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Recommended edits for
Star Trek TV Series DVDs, pt. 2
Star Trek: Deep Space Nine (1993-1999)
Star Trek: Deep Space Nine (DS9) was an ambitious project embarked by the producers of Star Trek. For the first time, the series will not revolve around a starship travelling through space, but instead the series will tell about the adventures of a group of Starfleet and alien officers assigned to a space station strategically located next to a stable wormhole, which connects the Alpha Quadrant to the distant Gamma Quadrant on the other side of the galaxy. Many of the episodes follow a story arc which may last for several episodes, instead of the previous practice of each episode being a stand-alone story as done in TOS and TNG.

DS9 faced with many controversies when it first started. The series was often unfairly compared with another successful science fiction TV series Babylon 5. In fact, even the origins of DS9 is quite questionable, since it was the producer of Babylon 5 who had first offered his series to Paramount to be set in the Star Trek universe, but he was later turned down. Shortly thereafter, the producers of Star Trek came up with their own space station series. As a result, DS9 was often considered a copy of Babylon 5 throught its entire run, particularly right up to its final episode, which had many themes similar to the final episode of Babylon 5 itself! Fortunately, not too many people in the US were fans of Babylon 5, so the connection was never really made.
DS9 DVDs also come in seven volumes.
Many Star Trek fans boycotted DS9 merely because the story does not involve a starship travelling in space. Some of them disliked the presence of conflict between the Starfleet personnel and other alien officers, while others disliked DS9 because of the presence of the Ferengi in the bar and Ferengi storylines. It's too bad that they just will not watch the show, for the show provided many interesting and epic stories and showed the character developments of the various characters. Often, these stories were a reflection on our society, just as the stories of Star Trek were intended to in the first place. And now, DS9 is being released as DVDs in 2003. So, here are some inconsistencies that had popped up in DS9 over the years and my recommended edits to correct these oversights.

"Doctor Bashir, I Presume?" (DS9)
(season 5, set in 2373):
- In this episode, Dr. Bashir was discovered to have been genetically modified as a child, a procedure considered illegal by the Federation. Bashir's father turned himself in for having allowed the procedure to be done, and one of the officials who presided in the case, Rear Adm. Bennett, made a comment saying that the Eugenics Wars took place
200 years ago. However, the Eugenics Wars was established to have occurred from 1993 to 1996, nearly 400 years before the episode. Apparently, the writer had remembered the scene from ST2 (set in 2285), in which Khan said that on Earth 200 years ago he was a prince, while he was writing this episode, but he had totally forgottened that DS9 takes place in the 24th century! I recommend that Adm. Bennett's line be changed to "400 years ago" so that his dialog would be more consistent.
Star Trek: Voyager (1995-2001)
Star Trek: Voyager (VOY) was apparently created when it was found that many fans did not enthusiastically embrace DS9 for the reasons that I had previously mentioned, although the official line from Paramount says that they had conducted studies which indicated that the fans were ready to accept two Star Trek series running concurrently. In order to satisfy fans' request for another starship, Voyager was created. But so as to create new plots and storylines, different from those seen in TOS and TNG, a decision was made to strand the starship in the distant Delta Quadrant, far away from the Federation as well as the more common adversaries. The crew would be composed of Starfleet personnel and the Maquis (generally considered as Federation renegades) in the hopes that storylines concerning conflict between these two groups could be written. In fact, in preparation of VOY, several TNG and DS9 episodes were specifically written to outline the origins of the Maquis. In addition, Voyager would have a female captain, the first time a female captain had headed a Star Trek series.
VOY DVDs have not been released yet.
The role of Voyager's pilot was originally intended to go to the disgraced Starfleet cadet Nick Locarno from "The First Duty" (TNG), but the producers decided to create an all new character when they felt that Locarno's crimes were unforgivable, while the new character (Tom Paris) would have had done petty crimes (which were more forgivable) and also have a troubled history. Nonetheless, the very same actor for Locarno was cast for this new character.

The original actress for the captain walked out after a day of shooting, resulting in delays in shooting as a new captain was cast. There were further delays when numerous scenes from several early episodes had to be reshot as Paramount decided that the captain's previous hairstyle had less dramatic effect and could possibly dampen fans' interest in the show!

The initial seasons of
VOY had rather terrible episodes since the isolation of the crew from the already established Star Trek universe has pretty much prevented certain familiar story elements from being incorporated into the stories. Nevertheless, as the series progressed, the storylines became more interesting, showcasing character developments among the main characters. Unfortunately, several original premises had either changed or evolved as the series progressed. It was decided that the Starfleet and Maquis crew will work together troublefree, causing the Maquis plotline to fade into the background. The Kazons, created as the main adversaries for the Voyager crew, had to be written off when it was found that they had never become popular with the fans. A new sexy female character was introduced in the 4th season to replace a mundane female character, in the hopes of improving the ratings (it worked). This led to a question as to whether Star Trek, often considered a successful and respectable enterprise, had to resort to such a tactic. Finally, even certain Alpha Quadrant elements showed up in VOY, from the occasional stranded ship to establishing contact with Starfleet! When the series ended, more people were glad that it had ended while it was still popular rather than being a story that got from nowhere to nowhere. Hopefully, Paramount will release VOY DVDs in the near future, possibly after the release of the DS9 DVDs.

Here are some of my recommended edits for inconsistencies in the episodes of
VOY.
"Flashback" (VOY) (season 3, set in 2373):
- We learn that Tuvok was present on the
Excelsior during the events of ST6. In the flashback scenes on Excelsior bridge, the console chairs have legs. Whereas in ST6, we can see that the console chairs have a circular base. On the other hand, as The ST Encyclopedia suggests that Tuvok's memory may not have been perfect, we can attribute this inconsistency to inaccuracies in Tuvok's memory. But, if it is not too prohibitive, I would recommend that all the Excelsior console chairs in this VOY episode to be digitally altered to have a circular base.
- Tuvok mentions that
two days after the Excelsior encountered the subspace shockwave from the explosion of Praxis, he heard that two Starfleet officers were arrested for the assassination of the Klingon Chancellor. But in ST6, it was said that two months had passed between the explosion and the conference room meeting where Kirk was assigned to escort the Klingon Chancellor to Earth for the peace conference. I believe that two months should be the correct duration of time passed since some time would be required for the negotiations to set up the conference. Therefore, I suggest that Tuvok's line could be changed to say that it was two months after the explosion when he heard that news. Again, this inconsistency could be due to flaws in Tuvok's memory.
Note that there are numerous other difference in the Excelsior bridge scenes between ST6 and "Flashback" (VOY). We can attribute all these inconsistencies to flaws in Tuvok's memory.
Excelsior bridge as seen in ST6.
The console chairs have circular bases.
Excelsior bridge as seen in "Flashback" (VOY). Note that the console chairs now have legs.
"Unimatrix Zero" (VOY) (season 6 & 7, set in 2376-77):
- Tuvok says that he was born on Stardate 38774. But in
"Flashback" (VOY), Tuvok mentions that he was 29 years old during the events of ST6 (set in 2293). This indicates that Tuvok was born in 2264, which was around the time of TOS, during which stardates were four-digits! Five-digit stardates were usually used for 24th century events, and in this case, it is simply inconsistent for a five-digit stardate to occur in 2264! I would recommend that Tuvok say a different, four-digit stardate for his birth, preferably a lower-numbered stardate since stardates increased erratically throughout the entire run of TOS.
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