Mordath takes a step closer to Arwyn.
DIALOGUE BOX 2 (Mordath): What? No final speech before you let the arrow fly?
DIALOGUE BOX 3 (Mordath): You aren't going to try and gloat and tell me how much you've waited for this moment and how you hope I rot in hell?
PANEL 3
Closeup on Mordath's eyes as a bit of red glame comes from his left eye. Arwyn is reflected in them.
DIALOGUE BOX 4 (Mordath): By the way, archer, you won't kill me, I have all the power in the...
PANEL 4
Very close on Arwyn's face as a tear streams down it. She is ready.
DIALOGUE BOX 5 (Arwyn): For my daughter.
PANEL 5
She lets go of the arrow and it begins to shoot.
NO DIALOGUE
PANEL 5
Close on Mordath's face and his look of surprise.
NO DIALOGUE
PAGES 17-18
Two page spread. The arrow rests firmly in Mordath's chest. Enormus amounts of energy come from his arms. His face looks up and begins to come apart as if from a skull. Arwyn backs away a little but is still facing him as he dies. Behind him we can still see the battle raging but the dragons appear to be flying away.
NO DIALOGUE
PAGE 19
Page is split into five horizontal panels, all the same size.
PANEL 1
Arwyn's POV as Mordath explodes into red fire, coming towards her.
NO DIALOGUE
PANEL 2
Almost completely white panel expect for Darian, Neera, and Kreeg, who are running at Arwyn's POV
NO DIALOGUE
PANEL 3
Same as the first panel, but the red flame is dangerously close.
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PANEL 4
Same as the second panel, with Darian, Neera, and Kreeg even closer, still running at Arwyn's POV.
PANEL 5
Extreme closeup of Arwyn's face. She is smiling wide and tears are streaming down her face.
DIALOGUE BOX 1 (Arwyn): Neera....?
PAGE 20
Full page splash. Arwyn's wounds are headed and she is now in a white dress with flowers in her hair. She embraces her daughter on her knees, and Darin stands behind her with his hand on her shoulder. Kreeg is jumping around in happiness.
PAGE 21
Full page splash. Big panel. Gareth is still holding Cassidy as he rides a dragon away from the enormous (think atom bomb) explosion in the background. About twenty dragons are behind them. The explosion is splitting off into five different direct lines away from the explosion. There is a little hint at something future to come.
DIALOGUE BOX 2 (Gareth): Thank you, Arwyn.
DIALOGUE BOX 3 (Cassidy): She didn't make it, did she?