and measuring her, then
leaving it to continue on its own as he spoke of what the wands were made of,
and the history of the shop.
Harry: Cause ya know this stuff was really important for an eleven year old
to know...
Ollivander soon went for wands, first bringing her...
Draco: A gun which he used to shoot the annoying Mary-Sue in the head thus
ending this fic.
Harry: If only...
"Holly, 9 inches, unicorn hair.....No no...not right at all..."
then...
"Yew, 12 inches, dragon heart string...hmm..close..but not right..."
Harry: Yes we've all seen the wand scene in my books can we get on with it?!
and after many many more trys he came upon a very special...powerful and
unique wand...
Hermione: A super, duper ultapowerful, wand which give her immense reader
annoying powers.
Draco: But she already has those...
"Hmm..this is a very strange thing indeed.."He whispered.
"What?"Alantia and Tam asked
"This wand...it is Rosewood, 11 inches, the core of unicorn hair, pheonix
feather, veela hair, and dragon
heart string...."He gulped it seemed...then continued,"This wand is the only
veela hair wand ever sold in this
shop and it will do many great things...as your father's has and
will...here..give it a test..."
Ron: Damn that's a lot of stuff to cram into a single wand
Draco: Veela hair? Since when is Veela hair an ultra powerful magical
substance?
And with that Ollivander gave her the wand and she swished and flicked, then
silver and green sparks shot
fourth.
"Ah, yes...a perfect match...that will be seven galleons."
Draco: Because knowing how much the wand costs is so very important
Alantia paid Ollivander and they left, Tam amazed and smiling brightly at her
wonderful new wand, until she
looked to her mom...she had a question her mother hoped she'd never ask...
"Mum'ma, What happen to da'da?"
Hermione: Well dear he was driven off by your abuse of commas.
Alantia froze in place and stared at her daughter she wasn't quite sure what
to say, so she sighed, and said
the truth...
Draco: As opposed to lying to her for no apparent reason.
"Well...Tam, your grandma Lidia hated him and she refused to let me see or
write to him when she found
out that I was pregnant with you, and well he stopped writing and after
awhile you were born and he wrote
again...twice...and three times when you were a year old, but mum burned the
letters and I never heard from
him again..."
Harry: Cause ya know he couldn't use magic to track us down.
Draco: Shouldn't he be starting on his 'Rein of Terror' now?
Ron: That would be in a good fic.
When Alantia had finished Tam's eyes were filled with tears.
"S-so h-he didn't care?"Tam whispered, a few tears leaking out and rolling
down her cheeks.
"No!"Alantia exclaimed,"Of course he cared! He cared more about you then
anything else in life, it was just
that grandma Lidia, and well he didn't wanna risk...well you know..."
Harry: Insert sarcastic comments about how their wizards and can use magic...
Draco: Really? Here I thought all Voldemort cared about was power
Tam simply nodded and continued on down the road to the pet store and so on,
with Alantia following
behind.
After a long while Alantia and Tam had finished and Tam carried her new
belongings along back to the hotel
they were staying in.
"Tam, I hope you're not upset or anything...I'm really sorry, I should have
told you alon-"
"No Mum'ma, its ok. I'll be off to bed now...it's nearly nine o' clock you
know...well night night..."Tam
yawned as they made it into the hotel room, setting her things down by the
wall and heading off the the
quarters with her bed.
Ron: Oh God, the drama, the intense action, the endearing characters.. I
can't take it!
Draco: You have been spending waay too much time around me...
"Night night my dear Tamary..."Alantia whispered heading off to her own
quarters with a deep, sadden sigh.
Alantia quickly undressed, and pulled her long brown hair into a pony tail,
and got into her silken night wear.
She pulled back and soft satan sheets and laid on her bed, curling up in her
sheets and closing her eyes,
thinking about Tom, she pulled the covers over her head and softly cried
herself to sleep, not knowing in a
few hours her life would change...
Hermione: Good God how I hate these death sentences!
Draco: Satan sheets? So even the author agrees she a force of pure evil
In Italy in a large and grand villa sat Tom, he was miserable, his loyal
servant Lucifer Malfoy had poisoned
Lida and killed her, making it posible for Tom to go see his daughter and
'fiance', but the moment he
apparated to paris, to the manor she stayed in with her father and Tam,
Alantia had left for Scottland, and
that was four years ago, he had his servants searching night and day, but
still they could not find Alantia and
Tam, it was as if they'd been wiped of the face of the earth, but
then...Rosilyn Harper, a young 'slave' Lucifer
Malfoy had got a letter from Alantia, it seemed that she and Alantia had been
friends growing up, and now
their children were friends...meaning she she held the key to finding
Alantia, but at the moment she too was
no where to be found. <Btw, thats ONE SENTENCE
Hermione: Sweet mother of God..
Draco: That was a sentence?
Ron: It's worth pointing out that we now have Mary-Sue number three...
Harry: I've said before and I'll say it again, THEY'RE FUCKING WIZARDS! They
can figure out a way to find each other!
Tom sat waiting...and waiting until finally there was a knock at his window
he glanced over and it was,
Slyth, Lucifer Malfoy's owl. Tom sighed at this and snapped his fingers
twice, the window opened and the
owl flew to him, let him have the letter, hooting madly and flying off. Tom
grumbled about the bird being
disrespectful, and sat back down, opening the letter, his jaw dropping as he
read...in only a few hours his life
would be perfect.
Draco: He was finally going to take over the world?
Harry: Nope he's gonna be reunited with Mary-Sue and Mary-Sue junior
Hours passed and Alantia laid still sleeping, peacefully compared to how she
had been hours ago when
crying. She continued to sleep, not knowing her hopes and dreams were about
to come true as Tom
apparated to her room and sat on her bed, pulling the sheets away from her
face, gently stroking her hair
back.
Hermione: Why he didn't apparate there years ago is a mystery for the ages.
"Alan',"Tom whispered,"Please wake up...."
Tom's face was so close to Alantia's that as he spoke his lips brushed
against hers, and when he stopped
speaking, he pressed his lips gently against her's giving her a soft loving
kiss, and she quickly stirred.
Draco: Tom the stalker
"AAAAAAAAHHHHH!"Alantia shrieked, which was partly muffled as Tom deeped the
kiss, causing her to
realise it was him...for no one could kiss like Tom Riddle, but just to make
sure... "Thomas?"She whispered
as their kiss broke.
Harry: Lordy what is it with this author and long pointless titles?
Draco: Let's just be happy the character actually reacted in an almost normal
way
Tom only glared at her, yep..it was him alright, even in the shadowy darkness
of her room she could see it in
his deep emerald eyes...
Hermione: Unless she used a light there's no frigging way she could tell what
color his eyes are in the dark.
Draco: Maybe he's been hanging out near the nuclear power plant?
"Alantia...I've missed you so mu-Where is Tamary?"He asked sitting up, and
giving her room to do the
same.
"In her quarters...hang on...TAMARY MARVOLONE RIDDLE GET UP!"
Harry: Cause walking in an waking her up would be, ya know, normal
After Alantia's scream, Tom looked shaken, as loud as that was there was no
doubting she had awoken the
dead...but on lighter notes a sleepy Tam came running in.
Ron: So she a necromancer now?
Hermione: I wouldn't be surprized
"Yes, Mum'ma?"Tam yawned, Tom making personal notes on the fact she sounded
to proper, yet none the
less very beautiful.
Harry: His hearing is so damn good he tell what she looks like from the sound
of her voice.
Draco: And would all children be beautiful to they're parents?
Tom of course, even though he realised Tam wouldn't know who he was, picked
up Tam and hugged her
tight causing her to scream and cry in fear, she knew it wasn't Alantia. Tam
sniffled and cried nervously,
Alantia laughing so hard at Tom she forgot to tell Tam who Tom was.
Draco: Oh there you go. Wake your 11 year old daugther in the middle of the
night, than fling some strange man she hardly know on her, then laugh!
Ron: Oh yeah this is supreb parenting right here...
"P-please d-don't kill me...."Tam squeaked, making Tom laugh and set her
down, looking her over, grinning.
Draco: [Tom] Hahahah! My daughter thinks I'm gonna kill her!
Harry: That was funny how?
"I'd never kill you Tamary."Tom smiled."I'm your father..."
"My father?"Tamary whispered."Lumos!"
Tam had been practicing that and a few other spells with her dead grandma's
wand for 3 and a half years
now....Tom grinned.
Hermione: He's doing far too much grinning in this story
"Oh my god...You are my dad!"Tam said looking at Tom in shock, then turnning
to Alantia.
Draco: Cause one glace at his face proves it.
"Mother!"She squeaked excitedly,"You got dad'da here for me?"
Draco: [Alantia] Yes so stop speaking like a five year old you twit!
"No...he just came...and asked to see you."She whispered, standing up and
walking to the two smiling.
"I came because Rosilyn told me you were here, and I needed to see you
guys...I missed you Alantia...and
Tam,"Tom kneeled down beside his daughter, making him abit shorted then
her."I had to get to know
you...I've sent so many things for you, but Lucifer Malfoy...You know him
right?"Tam nodded."Well he said
that bitch Lidia burned them all, and spent the money I sent 4 times a
year...."
Hermione: How could she spend ten thousand galleons?
Draco: And why would Lucifer Malfoy work for him? Didn't he kill his brother?
Ron: I find it hard to believe that someone as all powerful as Lidia is could
be taken out by poision.
"So thats why I never heard from you Da'da?"
"Yes...but didn't Alantia give you the diary and locket?"
"Locket?...Diary?..."Tam stared at Alantia, whom bit her lip and looked away.
"Alantia! You didn't give it to her!?!"Tom asked, now he too stared at
Alantia.
"Well I was scared it would hurt her....."She whispered then frowned."Look I
need rest and so does
Tam...You can stay on the couch and Tam, you go to bed...Good night!"
Harry: So the man she pining after for 12 odd years returns to her and she
sends him to sleep on the couch?
Hermione: While letting her daughter meet him for about five minutes
Ron: And they really should talk about the whole dark magic artifacts issue...
Alantia smiled and shooed them out, Tom and Tam's jaws dropped. Alantia
climbed into bed, and fell asleep,
after the aid of her sleeping potion, that was on the night stand, while Tom
and Tam had a discussion on the
importantance of The Slytherin House, being in it, becoming prefect, then
head girl, all the while learning the
wonder arts of Dark Magic...which of course was Tam's favorit kind of magic.
Draco: So despite thinking he's gonna kill her she's able to form a instant
rappor with her long lost father..
Harry: Closing thoughts?
Draco: Just one.. WHY dear god WHY?
Hermione: I'm with him..
Ron: Ditto
Harry: That's all...
[By Iczer6]