Cherry Blossom

Mirei Suishou Yume: Cherry Blossom

[http://brachan.cjb.net]
Reviewed By: Megori did the site review since I was busy.
Total Score: 59/100

Splash//Introduction: 5/5
Well, you had one. Simple as that. Nothing too flashy...and it had all the
"requirement" information on there, meaning it wasn't a waste of my time to
just "Click here to enter!" kind of deal.

First Impressions: 5/15
I disliked the banner. It was too big. If I didn't have DSL, it'd take, in
my opinion and estimation, at least 2 minutes to load...with my computer
anyway. The font is terrible against the background color. The only things I
can truly see are the black links. Your banner is also big for no apparent
reason. There's nothing truly important on your banner for it to be so
freakishly huge.

Loading Time: 15/15
Well, I'm not sure why Rio made this part 15 points. I truly don't think its
THAT important being that it either loads quickly, or slow. You lucked out,
unlike the last reviewee who had gotten me when I still had dial up.

Main Layout: 10/20
Premade? Yes. Easy to navigate? Yes. Then why half the points? Because as I
stated in the first impression, it's not necessary to have what you have. I
would recommend quick and efficient layouts over unecessary graphically
heavy sites. It's a waste of time and effort. The banner is plain and, to
me, yucky. I'd suggest colors with a stronger contrast and either a big
banner with a purpose or a small banner just to make it look nice. However,
I truly do like the dividing bar between the content and navigation as well
as the font used on the banner.

Designs: 3/10
Well, I give you three points on effort and hard work, or at least I'll be
nice and consider it hard work. You need major improvements. Depending on
the program you use, I'd suggest you start reading tutorials on it. If
you're using MS Paint, which your wallpapers look too nice to be from, then
I'd say you'd best get a different image editing program. It never hurts to
look at a tutorial and learn a few things.

Content: 6/10
I'm not too sure why, but I'm just deciding to go a bit easier now. The
content isn't very unique or intriguing at all. All of the Bra material I
can literally find elsewhere. I've also seen very extremely similar items at
various other sites, which means your site quite lacks a uniqueness of
content all its own. Your quiz isn't even interactive.

HTML Coding: 8/10
Well, your HTML is nice, neat and well organized. However, I do seem to have
my doubts about some of the coding, but that's just for me to ponder about.

Credits: 2/5
You gave credits, obviously, but all they were, were names and links. Also,
you don't have any image credits or HTML help credits (or at least have not
specified which ones they are).

Final Impression: 5/10
Well, I've rather stated just about everything there is to state above. Um,
let's see...more (or first, if you see it that way) constructive
criticism...have your content relate at least a little bit. The way you've
gone randomly from "You know you're Asian if..." to "DBZ Quiz" is rather odd
and a HUGE change. Hm...your navigation links and text color should match,
to make the layout flow together more nicely. Give better and more in depth
credits. Start reading some tutorials on how to make better graphics and,
keep up the excellent effort!

Total Score: 59/100

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	Mirei Suishou Yume: Cherry Blossom [http://brachan.cjb.net] Reviewed By: Megori did the site review since I was busy. Total Score: 59/100 Splash//Introduction: 5/5 Well, you had one. Simple as that. Nothing too flashy...and it had all the "requirement" information on there, meaning it wasn't a waste of my time to just "Click here to enter!" kind of deal. First Impressions: 5/15 I disliked the banner. It was too big. If I didn't have DSL, it'd take, in my opinion and estimation, at least 2 minutes to load...with my computer anyway. The font is terrible against the background color. The only things I can truly see are the black links. Your banner is also big for no apparent reason. There's nothing truly important on your banner for it to be so freakishly huge. Loading Time: 15/15 Well, I'm not sure why Rio made this part 15 points. I truly don't think its THAT important being that it either loads quickly, or slow. You lucked out, unlike the last reviewee who had gotten me when I still had dial up. Main Layout: 10/20 Premade? Yes. Easy to navigate? Yes. Then why half the points? Because as I stated in the first impression, it's not necessary to have what you have. I would recommend quick and efficient layouts over unecessary graphically heavy sites. It's a waste of time and effort. The banner is plain and, to me, yucky. I'd suggest colors with a stronger contrast and either a big banner with a purpose or a small banner just to make it look nice. However, I truly do like the dividing bar between the content and navigation as well as the font used on the banner. Designs: 3/10 Well, I give you three points on effort and hard work, or at least I'll be nice and consider it hard work. You need major improvements. Depending on the program you use, I'd suggest you start reading tutorials on it. If you're using MS Paint, which your wallpapers look too nice to be from, then I'd say you'd best get a different image editing program. It never hurts to look at a tutorial and learn a few things. Content: 6/10 I'm not too sure why, but I'm just deciding to go a bit easier now. The content isn't very unique or intriguing at all. All of the Bra material I can literally find elsewhere. I've also seen very extremely similar items at various other sites, which means your site quite lacks a uniqueness of content all its own. Your quiz isn't even interactive. HTML Coding: 8/10 Well, your HTML is nice, neat and well organized. However, I do seem to have my doubts about some of the coding, but that's just for me to ponder about. Credits: 2/5 You gave credits, obviously, but all they were, were names and links. Also, you don't have any image credits or HTML help credits (or at least have not specified which ones they are). Final Impression: 5/10 Well, I've rather stated just about everything there is to state above. Um, let's see...more (or first, if you see it that way) constructive criticism...have your content relate at least a little bit. The way you've gone randomly from "You know you're Asian if..." to "DBZ Quiz" is rather odd and a HUGE change. Hm...your navigation links and text color should match, to make the layout flow together more nicely. Give better and more in depth credits. Start reading some tutorials on how to make better graphics and, keep up the excellent effort! Total Score: 59/100 [Back] [Reload]