care if you insult me and everything I stand for, I like reviews. These are just the ones that I liked a tad less
than others.
The Bad
1.A renaissance of words gone bad. (The most eloquently way Ive ever been put down)
2. Hey! Falcon is cool! I don't know the others....(Point of interest, Falcon didnt have a thing to do with the
fic specifically. Mother FUCKER man.)
3. *smiles* good start...... (I feel like a mom at Christmas, where the kids trying to convince her they like the
gifts that suck)
4. Can I MST Drifting fears? (...Can I use you as a surfboard in a river of lava?)
5. WHAT night in Hogsmeade???????????? (I spent the entire story describing that night)
6. The only thing I have to say is that it had some really distracting typos--if you ever need a beta reader,
drop me a line (Thats the ONLY thing you have to say? Damn...)
7. That was very nice. (Christmas Morning, Part 2)
8. I don't get it. (Thats because I wrote it for *smart* people)
9. HOLY SHIT! YOU SUCK! GO TO A MENTAL HOSPITAL BECAUSE YOU HAVE MAJOR
PROBLEMS BAKA!!!!!!!WORST AUTHOR EVER!!!!!!BITCHED UP LOSER!!!!!!!!! (I got put down by
a fan girl! Let alone someone who uses the word bitched. Bitched is not a word. And if it was, theyd be
using it incorrectly. The ‘worst author ever’ hurts a bit, as well)
10. that was... interesting. VERY. interesting. you should try it again. The ending, the alive, ah. once, when i
was in love, i felt alive. i remember. dead inside now, but your story reminded me. thank you. (*Blinks*
Well... uh... yay?)
11. it was terrible it was terrible i hated it and it was very inappropriate and i think that homosexual stuff is
not good for this site it only brings it down it was a bad choice to put it on the page (‘That homsexual stuff?’
Hm... whats weird is it was reviewed by a girl. Who, erm, read one chapter of it. So Im guessing it was a
form review done to all slash. Bitch)
12. oh my gods....
i cry, like anyone else, but with no tears, the same pain fills me, only my face stays dry. (Then you dont cry
like anyone else as all. And you depressed me. Thanks a lot, Miyama)
13. Your KILLING THEM!!!!! Please tell me that their not really dead. Or at least together in an after life
or something. PLEASE? I hate it when they die at the end!!!! (Well thanks for saying you hated my big
climatical ending.)
14. (sigh) Like, but would have prefered longer chapters. (Theyd only read two chapters at this point. Not to
mention the short chapters were an experiment I was doing specifically for that story)
15. *Blank Space* (This is a compilation of EVERY review I ever got for Tempered *Mutters
Angrily*)
The Crying
I loved this story.....it made me cry
*sob* so beautiful! so beautiful! okay, excuse me while i go cry a bit for happiness!
oh my gods....
i cry, like anyone else, but with no tears, the same pain fills me, only my face stays dry. (I know Ive poked a
little bit of fun at this review, but Im still very fond of it)
this, however, made me weep. completely.
i haven't done that in years.
thank you
OMG I am crying ::wipes her tears:: this was...it had to be the most beautiful story I have ever read... it was
heart wrenching. Please you three(?) must keep writing
*sob sob sob sob sob sob sob* so sad....... *snif snif* it was one of the best fics i've ver had the privilage of
escaping my life into.... *snif*
O_O
noooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *drops to knees* not draco-sama!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *sob sob sob* (Knee
dropping emotion? Ill take that over getting some girl off with liquid slash any day)
I decided to let you know that I'm reading it again, right now, thirty seconds after I posted that other review.
Since this is one of the few chapters I didn't review before, here we are. This is why you need to continue.
Oh, and just thought I'd let you know. NOW I'm crying, after I reread 14 and 15. Congradulations, you
made me cry. And I really mean that; most people can't do it, I usually only make myself cry. You're an
amazing author with a real gift! Use it. (I think you should marry me, whoever you are...)
::has tears flowing from her eys:: Harry. My God. ::sobs:: The poor creature. ::takes deep breath:: They
don't desrve that. And I hate your ending! ::glares:: ::tears are still running:: No I don't. ::sighs:: This is one
of the best stories I ever read. I'm gonna *make* my best friend read this! ::shudders:: My God. I think this
is the most likly or fitting ending ever. One gets tiered of the And The Lived Happily Ever After crap.
::sobs:: But one still wish it. ::breaths deeply, trying to control the tears:: ::fails:: Harry, my poor poor thing.
::sighs:: Have I mentioned this is one of the best stories I ever read? Yes? Well, you deserve to hear it one
more time! This is one of the best stories I ever read! Damn it! Oh, and by the way, I know what you mean,
about the faitful readers and all. I'm an author here in ff.n myself. I'm just to damn lasy to sign in. ::smiles
weakly:: ::sighs:: I'm guessing no sequel, he? ::sad smile:: Anything else you're planing, though? I'd love to
read it. ::sighs:: I can't believe this. my darling Harry, and Draco... ::sighs again::
No!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Oh my god!!!!!!
No!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ::is crying:: No!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Not
Draco!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! God, please no Draco! ::sobs:: My God! ::breaths deeply:: I ca't review right
now! I'll - I'll - ::starts crying:: Draco! ::sobs:: Harry - ::sobs:: poor thing! I'm so sorry for him. Please, post
the next chapter soon.
The ‘Best’
Thank you. I'm in a good mood, and somehow I found that strangely hopeful... I don't know if that's what
you were going for, but it helped me. It's perfect; don't add or change a thing! I love you for writing it
though. It's a beautiful story, and I feel that this really does complete it and come full cycle. It was perfect.
(Perfect, eh? Hah! Less than perfect- Im bettah than yooou ah!)
OMG I am crying ::wipes her tears:: this was...it had to be the most beautiful story I have ever read... it was
heart wrenching. Please you three(?) must keep writing
Tiger, your my....hmm. Bunnypuppy! No. You're one of my favourite authours. *Poke* Keep it up.
Raven Feathers&Angel Wings
Pip (The sheer fact that its Pip who wrote this brings a smile to my face)
as i LOVE YOU! so anyway, when DRACO WAS TOTALLY IMPALING HARRY! sorry anyone reading
this, i know that was vulgar....i'm good friends with the authors, it's an inside joke. lol. this is great bois, i'm
so proud of you! -tini (The sheer fact the first half of this review exists and Tini signed it brings a BIGGER
smile to my face)
Very good! The boy-who-doesn't-want-to . . . that's one of the best lines I've come across in any fic on this
site. Beautiful!
I am in shock. This is probably *THE MOST* powerful fic I have ever read. Wow. I am at a *complete*
loss for adjectives. Just... wow. (LOL, I'm dazzled by my articulateness!)
This fic is so sad... makes so much logical sense... And I'm at a loss again, so I'll just kindly stop typing now!
~superhan (This was so my first ever attempt at slash...)
Brilliant. Just perfect. I like this protest fic very much indeed. perfect... (I just figured this was a good note
to close on.)
The Sweet
*sniffle* I got a toothache! It was just so sweet! I think this is one of my favorite H/D fics now; the fiction is
simply brilliant. It would be nice if there was a sequel :D?
that was sooo sweet and cute and all around fluffy. Loved it!!!!
i'm stuck in all the goo, but i like it here. - t
Heh, that was sweet. And cute. MmmHmm!
very sweet!! i love the use of words. ^_^
That was... the only word for it is... and I use this word a lot, but this time i really MEAN it... BEAUTIFUL.
Sweet, but at the same time, painful and full of sorrow. Loaded with love but also fear and dispair, and
somehow a mix to blend it all together in such a way that life is worth living.
Oh i loved this. The ending weas so sweet. Could you write something like this again. I think it was
fantastic. How did you organise all of the writting between you. Wasn't it complicated. I really hope you
write more but i won't nag. The ending was just so perfect.
HOW SWEET! ^.^
Very sweet :)
aww...^_^ how sweet!!
that was soooo sweet and well written too.
how sweet
OWW! I have MAJOR toothache now... that was SO SWEET! Eeek! Nice, very VERY nice! Long live
Harry/Draco slash!!! Love Princess Mieko xxx
Aww, how sweet! I love it!
aww...thats so sweet ^_^
That was **so** sweet. Awww . . . . 8-)
its really sweet, I usually don't go for the typical fluffy fic but this was sweet (even if it was slash)
awwwwwwww...that's so sweet. I was getting kinda worried for a minute there. I was afraid that Draco had
lost his damn mind or something., but it was all sweet and stuff. Good job, nice story.
(What can I say, Im a sweet guy. Ladies, you can find out firsthand by contacting me at 677... are you
kidding? Even Im not nuts enough to put my phone number up on a website. Im barely nuts to keep being
the commodity of a straight guy writing slash for the crowd)