the same of you, my friend!"
The Spirit Runner looked at her, inquisitively.
"Oh, now I know you’re dead. You’re just
a hallucination."
"I assure you, I am not." Dylan grinned.
"I’ve come back from the dead, thanks to this old faithful." He patted
the flatbed. Tayla had finished cleaning them now. "Lie on it, Yaves!"
Sablefur lay down on one of the two flatbeds. Yaves lay on the other. There
was a hum, and the devices started working. "Remember, if the other device
starts humming, it’s overloading." The bodies on them looked vacant, almost
dead. But not quite.
The wolf’s and the squirrel’s bodies lay
on the benches under the glowing blue lights, spirits somewhere beyond
the veil. The temporal focus device began humming, and dust began to fall
from the ceiling as a fine powder.
Tayla couldn't hear a thing as the humming
grew to a painful pitch and resonated through the cave. Small slabs of
stone began to fall from the ceiling now, and one knocked Lilac out.
The temporal focus device began to glow
a deadly blue. It was going into overload, rather typical of this sort
of situation Tayla thought. Then she remembered what the hero or heroine
always did in the stories, and that was throw themselves at the humming
thing to try and turn it off. Okay, she thought. If this is going to be
like a story, I may as well do what I should. She motioned to De Vulpes,
who reached the focus device with a grin on her face. All that remained
was to press the button marked ‘Stop’ to induce the self-inversion process,
or whatever this particular chunk of silicon was actually meant to do.
With what she thought was the correct dramatic presence of mind, she threw
herself at the machine. As she had predicted, time seemed to slow down
and she eventually managed to reach out and slam her hand down on the button.
A great flash of light: white, milky, moonlight
amplified a thousand times over and coupled with a silence so graceful
it induced tears in the eyes....
"I see him again!" De Vulpes looked astonished,
as she stared at the back wall of the tent. She gasped, as another familiar
luminescent figure appeared by the Spirit Runner. "Errrm... I think you
should know that you’ve just appeared by his side, Yav! You’re handing
him something... You’ve gone! Just like that! Dylan’s fading away... He’s
gone too."
All present were staring at the back of
the tent.
Yaves grinned, then thought. If only the
author wasn't so predictable, that would have been exciting.
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Here, although the characters’ omnipotence
and 1990’s approach to complicated, futuristic technology is humorous,
the technology itself is annoying. Why? Because it just is. Ask any Redwaller
what they think of time travel, and they’ll say "What, give a newbie a
chance of going back in time and snaffling Martin? No chance, mate."
So, ignoring my last paragraph completely,
what is it about technology that annoys Redwallers so much? It doesn’t
fit. There’s no place for the warp drive in Redwall world. Even the oldest
of windmills doesn’t fit in. The technological achievements of Medieval
England were very close to those found in Redwall, apart from two obvious
omissions - the longbow (standing at five inches taller than the user,
requiring a 120 pound draw and with a range of nearly half a mile under
an experienced archer with a well-crafted bow), and any cavalry weapon.
The problem with technology is this: "technology
equals power". And it’s true. All too often, technology is simply a way
of achieving magical ends with what appears to be a material excuse (if
one looks at the works of Anne McCaffrey, most notably the Talent books,
there is the scientific explanation for the Talents’ powers as given in
Pegasus in Space - the Talented mind can regulate matter through quantum
physics).
And what’s wrong with magic, then?
That’s a debate for the next section.
Part
Two
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