Title: Bad
Things (Challenge fic)
Author:
Sythe
Rating:
NC17 (just not in the beginning *eg*)
Characters:
Mesa, a good friend and a few SW characters
Category:
Humor (here and there), PWP, Het, Smut
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Disclaimer:
I don´t own em, I just borrow em for my fics. I received no money in its
creation. Everything else? MINE! MWAHAHAHAHAHAAAAA
Summary:
Eh…two friends venture into an ancient long forgotten mine, and find something
that they both never expected…
“I have a bad feeling about this.”
“I don´t know what you are talking about!
Besides, it was your idea in the first place!” I exclaim, spitting out a cobweb
from my mouth as we carefully move along the dark tunnel cut deep into the face
of an ancient mountain.
“My idea?! I thought it was you-“ I suddenly
cut Aicha off, covering her mouth suddenly with my hand.
“Shh… I thought I heard something.” I
whisper in a low voice, turning the flashlight off abruptly and we huddle
together against the cold hard wall of the tunnel, feeling the rough, jaggedly
cut rocks against my back, waiting silently.
We almost gasp for breath when we hear
nothing.
“Sorry, guess it was nothing.” I reply,
feeling fear coursing throughout my body like icy, silvery threads, trying to
shake myself of a strange feeling I keep getting. We continue on, quickly
turning the flashlight back on to see what lies just ahead of us.
We continue on along the tunnel, our
footsteps and breathing sounding shallow as it echoes against the rock walls.
The air is humid but cool and cobwebs fill the corners, cover the support
beams, and curtains the walls and the tunnel in front of us.
The tunnel seems to go on forever as we move
almost completely silent deeper into the depths of the mountain. Ancient water
drips from the ceiling and trickles between the rocks, creating a small pool of
water that we have to wade through up to our ankles.
“And now, how was this my idea?”
I almost scream bloody murder as Aicha
suddenly breaks the silence, spinning myself about to look the woman in the
face, my rigid body slowly realizing that it was just my friend having picked a
most inopportune moment to say something.
“Damn woman! Did you have to do that?!” I
exclaim aloud, my heart pounding like the war drums of a Roman naval ship.
“It’s not like I was not already scared!”
“Sorry Dawn,” Aicha giggles, grinning a
devious grin as she turns to look away from me, scratching her head as if it
would make her seem innocent.
“Yeah, sure, whatever.” I remark with a
growl, irritation taking place of my fear for the moment. “Just don´t do that
again! Now, come on.”
With
another giggle, Aicha takes the rear again as I move farther along the tunnel,
suddenly grasping hold of a protruding rock when I stumble over something
hidden just below the surface of the water.
“Damn it! What the hell was that?!” I growl
aloud, picking my foot up out of the water to see if my toes are still intact.
But, to my relief, I find no blood coming from my soaked shoe.
“Are you alright?” Aicha asks concerned, but
I notice the smirk she tries to hide as she looks over my shoulder at my foot.
“Yeah, I´m alright.” I grumble something
else under my breath as we once again continue on our trek.
It is almost an hour of pure silence when we
finally stop for a short respite. Taking the water bottle from out my backpack,
I take a couple of drinks when I hear something. I slowly, quietly place my
bottle back into my bag and I begin to listen, motioning for Aicha to be quiet
and do the same.
At first, we hear nothing except our own
breathing, the water trickling down the walls of the tunnel, the eerie sound of
an air current, and the sounds of creaking old wood beams. And then I hear it
again.
Quickly I turn to Aicha. She heard it too
for I find her eyes wide with fear, standing close to me, and I can feel and
even see that she is trembling. We’re both afraid, not quite sure of what we
heard, not sure if it is something alive or if it is something…else.
Huddled together, we shrink back against the
stone wall beside us, switching the flashlight off once more, listening to the
sound that we hear. I turn my eyes to Aicha, knowing she is just as frightened
as I, but I am unable to see her in the thick inky blackness that immediately
swallowed us once the light was turned off.
At first, I could have sworn the sounds we
hear are of someone…or something moving down the tunnel, toward us. But it
seems to be different…and hard to find the right words to explain. Metal.
That’s what it was! Metal!
“Metal?” I whisper under my breath, but not
softly enough.
“Metal?” Aicha questions, confused. “Now
what, made of metal, could be way down here?”
“I have no idea, but we’re gonna find out!”
I respond, slowly moving forward despite seeing nothing that lies before us.
But silently, listening for any change in the metallic sounds we heard, yet
there is not. The sound could not longer be heard.
Together, side by side as best we can get,
we move farther along the ancient dark, damp tunnel, the light of the
flashlight cutting through the inky darkness like a knife through butter. I see
cobwebs thick with age and dust, as old as time itself, move slowly with the
almost indiscernible air current moving through the passageway; water trickling
down the rocky walls, the light from our flashlight catching on the waters´
surface, appearing like liquid quicksilver or crystal seeping from cracks to
join with the water at our feet.
As we move ever deeper, I can just faintly
see my breath upon the air. It is getting strangely and eerily cooler the
farther into the mountain we got. And soon we are shivering slightly, huddling
together for warmth and also for comfort. We are both afraid of what lies
beyond.
I cannot help the sudden shudder and gasp
for breath as we pass under an archway of some sort. And just as I was about to
remark about the temperature…the flashlight flickers, then the light suddenly
vanishes.
“Oh shit…”