D - 12/07/00 06:17:59
My URL:http://www-personal.umich.edu/~dlabert
My Email:dlabert@umich.edu
World of Origin: Nether

Comments:
Hi Doug. Lucky me, I finally found your site. Come play Perfect Dark with Ben and I. We need some *real* competition.

Travis W Shults - 10/19/00 00:02:44
My Email:travisshults@hotmail.com

Comments:
This is possibly one of the best Fanfics out there. I love the way that the story goes into a field that is already saturated with ooddles of reoccuring themes and manages to pull off some incredibly original ideas. The air of hostility that pervades this fic adds so much to the mood and makes for a great story. The Rei dummy that bonds with Unit 4 is a novel idea, and I llike the way she relates to Ritsuko. Asuka and Shinji are moving along at the appropriate snail's pace that is suited for their personal ties, just as Rei is slowly emerging from her shell and showing emotions in the proper amounts of emotion. The new character is handled very well, with out to much supermacho stuff to make it unbelievable. Please keep up the good work, I am an avid fan.
Rhine - 09/29/00 04:20:07
My Email:rhine@hotmail.com
World of Origin: who knows...

Comments:
wow... this is an incredible fic. I just read it all in two days and I'm hooked! Please post more...

Loner - 08/18/00 01:11:26

Comments:
Great fic! (Try writtin' other gospels, thought)

Serge - 08/13/00 14:41:39
My Email:Jered_Canis@hotmail.com

Comments:
It's a great fic but could you please put a few more chapters up I'm sure we'd all like to know how it ends.

Yakomo - 08/05/00 00:34:06
My Email:Yakomo@sluggy.net
World of Origin: Canada

Comments:
Very, very well done series of fan fics. Worthier than most, especially those that take place after the end of the series. Only complaints I have are minor grammar ones - "you're" is "you are", and you've been using it wrong. 8-) Please write some more

tAll GuY 4:21 - 07/31/00 17:59:28
My Email:kyte_sun_smith@sdf-1.com
World of Origin: None

Comments:
Excellent fic! I'm anxiously awaiting more of it, so please don't give up on it. Keep up the good work...

V.G. - 07/25/00 03:23:59

Comments:
Great Fic! Please update Gospel soon!

Valerie G. - 07/25/00 03:23:47

Comments:
Great Fic! Please update Gospel soon!

Amithyst Tenko/Murf/Sailor Sun(tis I yes my sweet ones)/ or to those of you who want the truth you can call me God - 07/16/00 01:00:33
My Email:murf929@yahoo.com
World of Origin: Under the bed or the USA

Comments:
..........UM.....Lalala.....Oh ok blonde moment over with I must say hello first off to anyone brave enough to actually read this. Next I want to say "Nice job Doug!" .....Tenee smacks Niseese with a wooden spoon....Any way have fun, behave inshort don' do any thing I actually would do and remember I accept money in the form of cash or credit cards please no personal checks.

Jimmy - 06/30/00 06:13:32
World of Origin: Hoboken

Comments:
Please update soon!

Ben - 06/25/00 23:57:51
My Email:ikari_b@evafan.com
World of Origin: a world yet found in the depths of your soul

Comments:
A man's dream is his life. All that he cares for, all that is his, all that he is. They are all what he believes them to be. I smart man once said "I think therefore I am." A child now says "I think aherefore all that is, is." A man with a dream lives, a an with no dream does not. Now I tell this to all that can forget all that they believe and embrace the truth: "Your dream is your life, go out and live your dream"

project 13:14 - 06/22/00 09:19:09
World of Origin: A place long distant in your mind

Comments:
A dream of nothing, a dream of darkness, a dream of desperation. This dream never ends but your dream seems to have faded. With tears we see the midnight sky, for we know we may never see the day again. A dream of dreams.

JA - 05/24/00 10:19:56
World of Origin: Earth. Duh!

Comments:
Great fic! Very original an well written! The new Eva pilot is wonderfuly done and I like the fights between him and Asuka! No one is to OCC, and I like the plot! Get the next chapter up soon!

Stephen - 05/19/00 01:30:59
My Email:stephenl@san.rr.com
World of Origin: Aurora

Comments:
Wow...great fic. Desperate for more, so drop me a line when you get around to another chapter ^_^

Hotwire - 05/06/00 12:52:55
My Email:hotwire1@airmail.net
World of Origin: now this is impressive

Comments:
wow. that only begins to say it. this is perhaps one of the best Evafics I've read. it (imho) ranks up there with evaR and Variations on a theme. new character are always a touchy thing. and i was worried at first,(uberhacker and chasing after Rei are usu ly signs of evil) but we get a kid that is not only belivable, but sympathetic. his scuffles with Asuka are well done. dont resolve this any time soon, have em call a truce but this still has alot of milage before it can be belivably worked out. and as fa as the Shinji/Asuka thing? BRAVO! it always a experiance to see them try to fight their way through the wall the other has set up. the balcony scene was perfect. keep up the good work!

Joe - 05/03/00 03:42:04
My Email:joe@youknowwhat.com
World of Origin: Earth

Comments:
Great fanfic, I'm look forward to some new chapters.

Joe - 05/03/00 03:40:56
My Email:joe@youknowwhat.com

Comments:


Strider - 04/10/00 13:24:38
My Email:strider_richards@hotmail.com
World of Origin: Umm...Earth?

Comments:
Wow. Great Fanfic that one :) Good site too!

arkblazer - 04/09/00 04:02:29
My URL:http://dont have one
My Email:arkblazer@hotmail.com
World of Origin: .............uh????..........what da hell u talking 'bout

Comments:
....GREAT JOB!!!!!!! IT TOTALLY KICKS ASS!!!!!!!! i just hope that when i make my fan fiction it does 1 fifth of sucess as your fan fiction does i foun some things that bothered me 1 your acc was what i call a asi(auhor self insertion)but still it kick ass 2somethings where a rip off of evar but hey evar is a rip off of NGE 3the latter chapters wernt as good

Mark - 04/07/00 21:45:36

Comments:
Very nice work. I particularly like the hard edge in the piece. Tight plotting, rounded characterization on both original and additional characters...I can't wait to see where you go with this!

melange - 04/04/00 17:58:31
My URL:http://www.blue4rei.cjb.net

Comments:
nice fan fic.. just a suggestion though on improvement in one of the scene.. the scene where seele #12 is killed...it would have been better dramatically if the monolith simply disappeared after #12 screams...

Intrasonic - 03/31/00 21:35:24
My URL:http://www.angelfire.com/on2/intrasonic/
My Email:intrasonic@angelfire.com
World of Origin: Tetragene

Comments:
A good story. It's not everyone who can actually incorperate multiple subplots into a story at the same time. Is Eve by any chance partly a derivative of Emeraldas from the RPG 'Xenogears'? Keep up the writing.

X-Ray - 03/27/00 16:29:46
My URL:http://members.xoom.com/fantasticare
My Email:r.giammanco@datastudio.it
World of Origin: Sicania

Comments:
Well.. I really don't appreciate ACC, I don't like how Shinji behaves towards Rei, I don't like that Kensuke is not suitable like a Pilot, but.. This rocks! Gendo is characterized in a wonderfull way, I hope there will be more interaction between him and Ritsuko, and I simply LOVE EVE! Wow, this sure is a breaktrough! This idea is incredible! When she reached Shinji trough the net... Wow! Sure it is really interesting, I'm looking forward to an ending like Collodi's Pinocchio, but maybe I'm asking to much.

Silverfire - 03/22/00 18:57:59
My URL:http://homepages.go.com/~reanna20/index.html
World of Origin: Beyond Sanity's Edges

Comments:
Interesing site.

KoalaKiller - 03/17/00 09:28:49
My URL:http://key.net.au/~birdman/main.html
My Email:birdman@key.net.au

Comments:
I would have to say too, those new chapters weren't as good as the others, mainly becasue Shinji was missing. It goes to show that Eva isn't Eva without Baka-Shinji.

Gabriel Pitt - 02/17/00 21:04:02
World of Origin: Tokyo-3.5321

Comments:
I hate to have to say it, but I think you've lost your touch. The latest gospels just didn't work for me the way the rest did. I still love Eve though.

Darkinspiration - 01/30/00 04:11:46
My Email:coba@virtuel.collegebdeb.qc.ca
World of Origin: earth,present realm, primary plane

Comments:
Well the story is great.......awaiting chapter 12

C36 - 12/22/99 23:46:32
My URL:http://c36ffa.homepage.com/index.htm
My Email:Canis36@hotmail.com
World of Origin: Terra

Comments:
Great story, I really hope you can get the next chapter or two out sometime soon.

Evil-Paladin - 12/09/99 10:13:49
My URL:http://yomamma.com
My Email:knight21@in.com.au
World of Origin: eh?

Comments:
hey man, cool work and all..are you dead or what? please, PLEASE finish your fic!

Gabriel Pitt - 11/03/99 06:36:56
My Email:gapitt@hotmail.com
World of Origin: Megatopia

Comments:
I want more Eve. She is by far THE coolest concept you've developed so far, and has so much potential I don't even know where to start. I want to see Eve step into the spotlight (and on Taylor, I don't like him at all). P.S: (since the ice.org board is gone) Hey theDog, I've been looking, but yours is still only one of two negatives opinions I've found about the Gospels.

delirium - 10/27/99 10:04:27
My Email:whitewj1@mlc.wa.edu.au

Comments:
just dropped in again to say: thanks for getting 1:10 and 1:11 done- i am just about to read them. I use the internet thru school so I don't have a homepage, tho my Eva fanfic is still being written. i don't think i'll eva (heh heh) put it on the net... i think what you've done so far is excellent. you and EvaR have kept Evangelion alive for us all (except for, of course, poor Dogmaster3). P.S i also just looked at the ressurection site Mkultra mentioned-aaargh! It looks like a cut-and-paste job to me!

The Bard of Night - 10/25/99 04:08:07
World of Origin: Arthe

Comments:
I just read 1:11. It was very good (of course), bit it suffered from lack of an editor. All of the other chapters were so expertly edited--why not this one as well?

Thomas Kinnen - 10/13/99 03:44:27
My URL:http://www.anime.sobhrach.com/
My Email:tkinnen@anime.sobhrach.com
World of Origin: Many

Comments:
Great job on The Gospel of Malachel

Douglass Weeks - 10/01/99 19:37:07
My Email:weeksdo1@pilot.msu.edu
World of Origin: Wonder Central

Comments:
Thank you all for the comments, I really appreciate them. As for when 1:12 will be posted, well, the bad news is that updates are going to come even slower than they did over the summer. I have classes 9-5 three days a week, and the other four are devote to studying and doing everything else required to maintain a passing GPA. I'll try to do my best though. Thanks again for all your support.

Ntru§t - 10/01/99 04:24:24
My URL:http://www.flex.com.au/~glyde/
My Email:admin@nervhq.org

Comments:
Hey nice work. Gotta love the storyline. Keep up the good work so I can read more ^_^ Like the email address? :) later

KoalaKiller - 09/29/99 06:57:06
My URL:http://www.key.net.au/~birdman
My Email:birdman@key.net.au

Comments:
Just like to say again, this fic rulez!!!

Gmork - 09/26/99 23:59:04
My Email:thomap@rpi.edu
World of Origin: The Real One, but this is only a minor setback

Comments:
Love it, when's 12 going up?

mkultra - 09/05/99 23:13:05
My Email:mkultra@animefan.org

Comments:
Comments were made in this guestbook regarding plagiarism in "The Gospel of Malachel". But if you want to see plagiarism on a grand scale, read "Neon Genesis Evangelion: Resurrection". The author literally copies situations from the anime series and merel has his new character react to them. I suggest reading this fic on the website(http://anime.at/resurrection), and afterwards reading the guestbook to see what I and a lot of other people think about this trash. I do love "The Gospel of Malachel" by the w y.

Mike - 08/19/99 05:03:27
My Email:red05wing@mediaone.net
World of Origin: MI

Comments:
Luv ur story when u going to get 1:11 up? soon i hope :o) Mike

Danny - 08/06/99 11:40:30
My Email:coolwind@mailcity.com

Comments:
I don't like the way rei and gendou is potrayed in ur story... (anyway cannot get over the idea that someone else is getting rei instead of shinji....:P) Anyway, u did an excellent job... keep up the good work!!!

KoalaKIller - 07/30/99 01:57:25
My URL:http://www.key.net.au/~birdman/
My Email:birdman@key.net.au

Comments:
Just wondering if your going to release 1:11 int he next week, because I'm going away and I like to read it before I leave for 2 weeks.

Leareth - 07/27/99 14:20:44
My Email:leareth_@hotmail.com
World of Origin: Coruscant

Comments:
Great fanfic (the Gospel one). Ummmm, any updates coming soon - preferably within the next few minutes???

The Dog - 07/16/99 09:33:07
My Email:dogmaster3@hotmail.com
World of Origin: Eridani IV Anarkist Homeworld

Comments:
BTW did you pay all those dicks to say nice things about you or something? mon you def'naly need a pre reader. 'fe truth mon jah love de dog

The Dog - 07/16/99 09:21:52
My Email:dogmaster3@hotmail.com
World of Origin: Eridani IV Anarkist Homeworld

Comments:
I've retrurned to caontinue my criticsm... I didn't get the shooting scene. Unless their school is in the middle of a forest i think someone might've noticed 12 heavily armed men walking through the city. Especially if it's under such good survailance that they can detect gunfire a few seconds aft r it happens while a mile under the ground... That's just why i think it's a bit stupid. Rei only get her AT field after Gendo plants Adam in her womb. That dosen't happen till the Eva-series shows up. and the battle scene. thier tradionally fast cut.I don't have. Ap.roblem with.Tha.t it's only when ou don't understand a single thing of what happens. blood suddenly got on shinji's head and all of a sudden they we're being shot by weapons which only burrow through cameras? What like 6mm pistols. you said they were being shot by machine gun. A machine un it a heavy automatic weapon. like 7.62 or bigger. a 7.62 rifle can put a hole through a brick wall at 500 metres. if your gonna kill people and your good enought to sneak into a heavily guarded fortress city then your good enough to kill 3 kids. i don t have a problem with fiction i have a problem with stupidly improbable scenes ps do you have any pre readers?

Pookie - 07/12/99 21:09:31
World of Origin: I..uh....um...

Comments:
The Gospel is great!!!! I'm sorry you lost a whole bunch of your stuff, but you need to finish!!!!!!!!! Er...I mean, I really want to keep reading.

KoalaKiller - 07/08/99 02:27:20
My URL:http://www.key.net.au/~birdman/
My Email:birdman@key.net.au

Comments:
I'm jsut wondering, is this fic been discontinued or not.

Maher Al-Samkari - 05/25/99 22:22:47
My URL:http://www.eva-r.com
My Email:orbit@eva-r.com
World of Origin: huh? oh. . . I like vanilla.

Comments:
So THIS is where you've been going with those secret files . . . ha. Just kidding. . . nice page, good story--love the homages, they are quite fun ^^ BTW, I have some Shigeru lines for you. oh, and feel free to toss Aoi in the mix, if you want ^_-

Koalakiller - 05/25/99 08:19:21
My Email:birdman@key.net.au

Comments:
well 'The Dog', I like to see you do better. I myself like his story very much.

Douglass Weeks - 05/24/99 13:07:27
My Email:weeksdo1@pilot.msu.edu
World of Origin: Wonder Central

Comments:
In regards to the previous message: Ouch! I have been cut to the quick.

The Dog - 05/23/99 10:53:45
My Email:dogmaster3@hotmail.com
World of Origin: Eridani IV Anarkist Home World

Comments:
Ok.....ish far too much Eva-r plagarism Try Originality

Kei Masaki - 05/14/99 20:23:48
My URL:http://listen.to/kiyone
My Email:keiichi-dono@oocities.com
World of Origin: Jurai by way of Tokyo-3

Comments:
VERY good, very engaging. I want to see more of this.

KoalaKiller - 05/05/99 13:24:31
My Email:birdman@key.net.au

Comments:
I have to say that your story is one of my favors and hope to see 2:0 in the near future.

Shoshana The Supreme - 04/30/99 21:39:34
My URL:http://members.tripod.com/~Ana_Louisa_Francesca
My Email:Guarana69@aol.com
World of Origin: That information is not for disclosure.

Comments:
Ah, Doug. This is awesome. I'm really proud of you and everything you've done. Although I have been replaced as your editor-in-chief, I still look forward to whatever it is you write. (*wink* The Adam & Lilith story is great! Wherever did you come up with the idea?!)

Gwen White (Delirium) - 04/23/99 07:59:36
My Email:Whitewj1@mlc.wa.edu.au
World of Origin: Urt

Comments:
The quality of your Eva fanfic is formidibly high... I'm writing my own at the moment, among other things, and there's no doubt that this is one of the greatest fanfic pieces I've ever read! So-yay! THe Adam and Eve story is also very original- if you hav n't read the Sandman graphic novel series by Neil Gaiman yet, do so! That goes for anyone else reading this. It is one of my two main obsessions, the other being Evangelion. Thankyou for creating an incredibly cool website! Can't wait to see what's going to happen next...

Peter Vela - 04/19/99 02:44:41
My Email:bluezboy@hotmail.com
World of Origin: Apartment 402

Comments:
Top 3 NGE Fanfics: 1. EVA-R 2. The Gospel of Malachel 3. HERZ (Feel free to mail if you agree/disagree. Or mail about anything anyway!)

Zero-XIII (aka Jeff) - 04/14/99 20:52:45
My Email:jwchiu@erols.com
World of Origin: World 000000000013

Comments:
Hello, I really like the story, has a really good plot and very good characters. I can't wait to see what's going to happen. Keep writing. BTW: For some reason, the link to your email isn't working. Just thought you should know.

Jami Geimer - 04/14/99 07:02:45
My URL:http://www.msu.edu/~geimerja
My Email:geimerja@pilot.msu.edu
World of Origin: Dagobah

Comments:
hey hey, nice work on 1:9. Keep 'em coming, keep 'em coming!

Trikster - 04/09/99 01:58:24
My Email:Trikster@worldnet.att.net
World of Origin: Anthisis

Comments:
Intresting story (only up too 1:3 so far..) hope it keeps up with the quality ^_^

Gabriel Pitt - 04/08/99 05:04:41
My Email:gpitt@hotmail.com
World of Origin: Tokyo-3's kawaii manifestation.

Comments:
I still love your story. Eva-R watch out! The 2nd best fanfic on the net just might be raring for first! P.S: Eve is the coolest! Keep her around!

abby - 04/07/99 19:13:23
My URL:http://www.msu.edu/~fisherab
My Email:fisherab@pilot.msu.edu
World of Origin: i feel like i can claim ann arbor... but it's really dexter

Comments:
hi there, doug. just stopped by. didn't read the stories yet, but when i have time.... continually impressed by how much better you are at this stuff than me.

Jay G. - 01/30/99 19:55:12
My URL:http://www.wisc.edu/~jdgilles
My Email:jdgilles@students.wisc.edu

Comments:
Good Job on the gospels. I also liked your story Adam & Lillith very much. Keep it up.

Jerico - 01/19/99 17:54:38
My URL:http://www.undergrad.brandeis.edu/~jmele
My Email:jmele@brandeis.edu
World of Origin: Plutark

Comments:
Interesting work with Malachai. Not quite certain of your characterization of Gendou, but the quality of writing is excellent as is the plotting. The characterization of the others is excellent as well. Keep up the good work.

Jami G - 11/03/98 21:39:48
My URL:http://www.msu.edu/~geimerja
My Email:geimerja@pilot.msu.edu
World of Origin: Yavin 4

Comments:
this better work right this time doug!