Especially the part where Leon becomes a raving lunatic! I totally messed that up! I can't believe I wrote it! I love Leon to death! *MENTALLY SLAPPING SELF* So I have no idea why I turned him into an agressive jealous man, when I believe he's so gentle, kind, and sweet. Once again let's blame the fingers *LOL*
Sorry I couldn't put Louis with Kristy or Ada (or Nnadia for you Whyte Rose) *LOL* I couldn't decided so I killed Louis off instead! *Evil Laughter* muhahahaha.
I'm glad I finished this because I totally freaked out that I would finish it. I want to give special thanks to all the people who gave supportive, critizing, and inquiring comments because it helped guide how I wrote for my readers to understand my story better.
ORIGINAL WINGLIN COMMENTS
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first in line..glad that you are a fan of nnadia and ekin...thanks for the warning about the storyline..can't wait for more..update the other story too...
waterfall -- 6 November 2003 at 8:55 a.m.
I just want to give credit to where credit is due..you have a knack for storytelling..it is eye-catching and entertaining..after reading each chapter, i can't wait for more..in a way, you have satisfy my hope that those two would star in a series together one more time..hehehe..you wrote about my two favorite people...if possible..you can add in annie man..hehehe..
waterfall -- 25 November 2003 at 9:19 a.m.
wow..all the suspense and twist..you got me confuse as to which girl is which until the 3rd chapter..I am curious though..who is the girl in the first chapter who met a guy at the university?..i can't figure out who they are...keep on updating..
L o v e -- 25 November 2003 at 4:45 p.m.
Glad Annie's in this story, it's great so far, a little more info on the girls!! update soon
waterfall -- 4 December 2003 at 10:30 p.m.
glad that you update cause i have been waiting like forever..hehehe..
when are the sisters going to sit together and chat? it seems like they have their own life and no one interacts with each other like ekin and his brothers..so sad..
hope nnadia likes ekin soon..
??? -- 12 December 2003 at 5:34 a.m.
louis and kristy is a better couple than louis and ada!!!
plz.....i want louis and kristy
waterfall -- 12 December 2003 at 10:42 a.m.
I like louis with ada matchup than kristy and louis..just my opinion..oppostie attracts..hehehe..
i am so glad that you update today because it is raining, i am sick and i am bored..three chapters to keep occupied until the next chapter..keep up the good storytelling and update this one and the transporter too..
wing -- 12 December 2003 at 5:02 p.m.
louis and ada!
Cuti -- 12 December 2003 at 6:30 p.m.
Louis n Kristy plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
B.T.B -- 12 December 2003 at 10:32 p.m.
I personally like to see Kristy and Louis together,because they are really cute in "The Bad Boy" movie
Babycoolest -- 13 December 2003 at 7:21 a.m.
hmm... 4 sis and 3 bro. Ada and Kristy loves Louis and he feels the same for both, does that mean...
anywais update soon
Love Babycoolest
Burning Rain <burning_rain19@hotmail.com> -- 13 December 2003 at 11:34 a.m.
This story is awesome... Too bad, Dicky's not in it! But hey! I used to be a fan of Ekin.. He's hot! Kristy, Annie, so many cool casts in here! I haven't finish with all your chapters yet, because of school... My exams will be next week... But update!
eternity -- 13 December 2003 at 10:20 p.m.
i love your fanfic. keep up the good work. :)
4ever_viet -- 14 December 2003 at 3:01 a.m.
Hi, new reader. I'm loving your story. You are such a good writer. Your story is very well written. At first I was a little confuse, but then as I read on, I understood more of the story. I thought that Kristy was going to be some little slutty bitch. It was intriguing to think of her as that kind of character. But then I found out that it's only an act. I hope this is a Louis and Kristy story. I just love them together. Very well writtened. Update soon.
Tarepanda -- 14 December 2003 at 9:16 a.m.
Hey there! Nice chapters (still on chapter 4)!! I love your story already! Sorry for reading so slowly... I have no choice, too much going on these days. Glad it's Christmas though! hehehehe... I started a new story, but it's a bit crappy.. come visit it if you people want.
babycoolest -- 14 December 2003 at 9:45 a.m.
Hmm.. gang people looking for guys who are having girl troubles and say they are going to help out. Big plans are comingup!!!
update soon
Love Babycoolest
??? -- 15 December 2003 at 12:59 a.m.
wow.....nice update.......I seriously want LOUIS AND KRISTY 2GETHER!!!
i mean they are soooooooooo cute in babd boys 2 and another movie....4got what it was called!!
louis and kristy plz
lil_monkey -- 16 December 2003 at 9:46 p.m.
hey i lov ur storry nic and joey is soo cute.. up date soon
unique_azn_grl -- 17 December 2003 at 8:33 p.m.
mesmorized by ur story! louis and kristy!
maya -- 23 December 2003 at 7:05 p.m.
i have to say, your story very vivid...lol, but I like your blutness in your style of writing each character personality from good to bad. I love Ada and Louis pairing in this story and hope that they will end up together, because of their difference, they would be a great match together.
Keep up the awsome writing.
unique_azn_grl -- 24 December 2003 at 10:19 a.m.
HAPPY X_MAS EVE! *cough cough*? well hope u get better really fast.lolz update ASAP please!!
Sam -- 24 December 2003 at 2:56 p.m.
luv your story. i wish that louis and kristy can be together.
AquariusAngel -- 28 December 2003 at 6:25 p.m.
Luv ure story, hope Louis and Kristy can be together. Plz update soon!!! :)
MoonLight -- 29 December 2003 at 5:53 a.m.
OH - MY - GOD!! Total suspense and cliffhanger!! You definately must update soon!!! Good plot, sequence of events, climax and choice of characters!! =D
4ever_viet -- 29 December 2003 at 9:39 p.m.
OMG!!! That was such a great chapter! So much action! That was so suspenseful and full of excitement! Can't wait to read the next chapter! Update soon! Wonder if Louis will start to care more about Kristy now. You know me, Kristy and Louis fan! (lol)
Of course I'm Viet, if I'm not, why would I put Viet in my name? (lol).
??? -- 29 December 2003 at 11:08 p.m.
the story is sooooooooooo goood....
omg i want more....
why did you have to mke your story this interesting.....
your killing me...i want more
and i wnt louis and kristy together...like alwayz
update soon though..
it's soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo interesting
love alwyaz
???
sarah -- 30 December 2003 at 1:29 a.m.
what a wonderful story. So intense. Glad you killed off shu qi as I never really care for her. Awww...Ekin is so in love with Nadia...awww...he's so sweet to her and talking about a kiss worth a million dollars...hahahaa...now that's what I call "falling hard". Louis is stuck between two sisters. I feel so sorry for him. I prefer Ada over Kristy, though. Her character is more complex and interesting. And besides, it would make more sense if he chooses Ada as that's where his heart is. But, I can sense more complication in that relationship with Nicky being so obsessive and possessive of Ada...hmm... Poor Nick, doesn't know how to deal with Stephen and Joey...
Anyways, my favorite couple is still Ekin and Nadia. Please, please update soon as I'm so eager to find out the Nadia's fate.
sarah
MoonLight -- 30 December 2003 at 3:23 a.m.
hoa! 30 bullets! Louis and Joey are in the same positions. So sad and complicated. Nick is jealous and Stephen is possessive. Annie is.. let's just say, a confusing decision. Everyone noes that her father is wrong, including herself, but it's still her father. What are they going to do?? Is Nadia gonna live? Who the hell is gonna survive that many shots??
waterfall -- 30 December 2003 at 9:21 a.m.
I am back..thanks for your kind words of encourage for my flu..I have found the best cure of medicine for flu and that is take a three weeks vacation..which i am still enjoying my last week..haven't read all the updates and there are so many chapters..have to get my buns warm enough to sit and read all the chapters..hope you are enjoying your holidays as I am ...
MoonLight -- 30 December 2003 at 1:03 p.m.
Nadia's still not dead? When and how did the body's get switched? Leon.. it's always the quiet one isn't it?
4ever_viet -- 30 December 2003 at 8:45 p.m.
Great updates! So much action. You are good. So many twists and turns. Nadia is still alive and now she's with Leon. Louis is still stuck between Kristy and Ada. Who will he choose? I pick Kristy! (lol) But whatever, it's your story. This story gets better and better.
maya -- 30 December 2003 at 8:51 p.m.
Wow this story is getting very intense! Very creative writing there...the other day I went to LV and I thought of your story and can't wait to get home to read your update...update more soon..and hope Louis pick Ada soon..
sarah -- 30 December 2003 at 9:20 p.m.
Okay, now, i'm just confuse. How did Nadia survive with all the shots?? Unless, Leon is the one doing the shooting and shot blanks at her...hmm... Anyways, I was really sad and touched when Nadia died saving Ekin, but now I'm just disappointed that she is so wicked and deceitful. I feel sorry for Ekin buries in sorrow over his wife's death while she's somewhere doing another guy. I wouldn't forgive her if I were Ekin, but then that's just me...hihihi... Hope Nadia come to her senses soon before she caused anymore damages. As for Louis, hmmm...I don't know. The kissing scene in the hospital threw me off a little. I don't know how ppl can claim to love one person and lust after another. Oh well, I guess that is just normal human chacteristics, yeah?!! That's what make us human being so complicated.
Great job and geat twist!!
sarah
MoonLight -- 31 December 2003 at 11:11 a.m.
So all three Lai [Or was it Yang? or soemthing like dat?] sisters in the hopital? and Nadia is in hiding. Their life is so hard to live. Poor them. I have a feeling that it was Stephen's heart that's compatable with Joey's. NOOO!!! Does that mean that one of them is going to die? But Joey [and ME!!] LOVE~~ the both of them. *sniff* WAHHH!!! >.<
HAPPY NEW YEAR EVERYONE!!! [ny for me in Aust.]
unique_azn_grl -- 31 December 2003 at 12:15 p.m.
wassup? did anyone ever tell u, that ur a genius! lolz u should write scripts n make movies!! lolz well thanks for the so much updates!!!
Jen -- 1 January 2004 at 4:07 p.m.
just found this fic, and I really like it.Im dying to read more.
Jen not Jenny
4ever_viet -- 2 January 2004 at 9:48 p.m.
I love this fic so much! Like I said before, this story has so many twists and turns and so much action everywhere. Kristy and Ada are now in comas and Ada has a better chance of waking, does that mean Kristy will die? Please don't let her die!!! (lol) I still hope Louis chooses Kristy. So great, such a great fanfic. Love your writing style, you've got great writing skills! Oh ya, Happy New Years! =D
waterfall -- 4 January 2004 at 10:25 a.m.
killing off characters?? hope it is not our favorite one or else..protest!!!..does that means the end are near?..i guess every good thing must comes to an end sooner or later..
Babycoolest -- 4 January 2004 at 12:32 p.m.
Leon is so nice...well he is! Anyway, killing people off??? oh no!!
update soon
Love Babycoolest
4ever_viet -- 4 January 2004 at 8:53 p.m.
Great update. I feel sorry for these sisters. Two of them are in the hospital under harsh conditions, and loving one man. One is hiding from the world. All these pain and sorrow. I love it! (lol). So I guess Louis has chosen to be with Ada instead of Kristy huh? *sigh* I was hoping we would choose Kristy. But oh well, your story. It's great, really is. Can't wait to find out what happens next. Update soon!
maya -- 6 January 2004 at 1:07 a.m.
Yes, I have read all your chapters and it is getting better and better everytime!! I love the new twists and you just make me keep on guessing of your intention! Great job and please udate soon..I can't wait to see what happen to ada and louis and kristy...love your story!
little -- 6 January 2004 at 6:48 p.m.
how sad.. louis chose ada over kristy.. that's realli sad 4 me (wat can i do when i'm kristy's fan) but anyway.... both of them in hospital right now.. hope they'll get well soon so they could deal with the triangle love thing hehe.. update soon.. ^_^
??? -- 8 January 2004 at 10:34 p.m.
update soon....it's sooooooooooo cool rite now
why do authors have to do this??...alwayz stop at an interesting bit..*cries*..lol
so don't just sit and read teh comments....
update!!
sarah -- 9 January 2004 at 12:29 a.m.
while I pitied the lives of the sisters and understand Nadia's sense of vengeance, i also feel strongly that there is a line, a boundary for revenge and Nadia has crossed it. Regardless, whether the Wong's brothers are biologically related to Edward Wong is not important to me, but that Nadia should not carried out for deadly plans with children of her enemies...specially, when the sisters have killed off most of the men and the rest were dead. So, call me wicked or whatever...and eventhough, Nadia is my favorite character, I still think she should pay for all the innocent lives she has ruined because of her selfish hatred.
Just like to share my thought on this surpised turning point. Thanks for the wonderful update.
sarah
??? -- 9 January 2004 at 1:47 a.m.
omg....let ada die...
so that louis and kristy can be 2gether...
i know it's evil but plz
i really wanted those 2gether...lol
so yeah
update
i really wanna know what's gonna happen!!!
MoonLight -- 9 January 2004 at 2:26 a.m.
What's going to happen to ALL the guys now? Leon, Louis and Ekin are shot. Nick was confronted by Stephen. Frankie is a dimwit [I like him! Don't get me wrong, but he's so slow in this fic.] And as for the girls... Nadia is almost to the brink of insanity, Kristy is weak, Ada can't move and Joey is still unconscience, and still needs a heart transplant. Everyone here is talking about who Louis should choose. After reading the other comments and their opinions, I myself was wondering: Why don't you kill off Louis so that the fight will be over? LoLz!! But what is happening to the triangle of Joey, Nicholas and Stephen? Update soon, but I understand if you need to do your skool stuff. =)
4ever_viet -- 9 January 2004 at 10:39 p.m.
OMG!!! More events unfolding. So great! I love it! Nadia is about to go insane, I feel so sorry for her though, suffering from her past. Poor Kristy and Ada, at least Kristy is able to move now, but poor Ada can't even move. I feel so sorry for this sisters, and Joey is still unconscious. So much pain. And so many triangles. I still want Louis to be with Kristy, but hey that's just me (lol). Update soon! =D
Whyte Rose -- 10 January 2004 at 4:49 a.m.
hahaha I see moonlight again but I'm not lucky enough to comment ontop of her comment this time like I did the last four times. lol
Well Lil sorrow you've really gotten me hyped up now! Stephen better put that gun down!
Lil sorrow you better not kill Nadia!!!!!! i read the comment someone had about Nadia going too far! that had a load of shit! sorry for my language but really now she didn't seem like she wanted to kill ekin after hearing him say so much sweet things to her!!! it was leon framing louis that made her upset! wouldn't you be mad if your sisters were played by some guy! sheesh! she was raped and become a slave to men and was taught how to trick men! have you ever went throught that? idiot.
Nadia had the hardest life in this story, please let her have a good one! please!!
little -- 10 January 2004 at 1:28 p.m.
oh my my.. wat a sad stori here.. how come everyone got shot??? blood everywhere.. hehe.. one got shot and 2 awake.. cant wait to read more.. wat's gonna happen next with kristy and ada.. are they gonna be ok?? i agree.. just let louis die so the 2 sis dont need to choose hehe.. ^_^ dont need to rude the sis sis relationship..
sarah -- 11 January 2004 at 5:55 p.m.
thank you for taking the time out to explain your point of view regarding my opinion on revenge. In the end, this is all a matter of opinion and every one is entitled to their own. While I believe that Nadia's action is undertandable, I don't believe that raping deserve death sentence and I think that is why US court don't issue death sentence to ppl committed rape. AGain, I wanted to emphasize the point here that the sisters killed most of the men who kidnapped and raped them. They planned to killed Simon who was a threat to their lives and succeeded. Planning against the Wong's brothers is taking a step to far and wanting to kill Louis just because he "cheated" on her sisters is just...well, treating human life very cheap. She's doing almost the exact same thing to others like the bastards that hurt her and her sisters. As this is fanfic, I enjoy the dilemma and intensity of the story. If this is real life and I'm a jurror in Nadia's case, well, she would be guilty on my count unless of course they pleaded "moment of insanity."
sarah
??? -- 11 January 2004 at 10:14 p.m.
omg.....the story is sooooooo sad now!!!
it made me cry*sniffs*
omg poor kristy have to suffer the pain!!!
nadia is insane...she can't even remembah her sistas...that's sad
and ada is paralyzed...omg...and louis died!!!
omg it's soo tragic...but i love it...
but if you ever decide to write another fanfic..plz put louis and kristy 2gether...lol
update soon...i wanna read more
man this story is like a drug...so addicted to it!!!
MoonLight -- 12 January 2004 at 3:03 a.m.
So dramtic! Leon is in recovery, Ekin and Louis is dead and Nick, we don't even know if Stephen is going to shoot him. The girls, one coma, one paralised, one mental and one heartbroken, which = death anyways, and now Annie has her memories back and can't handle reality.
You killed off so many, more are going to be dead or they have either mental (Nnadia), emotional (Kristy) or physical (Ada) disability. A total TRAGEDY!! What else can go wrong?!! The two 'Wong' [cause they were 'adopted' by Edward] brothers are dead but you left Leon still hanging onto life!! How is that possible??!
little -- 12 January 2004 at 9:47 a.m.
wow.. cant believe u let them die.. but it's good for the sisters then.. they wont have any suffer anymore.. hehe... but seem like they got more pain than before.. wat's gonna happen to kristy, ada and nadia?? r they gonna be ok?? will kristy die?? please dont let her.. it's gonna be really sad.. so... update soon.. k?? ^_^
sarah -- 12 January 2004 at 1:40 p.m.
well, i guess no need the plead of 'moment of insanity' as Nadia is really losing her mind. How sad that subconciously she's choosing this path as she can't face the harsh reality. I'm not too concern with Kristy because she woke up so, she should be okay. Ada, however, is paralyzed from the waist down. Such cruelty. I hope miracle does happen for her so she can go back home and start life over again as she has always dream of. As for Joey, so Nick's heart is compatible with her, huh?!! Well, that's good. Joey wouldn't be very happy knowing Nick died so that she can survive, though. *sigh* huhuhu...my two fav. male leads died. *sigh again* Oh well, I kinda expect this tragic ending as you did give a big clue from the beginning..."four sisters, three brothers, no survivors..."
sarah
lady sunz -- 12 January 2004 at 5:12 p.m.
great story, love it.
swtbabe613 -- 13 January 2004 at 3:10 p.m.
ur soo cruel.. soo many deaths of the leads in one chapter.. ur killing me.. reading it made me want to cry.. i just join this story but damn it's soo good.. *clap clap* anyways update soon.. i'm waiting for it!!
MoonLight -- 16 January 2004 at 9:38 a.m.
Just browsing around... I just want to know what's going to happen to Joey. I realli love Nic, Stephen and Joey. =)
Aye swtbabe613, you sure you want to join the story? IiIsorrowIiI might kill you off too! LoLz.
... -- 16 January 2004 at 7:43 p.m.
UPDATE again!!! i want to read MORE. i'm addicted to your story
??? -- 16 January 2004 at 8:32 p.m.
wow.....you did a pretty good job..
i like this story most out of all....that doesn't mean that your other stories aer shit/crappy!!
i like this one alot alot!!
wow.....you done a great job and you should be proud of urself!!
love
???
4ever_viet -- 16 January 2004 at 9:28 p.m.
Great ending! Even though practically every single character died (lol). But great story overall. I really like the ending passage you wrote. Makes you think. Tofu store owner and a chicken farmer? (lol) I thought that was pretty funny. Overall, great story! Hopefully, you'll write a story where Louis and Kristy are together. I'm just a big time Louis and Kristy fan! =D Great job girl! Two big thumbs up!
waterfall -- 16 January 2004 at 10:44 p.m.
what an ending! bravo to you lilsorrowlil..hat off to you!..until the end, i was still hoping ekin and louis pulled a nadia's stunt and come back to live but i was wrong..guess they are dead..can't wait for update on the otehr stories..
MoonLight -- 17 January 2004 at 8:58 a.m.
WAAAAHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!! STEPHEEEEEEEEEEENNNNNNN!!!!!!!!! NOOO FAIIIIIIIRRRR!!! *sniff sniff* He *hiccup* d-d-died... *whails~~*
But other than that, it was VERY VERY FANTASTIC!!! The ending was definately unpredictable! Hope your other future fics are as good. But if you're going to be making a Louis and Kristy fic, I have to say beforehand, I might be there to comment, cause I'm nt such a big fan of them. So I don't think I'll be reading of thier fics atm.
LoLz. I told you to kill off Louis.. and you did... Hahahhaha... goodluck with your other fics. =)
MoonLight -- 17 January 2004 at 8:59 a.m.
Whoops, mistake on previous post. What I was meant to say say was that I might NOT be commenting on KL fic. Nothing personal to you. Dws. =)
Babycoolest <babycoolest@hotmail.com> -- 17 January 2004 at 1:34 p.m.
That was a depressing ending and yet if there was life after death the two guys would still fight over Nnadia right? Lol
Cool ending.
Love Babycoolest
Whyte Rose -- 19 January 2004 at 9:58 a.m.
I was wondering how you started pairing Nadia up with Ekin but when I asked my video store owner about them I saw them in like 10 movies together! I was like WOW! I guess they were a great couple once. I'm going to rent one and check it out.
Your story left me in tears!!!!!!!!!!!! I love it! I'm going to save this in my favorite story list. The ending words of encouragement made me feel like a burden was lifted off my shoulders. Very inspirational! I will read all your stories even if I don't comment! I love them. Make sure to add Nic and Joey in all of them! :)
maya -- 20 January 2004 at 1:33 a.m.
Ahhhhhhhhhhhh.....I can't believe you kill Louis off!!Ok got to admitted that is the best solution to keeping all the reader happy, being ada or kristy fan...lol..anyhow I totally think that this story is very well written and I really enjoy reading it...thanks and hope to read more of your story with ada on it.
] | )arkness I3L@Z3 -- 20 January 2004 at 5:56 p.m.
OMG OMG OMG.....ur story is so good i luved it
i spented de whole nite readin ur story ur such a
good writer...oh n i cant belived u killed ekin >.<
oh wellz itz ur story so yerh anywaiz hope u do well
in ur other story as diz 1
CYA
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