Hello! This is intended to be only one part long, so I hope you enjoy
it. In my opinion, this is a much more preferred ending to Sailor
Moon S season. This story uses all dubbed material except for Rini’s
Sailor name. Yells at dubbers: ‘IT’S CHIBI MOON, NOT MINI!!!’
*sweatdrops* Sorry had to do that.
Sailor Moon does not belong to me.
Enjoy!! (PG)
The Rise of Sailor Saturn - By Gregory Bess
Amara just left the car to check on something, leaving Rini
and Hotaru there alone. Rini knew something was up in the Sailor
department, judging by Amara’s behavior. Rini wanted to go to, but
didn’t want to leave Hotaru.
Finally, Rini decided to investigate and asked Hotaru, “Can
you wait here Hotaru? I’ll be right back.”
“All right Rini,” Hotaru said as she began to feel herself
getting one here weak spells. Rini raced off to find Amara, and
Hotaru decided to get out of the car and stretch for a while.
Just as Hotaru got out of the car though, she got too weak to
stand and fell to her knees, and began breathing heavily. She was
holding the top of the passenger side door and tried to get up again,
when she fell to her stomach and lost consciousness.
As soon as Rini saw the heart snatcher battling Sailor Uranus,
she called the scouts on her Luna ball and transformed into Sailor
Chibi Moon. Just as Rini came out of the bushes she was in, the Heart
snatcher spotted her and was about to attack when, “URANUS WORLD
SHAKING.”
The attack slammed into the Heart snatcher, but it only
staggered a little. The snatcher then took action and sent out what
looked like packing paper and surrounded Uranus with it, before it
closed on her and pinned her arms down in the wrapping, which was
still attached to the enemy that sent it.
Rini knew she had to take action to save Uranus and did her
own weak attack, “PINK SUGAR HEARRRT ATTACK.” Despite Rini’s
intentions, the stream of little hearts only got the heart snatcher
angry.
It looked at Sailor chibi Moon and said, “Look like I’ll have
to tie you up as well.” With that, it sent its wrapping paper attack
and captured Rini with it.
Rini stared at the heart snatcher menacingly, determined to
get out of her binds, but her effort were futile. (“Is this how it’s
going to end?”) Rini asked in fear as all attempts to get out failed,
(“Serena is the closest but she’s still at least 5 minutes away.”)
Hotaru had no idea what happened or where she was. One minute
she was kneeling next to Amara’s car, the next she finds herself in
what looks like a palace. It had a spars amount of furniture in the
room she was in, and the floor looked like it was made out of marble.
Heck, the whole palace looked like it was made from marble.
Just as she was about to wonder, a voice said, “Ah, good, your
here, Hotaru. You and I need to talk.”
Hotaru turned to see someone who looked almost like Rini’s
cousin, Serena. The two main differences being, this women was older,
and her hair was silver. Hotaru was puzzled and asked, “Who are you?”
The women smiled and said, “I am Queen Serenity of the Moon
Kingdom.”
Hotaru was confused, “But there isn’t a kingdom on the moon..”
“There use to be, Hotaru. But my Kingdom was destroyed a
thousand years ago, by ruthless people from a place called the
Negaverse. Despite the efforts of my kingdom’s strongest fighters
known as the Sailor scouts,” Queen Serenity explained.
Hotaru was having a hard time taking this all in, “A thousand
years ago? Sailor Scouts?”
“Yes, Hotaru. In fact, the very same ones you read about in
the papers today. You, Hotaru, are also a Sailor Scout.”
“ME,” Hotaru had a difficult time believing this one.
“Yes, during the Silver Millennium, you were known as Sailor
Saturn, the Scout of silence, destruction, and rebirth. Your powers
rival that of even Sailor Moon’s, who just happens to be my daughter,
and the one the Scouts had a duty to protect during the Millennium,”
Serenity explained.
“Well, in this time, if what you say is true, I’m of no use to
the scouts for two reasons. One, I don’t have those powers, and
second, I’m sick. I have been for some time now.”
“Hotaru, the reason you’ve been sick all this time is because
and evil being is growing with in your body. If, it is not delt with
soon, it will eventually take control of your body. As for your
powers, that I can fix,” with that, Queen Serenity put a pen in
Hotaru’s hands and she continued, “To call those powers just say
Saturn planet power. But you must hurry, your friend Rini, who is a
Sailor Scout in training, is in great trouble as we speak.”
Hotaru was in shock that her friend Rini was also a Sailor
Scout but set the thought aside for later, and raised her power stick
above her shouting, “SATURN PLANET POWER.” Power began to surround
Hotaru and engulf her. It then solidified into a purple and white
Sailor outfit, and the Silence glave appeared in her hands. That was
the instant Hotaru’s dream state ended, and she woke up, in her Sailor
form.
With in a dark region of Hotaru’s body, the evil being known
as Mistress 9 was beginning to disintegrate. The power of Saturn was
turning on Mistress 9, purging Hotaru of the evil one. Before
Mistress 9 was totally destroyed, she cried out, “HOTARU, HOW CAN YOU
DO THIIIIIIIIIISSSSSSSSS,” and then she was no more. As soon as
Mistress 9 was gone, Hotaru felt a surge of strength well up in her.
She immediately stood up and started to run in the direction she last
saw Rini go in.
With in the Time stream, Sailor Pluto noticed a shift in time.
She immediately checked Crystal Tokyo to see if it was still there.
See that it was, Sailor Pluto gave a sigh of relief and began checking
the stream to see what changed. When she did, she was surprised,
“Well, this I did not expect to happen, but it is a good change for
both Hotaru and Rini. I wonder how Chibi Moon will take the news of
Hotaru being a Sailor Scout.” Sadly though, only time would tell.
Sailor Saturn assest the situation when she got there. She
hid in some bushes and saw a Heart snatcher, with a scout on each of
its sides. One was Sailor Uranus, the other Hotaru had no trouble
figuring out, since the pink hair and coned meatballs were a dead give
away. She noticed they were both tied up in some wrapping paper
looking material. Saturn wasted no more time, and sprang into action
with her Silence Glave, ready to teach this thing that it wasn’t a
good thing to mess with a friend of the powerful Sailor Saturn.
Sailor Chibi Moon kept on trying to get loose from her
captor’s wrapping, but got no where. The material was on so tight, it
began to deprive Rini of her oxygen. Looking at Sailor Uranus, she
saw that she was in the same situation, “I.......... Must..........
Get........ Loose.” Rini fell to her knees and was about to collapse
when suddenly..........’Snap.’
Rini began to take deep breaths as she realized the material
was cut off. She looked up and saw Sailor Uranus was also free and
she turned to her enemy just in time to see an unknown Sailor Scout
swing her weapon’s front into the heart snatcher’s face. The Heart
snatcher went flying backwards, and landed head first. The snatcher
dragged a few yards before the rest of its body hit the dirt and came
to a grinding halt. The heart snatcher shackingly sat up and stared
at the newcomer, “Now who are you?”
Sailor Uranus knew exactly who it was and was staring in fear,
(Oh no, Sailor Saturn is awake. This is not good.)
“I’m your worst nightmare, heart snatcher. I am the Sailor
Scout of Silence, destruction, and rebirth. I am Sailor Saturn, and
the silence says you are to be destroyed. You want to fight with
wrapping paper? Fight with this,” With that, Saturn raised her glave
above her head and began shouting her attack, “SATURN.......,” she
began to spin her glave like a helicopter blade, “DEATH RIBBON.......,”
she then pointed the glave at the heart snatcher and finished her
attack phrase, “REVOLUTION.” Dark ribbon came out of the tip of the
Silence Glave and sped at the Heart snatcher. It began to surround
and cover the evil monster, and when it was totally covered, the
ribbon exploded, and not even the usual cracked open egg was left of
the snatcher when the smoke cleared. Sailor Saturn put her Glave back
into her subspace pocket and turned to the other two Scouts, “Are you
two ok?” At both their nods, well Uranus’s was one of fear, Sailor
Saturn checked to make sure no one was in the area.
Rini asked, “Who are you?” Once satisfied that no one was
around, Sailor Saturn powered down to Hotaru, who was caught in a
bear, er rabbit hug by a powered down Chibi Moon, Rini, as she
shouted, “HOTARU!!!!!”
Hotaru gladly returned the hug, and checked Rini to make sure
she wasn’t injured. Satisfied with no injuries, Hotaru looked up into
Sailor Uranus’s face, and it wasn’t a pretty site.
Uranus looked at Hotaru and said, “Big mistake powering down
Sailor Saturn, now you will be destroyed. URANUS WORLD.....”
“STOP, Sailor Uranus! For your information, Queen Serenity
herself woke my powers up, and if I wanted to destroy the world, I
would have done so by now,” Hotaru explained, knowing full well what
Uranus was thinking, since she has her memories of the Silver
Millennium back.
Sailor Uranus did some rational thinking here, (She’s got a
point. and Serena’s Mom woke her up? Who am I judge something
Serenity thought was right?). With that, Uranus lowered her hand and
let the energy of her attack fade, before extending her hand in
friendship. Hotaru took the hand offered and shook it.
Just then Sailor Moon showed up, “I am sailor Moon and
I........ where’s the Heart snatcher?”
Hotaru cracked up at this, “Your late Serena, ‘I’ already
toasted it”
Sailor Moon was in shock and asked, “Hotaru how do you know
who I am? And what do you mean you finished it off?”
Rini decided to answer both questions, “Sailor Moon, meet
Sailor Saturn.”
Serena was in shock, “What?! Another Sailor Scout? I asked
this once and I’ll ask it again. Just how many of us are there
anyway?”
Hotaru decided that something else needed to be delt with,
“Sailor Moon, we’ll talk later. Right now we have one last detail to
take care of.”
“What would that be,” Serena asked.
In Doctor Tomoe’s lab, Mimete just informed him another heart
snatcher failed, “Those reched Sailor Scouts. I’ll get them one of
these days.”
“How about now pal,” asked a voice behind him.
Doctor Tomoe turned to see all the Sailor scouts ready to take
action, including one he’d never heard of before. He asked the purple
haired Scout, “Who are you?”
Sailor Saturn’s only reply was, “Sailor Moon if you’ll do the
honors of healing my dad here.”
“No problem,” Sailor Moon said as she took her brooch off her
chest and shouted, “MOON CRYSTAL HEALING ACTIVATION.” Energy pored
out of the crystal, and began healing Doctor Tomoe. Shortly
afterwards, a phantom like the ones that come out of cracked Heart
snatcher eggs came out of Dr. Tomoe and he fell to the floor. Once he
was checked to make sure he was all right, the Scout moved on to heal
the rest of the scientists that were involved in this war with the
Heart snatchers.
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