hi here is chapter one. I'm not shore this is exactly what I wrote the first
time.
It started out as a normal rainy and stormy day until after lunch. Sakura
had fallen asleep in class for the fifth time that week. She was havign the
same dream she is in the middle of the town when Li and a red haired girl
walk into the town. Then they start to kiss. And there is this boy with
brown hair that won't tell her his name. "Who are you?"
She said as she woke up, "I'm your teacher and you fell asleep again."
A little embarased she looked around the room, "Ms. Makenzie, I'm sorry
where are the others?"
"It's after school, they all went home. I'll let you off easy if you do
todays work and homework for Monday."
"Oh yes I'll have it for you on Monday. Bye"
"Bye Sakura, and good luck." Sakura didn't know why ms Makenzie was wishing
her good luck but she kept walking. It was poring out so she put her rain
coat on and put up her umbrtella up. She wanted to walk home with someone
but Madison was on vacation in Hawii:(
Sakura saw Li up ahead and ran up to him. Li was deep in thought about
Sakura and why he couldn't stop thinking about her when someone tapped his
sholder and brout him into reality. He turned around and saw those beautiful
emrald eyes, he was dragged to another world full of beautiful things about
Sakura and her emrald eyes. He was quickly puled back to reality, "What do
you want Avalon?" He said trying to sound as normal as he could. "Oh
nothing, just....I was wondering if...I could walk with you?"
"Watever, come on." They got to Sakuras house and she invited him in, "No
thanx I think I'll go home."
"In this rain no way your coming in."
"NO!!!"-_-
"But...you'll catch....cold if you.....don't.....come...in!!"
She pulled him in the door and told him to wait for her there. In five min.
She started to go down the satairs. But she heard something horrible.
Hey tell me how I did e-mail me alright.
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