okay, added a third version incorporating Tommy and Rico's suggestions (when I can.) I retained the quirky music of the second since I like the play of the feel it gives. The silence in the end was intentional, and I opted NOT to add a new soundbyte since they add to the file size. I also corrected the value shown in the loading process for those who view it online. The link in the end SHOULD work. You can find it here.
Final version for CD final version.
The previous two are still here. They're actually the same one, just that one has a quirky sound scoring. The scoring is disturbingly appropriate for some reason. Sadly, it adds nearly 800kb to the loading process.
For online viewing, I'd recommend this silent version (no audio track).
But perhaps for the cd-rom, this disturbing music version works better.
I leave it for you all to decide.
Anyway, in case you want to check out other stuff by me, look here: