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  C&R : Rhythm Of Love

Many thanks to friends and visitors who take the time and effort to send their critiques.   I enjoy reading each one of them.  Instead of posting each critique I receive,  I decided to have this page where I could provide some form of "response" to your critiques, queries or comments. 

Best Regards,
Ti


C: critique    R: response

C: its too slow moving,    rhythm of love should have a faster pace - sh.
R: Thanks for your constructive suggestion. I've change the song  to a slightly faster tempo.   It  is a sentimental song,  if the tempo is  too fast, it would lose this sentimental feeling.    I hope you'll like it now.
C: i think you should write how you feel about the person when your with them,  you understand,  because the lyrics are great but you should add how you feel and the way it turns you on.    you know how some songs express the feeling of the writer.  i   think you should add that.   other than that the song is great  - maria.
R: I really appreciate your suggestion.   I'll keep this in mind when writing other songs.  Thanks.   28/4/99

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