A Day at Adventure Land (Chapters 4,&5)
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Chapter 4

"I hate that thing." Michelle said to Ashley as they walked behind. Erik and Melissa were running to he roller coaster. "Why?" Ashey asked looking at her. They were still in a cuddle position. "It goes upside down! Did you notice that?" She replied. "Yeah. Do you wanna go on a ride?" He asked her. "Which one?" "Umm." "How 'bout we just take a walk." Ashley said. "Yeah." They started walking around Adventure land. "Well, are you in college?" Ashley asked Michelle. "Yeah. I go to Stony brook studying the performing arts." "Oh really?" "Really Really. There I go again. Quoting 'Shrek'." "I love that movie! It was so cute!" I love the gingerbread man part!" " 'Not my buttons! Not my gumdrop buttons!' He He." Michelle said in her gingerbread man voice. Ashley laughed. "Thank you. Thank you very much." She pretened she was Elvis. "Do someone else!" Ashley said. "Hmmm. I do a great 'Sean Connery'" She replied doing her Sean Connery. "Aww! C'mon! Erik can't do a single impression with out a boo and he could do that! Do ummm.me!" He said. "This one is gonna be offensive." "ABOUT MY HAIR?" He asked. "Oh. My hair's gotta be fine fine fine for the photo shoot today!"She imitated Ashley. Ashley laughed. They walked over to the roller coaster. Erik and Melissa walked off. "Michelle! That was soo awsome!" Melissa said. Michelle looked at them. Erik had his arm around her waist and she had her arm around his neck. "Melissa goes a lil' too fast with the boys." Michelle said to Ashley. "So does Erik. With girls." Ashley said. Michelle laughed hysterical. "What?" Ashley said. "If you said that without saying 'With girls', that would've sounded like if he was gay!" Michelle replied inbetween laughs. Ashley loved Michelle's laugh. It was so cute. Michelle loved everything about Ashley. "What did you say about me?" They heard. It was Erik and Melissa. "What's so funny?" Melissa asked confused. "You!" Michelle said pointing to Ashley. "No! Them!" Ashley said pointing to Erik and Melissa. He looked at Melissa. She was wearing a rainbow tee shirt that was very tight. She was wearing white shortswith a star rhinestone belt on. She was wearing white not too high sandals. She was wearing her name plate and sunglasses on her head. Melissa turned to him and smiled. He was wearing a gray polo sport tee shirt. He was wearing a gray chain and blue jeans on. "Is it because we don't match?" Melissa asked them. Ashley and Michelle stopped laughing and look at themselves. Ashley was wearing a black tee shirt and dark blue pants on. His hair was perfectly spiked. Michelle was wearing spagetti strapped blue tank top. She had blue shorts on with white high heeled sandals. She was thankful tht she wore them instead of her low sandals. She had her name plate on and her baby-g watch on with her Tiffani braclet on. She had her sunglasses on her head also. "Nevermind, you two." Michelle said. Michelle walked over to Ashley. When they were laughing, they were separate. Ashley lead her into his arms. They cuddled. "Aww. Were you guys making fun of yourselves?" Melissa asked. "Stop guessing. You guys would be here intil we'd get old." Ashley replied.

Chapter 5

Michelle's stomach growled. "That sounded like we are in Germany?" Melissa asked Michelle. Michelle giggled. "Why does that sound so familiar?" Erik asked Ashley sarcastically. "Hmm..maybe because WE said it first!" Ashley replied scarcastically. "Yeah, Liss. That sounded like we are in Germany." Michelle replied. "Can we eat?" Michelle asked. "Yeah." Erik said. "YAY!" Michelle exclaimed. "Are you gonna start doing cartwheels?" Melissa said sarcasically. Michelle giggled. Ashley took Michelle's hand and all of them walked to the food court. They went up to the Arthur Treachers and ordered. "We'll all have fish 'n' chips. Is that okay guys?" Erik asked. "Yeah!" They all said. They took their food to their seats in a booth. Erik and Melissa said next to eachother and Ashley and Michelle sat next to eachother. "Oh 'member Erik? Mike wants us to take pictures of us here?" Ashley reminded Erik. "Oh. Yeah. Let's take one now." Erik said. "I'll sit next to you." Ashley said. Ashley sat next to Erik. "Melissa, Can you take the pic?" Erik asked Melissa. "Sure." Melissa replied. She took the picture. They proceeded to eat and it was nightime. "Let's go on our last ride." Michelle said. Ashley and Michelle went to the Ferris wheel and Erik and Melissa went to the merry-go-round.

Erik and Melissa

"Let's go on the mery-go-round." Erik said to Melissa. "Ok." Melissa said. Melissa sat on a horse and Erik stood behind her. The lights were on on the ride and it was very romantic. Melissa's heart rate was going to fast as Erik put his hands on the sides of her stomach. "Melissa?" Erik asked Melissa. "Yeah, Erik?" Melissa replied. "Is it wrong to love someone in one day?" Erik asked her. "I don't think so." Melissa replied. "Oh. That's good." Erik said. Erik whispered sweet little nothings into Melissa's ear and she giggled. They got off the ride and stood by the bench infront of it. Erik was holding Melissa's hands. They looked into eachother's eyes. "I had a fun time tonight, Erik. Thanks." Melissa said. "You're welcome." Erik said. Erik loved Melissa in one day. Was it a crime? NO. They leaned into eachother and kissed as the lights shone on them. He put his hand on her face and deepened the kiss. "I love you, Melissa." Erik said quietly stopping the kiss. He looked into her brown eyes. She looked into his. His eyes told her his soul and what he was feeling. "I love you too, Erik." There was love in Adventure land and it didn't stop there.

Ashley and Michelle

Ashley and Michelle went onto the Ferris Wheel. They went up a bit. Ashley studied Michelle. She was comical, beautiful, and was infront of Ashley, doing abosolutley nothing about it. Her head was facing the flying swings and her head was resting on it. Her leg was up a bit. Ashley was awakened by his thoughts by humming. He heard it amd it was a familiar song. It was "All or Nothing". "Michelle?" Ashley asked her. Michelle directed her attention to Ashley. "ASHLEY IS HOT. I hope he feels the way that I do. I get a rush when I'm with him. Oh. I gotta crush on him. Oh great! I'm singing. But, this is coming from the heart. Not from a CD." Michelle thought. "Yeah?" Michelle replied. She sat in a regular position. "Did you hear a humming before?" Ashley asked Michelle. "That was me singing,Ash." Michelle replied. "Do you sing much?" Ashley asked. "Singing is my middle name. Well, not really. But, you know what I mean." Michelle replied. Ashley chuckled. Michelle smiled and Ashley did also. "Sing some of the song you were singing to me." Ashley said. They moved. They were at the top. "Oh gosh. Not now." Michelle said shaking a bit. "Mish, Are you afraid of heights?" Ashley said. "Yup. I thought you'd figure that out by the fact that Mel and I didn't go on the Blue roller coster." Michelle said. "Sorry. I get cranky when I get scared." Michelle said. "It's okay. I get crankiness from Erik most of the time." Ashley replied. They moved. "Whew." Michelle said. "Okay. Can you sing for me now?" Ashley asked her. "Oh.I dunno." Michelle said shyly. "Why?" "Ok. You made me!" Michelle said. "*Under the lover's sky/ gonna be with you/ and no ones gonna be around/ you think that you wont fall/ we'l just wait until the sun goes dow/ all I need is the star light/ star light there's a magical feeling so right/ it will steal your heart tonight/ you can try to resist /try to hide from my kiss but you know/ but you know that you /can't fight the moonlight / deep in the dark/ you'll surrender your heart/ but you know but you know that you /cant fight the moonlight no you cant fight it/ it's gonna get to your heart.*" Michelle sang. She was looking around while she was singing. She looked back at Ashley. Ashley was in shock. He thought that she had a wonderful voice. "Michelle. You have a wonderful voice." Ashley said. "Thanks." Michelle said shyly. They ended the ride as they talked and they were laughing. "Thanks for everything, Ashley." Michelle said to Ashley as he held her hands. He brought her closer. His arms were around her waist. Her arms were around his neck. "You're welcome." Ashley said. They leant into eachother and kissed. The kis was full of emotion by both of them. He made the kiss passionate and deeper. They unlocked. "I love you, Michelle." Ashley said. He was telling the truth. The second he saw her, he loved her already. He didn't need a seconds to figure it out, it was striaght forward. He looked into her eyes as they shone from her face as two diamonds. "I love you too, Ashley." Michelle replied and smiled. She looked into his ocean blue eyes. His eyes told a million stories and told her his heart and soul. They kissed again. "Guys!" They heard. The unlocked and turned forward and saw Erik and Melissa. "OOOOO!!" They said in unison. Ashley and Michelle looked at eachother. They walked over to Erik and Melissa. "We have to go now guys." Erik said to all of them. "But, when will we se you again?" Melissa asked him. "We'll call you." Erik said to her. They exchanged phone numbers. "Well, bye, Melissa." Erik said giving Melissa a hug. Melissa returned the hug and said "Bye Erik. I love you too." They unlocked. Ashley and Michelle and hugged. "Bye, Ashley. I love you." Michelle whispered. "Bye, Michelle. I love you too." Ashley whispered. They all walked to their cars. Michelle and Melissa went in their car. "This is the best day in my whole life, Michelle." Melissa said as she buckled her seatbelt. They drove away. "Yeah. Mine too." Michelle said. Melissa drove the car. They both thought of Erik and Ashley. They drove back to Melissa's house because Michelle's car was there. "Bye, Lissa!" Michelle whispered and hugged Melissa. "Bye, Michelle!" Melissa whispered as she unlocked from Michelle. Michele drovve away in her blue VW beetle. She drove with O-Town in her CD player. She was almost in tears. She missed Ashley soo much. She drove into her driveway to her house. She visited her parents and lived with them for the weekends. She didn't live with them as to no-dorm-room. She opened the front door and it was 9:00 PM. "Hey, Michelle!" Her mom said. Her mom walked over to Michelle. She gave her a hug. "What's the matter?" Mom asked her. "We met Erik and Ashley from O-Town and we might not get to see them again." Michelle replied. The unlocked. "Oh, It's okay, Michelle."

Melissa.

Melissa called her friend Lisa. "Hello?" Lisa answered. "Hey!" Melissa said. "Hey! What's up?" "I met Erik from O-Town." "WHAT?" "But, I might not get to see him again." "Aw, Melissa! That's so sad!" "I'm afraid I won't get to see him! He told me he loved me. And I told him that I loved him." "Mel. You are gonna see him soon. But, I gotta get off. I'm doing a paper." Lisa said. "Oh. Ok. Bye, Lisa." "Bye, Lissa." They hung up. Melissa cryed herself to sleep.

The next month at Melissa's house.

DING DONG! Melissa heard. Her parent's were out at a party. She answered the door. "Oh my god!" She exclaimed. It was Erik! "Hey Mel!" Erik said. He had a boquet of flowers for her. They kissed and she invited him inside.

To Michelle's house.

DING DONG! Michelle heard. "Must be UPS." Michelle said grumpily. No one was home except for her puppies. They were barking like crazy. "Oh my god.PUPS! JUST SHUT UP FOR ONCE! I'm grumpy already as it is!" Michelle screamed. She was in her blue tank top with thick straps and stripes on the sides. She was in black pajama pants. She opened the door. "OH MY GOD!" She exclaimed. It was Ashley at the door with a red rose. He was in a black tee with a black leather jacket on with navy blue jeans. He was looking so handsome and hot. She lept into his arms and gave him a huge hug. He returned the hug. "Hey Shellz. I missed you." Ashley said into her ear. He kissed her hair. Michelle pulled away and they looked into eachothers eyes. They kissed. They unlocked and Michelle invited him inside.