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The Birth of a Hero: The Beginning
All stories must have a beginning, and thus it shall be in this one. A poor boy caught at the wrong place and time sacrifices himself to save the girl he loves. Who is this boy? But more importantly, who is this demon, and what is his mission?
The Birth of a Hero: The End?
With his demonic power, the demon crushes the boy with all his might. As the boy lays crippled on the ground, his last remaining thoughts are of the one he loves, and how he failed to stop the demon.
The Birth of a Hero: Death of a Beloved
As the boy lay crippled on the ground, waiting for his fate, the demon decides to torture him in the worst way possible. The boy realizes that the screams are his beloveds, and he opens his eyes just long enough to witness her death. Driven insane by his sight, his eyes grow bloodshot with hatred, and can focus only on the demonic entity before him. The last thing the boy hears is the demons screams as he loses consciousness.
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