dilemma and a surprise in the end! Enjoy the next chapter should be up soon.
Please review I'll really like it!! I am not going to describe the character
that we know like MWPP because you and Alaina already know what they look
like. It goes the same to places familiar,)
Draco: This means she's gonna spend the whole damn fic talking about herself.
Harry: What is it with Icz and Mary Sues?
Icz: I bear a great towards Mary Sues.
The Queen Of Seers
Chapter one: The Unsurprising Surprise
Hermione: This is a contradiction in terms.
Draco: It's also a lame attempt at being clever.
Dear Journal, I, Alaina Rose Cooper sat admiring my good looks. To a stranger
this may seem like I was conceited but I really wasn't. I wasn't because I
spent 10 years of my life as a fat, ugly, bushy, poof haired, dull eyed,
freak. (AN: okay she is exaggerating a little)
Harry: Having a character seem vain and conceited is not a good to connect
with the readers.
Ron: And the whole fat and ugly thing is cheap attempt at reader sympathy.
Now I was 10 years, 11 months, 364 day, and 22 hours old. I now had dark
brown hair, its straight when I want it to be but sometimes I let it loosely
curl, bright green eyes, a lovely figure, and straight white teeth. Now just
in case you were wondering Journal I'll write a list of the ways I got pretty
Fat- two months mono caught from my semi-evil sister (semi- cause she can be
nice) Bushy hair-lets just say some salon 'magic;' Dull eyes- hello contacts
Duh! (AN: well not Duh, if u aren't muggle) Teeth- braces and Crest Whitening
Color of hair- dark brown dye
Hermione: You know it'd be nice if she broke this into paragraphs.
Draco: What a nice message! Change your looks to fit the standard and
happiness is yours!
Harry: Should I mention I don't care how she got pretty?
Well buh byes Journal see you soon! ~*~Alaina~*~ Now back to the story:
Draco: Oh god that wasn't even the story!
Hermione: And a good way to lose weight is to catch mono?
glanced at the clock and realized I had two minutes 'til I turned eleven...
30 seconds... 10 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 Then I heard a "tap... tap... tapity tap"
I knew at once that an owl was making that noise... a Hogwarts Owl. I being
from muggle parentage should be suprised but I wasn't. I knew all about
Hogwarts.
Harry: Mary Sue powers ahoy!
Ron: How did she know about hogwarts?
Draco: Judging from the title she must be a seer.
I also knew I was a witch. I knew all about Hogwarts because well, the same
reasons you (a muggle) do. I read the Harry Potter Books!(A/N: an odd turn of
event a..?) But you see the odd thing is that I am going to school with
Sirius, Lily, James, Remus, and Peter. So the books weren't written yet.
Draco: Oh Christ she's contradicting herself!
Hermione: Deep hurting, deep hurting...
(AN: the copy write is like 1997 or something) Of course I wouldn't expect to
be a witch if a) I hadn't seen it in a dream, you see I a Seer. Or b) I made
magical things happen all the time. If your wondering how I got the HP books
being a witch and the fact that they weren't supposed to be written yet.
Harry: No were wondering if it's worth chewing off a limb to get out of here!
Hermione: This..just..doesn't make any sense!
Ron: Nod and smile 'Mione.
I'm a Seer as I said before. But I'm not just `a' Seer I'm `The' Seer. A.K.A
the Queen of Seers. The books were gifts from a special friend of mine,
Atlanta or the Dreamspeaker (AN: that's from the great books Unicorns of
Balinor!! I love them).
Draco: So not only is she butchering us, but she's dragging another down with
her.
Ron: Atlanta or the Dreamspeaker? Make up your damn mind!
They are books of what `could' happen in the future if I don't warn and help
Lily, James, Peter (AN: I'm getting really tired of writing AN: so when u see
(and it makes a comment its from me. Hate Peter!!),
Draco: And were tired of hearing them!
and Sirius the bad things would happen. So I wasn't suprised at all. I also
had a job to make them believe me and change the future. Phewwww, I have my
work cut out for me! I finished reading the usual expectance letter and the
list of supplies and turned to another letter in the envelope.
Ron: This has to be the lamest use of time travel I've ever seen!
Harry: God it's either unreadable or boring!
I knew it was from Professor Dumbledor. Dear Alaina Cooper, I know you are
not suprised by this letter or the knowledge of the magical world. You also
know your job as The Seer. I also want to warn you that Lord Voldemort is
going to try to get you on his side.
Draco: Yet another Mary Sue sign.
Harry: Being pursued or lusted after by the main villan.
You and only you know and can change his downfall. Keep this in mind and have
a great summer. Sincerely, Professor Dumbledor Headmaster " Well" I sighed
out loud " I better explain to mom and dad"
Hermione: When someone speaks go to a diffrent paragraph dear.
So I walked out sadly knowing it wouldn't be easy to get them to believe me.
I saw my mom out on the patio and walk to her silently. " Mom, you know those
books I was telling you about, the wizard ones?" I said cautiously.
Draco: Actually they hoping she read the do it yourself suicide guide.
" Not them again hunni, you are not a witch!" this was an on going argument
in the Cooper household " I have proof!" I yelled, frustratedly throwing the
letter on her lap. She opened it cautiously.
Harry: Because her Mom had never gotten a letter before.
And read it a look of bewilderment coming over her face. " This looks really
real, and you couldn't forge a thing like this, I guess I believe you, but
that doesn't mean you can go."
Hermione: And yet another damn contradiction!
Draco: Maybe this story will contradict itself out of exsistance.
She answered. ''What! I have to I told you I'm the Queen of Seers!" I was
getting mad "Now hunni I can't live without you to take care of things." " I
have to go! Other people can take care of Deanna!"
Harry: Oh now we learn the characters name! This is good writing here people.
I was pleading now "I'll write a letter and have Hagrid pick me up!" I
stormed to my room and did just that.
Harry: You just an attempt at creativitiy would be nice here.
Within an hour I had my response. Dear Alaina, I am saddened by your mother's
threat but not troubled. I will send someone to get you but not Hagrid. It
will be a surprise. Don't worry, everything will be all right.
Draco: 5 knuts on James Potter being there.
They will be there tomorrow morning. Good luck, Albus Dumbledor She stared at
the signature wondering why he signed it Albus instead of Professor. Then
fell asleep wondering who would be the surprise.
Ron: Boredom or contradiction, boredom or contradiction...
You see I am not `all knowing' I only know stuff that is important. I also
can't see what will happen to me, only other people. That's the price of
being a queen.
Hermione: No arrogance here at all!
[Icz not time for closing! Enjoy!]
Harry: It's over thank God!