
Whip Dance
A new dancer came forth upon the floor and began, a
tall
brute near her with the leather, to perform a whip dance...
...In the whip dance, though there are various versions
of it, depending on the locality, the girl is almost never struck with
the whip, unless, of course, she does not perform well.
When the whip is cracked, however, the girl will
commonly
react as though she has been struck.
this, conjoined with the music, and her beauty, and the
obvious symbolism of her beauty beneath total male discipline, can be
extremely,
powerfully erotic. In an elegant, civilized context, one of beauty and
music, it makes clear and bespeaks the raw and essential primitives of
the ancient, genetic, biological sexual relationship of men and
women....
The whip dance continued before us..
The whip dance was now approaching its climax... I
turned
my attention to the dancer on the floor. She lay now on her back, one
knee
lifted, her arms at her sides, palms down, before the brute with his
whip,
who towered over her. Her head, too, was turned to the side. Then she
turned
her head to face the brute who tyrannized her. She looked deeply into
his
eyes. then, delicately, in a graceful gesture, she turned her hands,
putting
their backs to the floor, exposing her palms, and the soft flesh of her
palms, to him, indicating her surrender, her submission, her
vulnerability
and her readiness. There was applause, the striking of the left
shoulder,
from the tables. The brute then crouched beside her and encircled her
neck
with the coils of his whip. He drew her to her knees then before him.
She
looked up at him, her neck in the whip coils, his. There was more
applause.
Then the brute looked to Policrates, who indicated a table. He then
pulled
the girl to her feet and, running her over the tiles, and then
releasing
the coils from her neck, threw her stumbling into the arms of waiting
pirates
who, with a cry of pleasure, sized her and began to work their lusty
wills
upon her. There was more applause, and laughter.
Rogue of Gor, Page 191
I watched the dancing girl of Port Kar writhing on
the
square of sand between the tables, under the whips of masters, in a
Paga
tavern in Port Kar…
…It is called the Whip Dance, the dance the girl upon
the sand danced.
She wore a delicate vest and belt of chains and jewels,
with shimmering metal droplets attached.
And she wore ankle rings, and linked slave bracelets,
again with shimmering droplets pendent upon them; and a locked collar,
matching.
She danced under ships' lanterns, hanging from the
ceiling
of the paga tavern, it located near the wharves bounding the great
arsenal.
I heard the snapping of the whips, her cries.
The dancing girls of Port Kar are said to be the best
of all Gor. They are sought eagerly in the many cities of the planet.
They
are slave to the core, vicious, treacherous, cunning, seductive,
sensuous,
dangerous, desirable, excruciatingly desirable.
Raiders of Gor, Page 100
Whip Dance
performed by
~*drifter*~{DE}~R~
on September 20, 2003
first place SlaveFest
: ~Having watched the others dance she knealt securely at His feet her
hand as always upon His thigh. The girls form naked save the swath of
red about her hips and the collar locked securely around her slender
throat her delicate fingers patting the time on her thighs as she hums
softly to herself the sound of the drums leading her.~
Mm mm mm, mm mm mm
Mm mm mm, mm mm mm mm mm, yeah
~Midnight skies flash as her head jerks up at His voice crashing like
the waves over her form "Dance or Die". Gulping hard at the glint of
steel in His voice echoed by the harsh gaze which rakes over her form
as He grabs her arm tossing her and His whip to the nearest Guard, she
whimpers. Caught immediately by the big brute she is upended over his
shoulder and carried to the pit where the ruffian dumps the tiny beauty
unceremoniously to her hands and knees upon the sands. Scrambling in
the pit she finds her knees beneath her instinctively kneeling with her
thighs parted fully, naturally, the bloom of her womanhood displayed
for the eyes of all. Delicate fingers flutter to her thighs upturned in
complete submission as a shudder of terror runs through her form.~
~The powerful Male voice behind her and the CRACK of the whip jolting
her to respond as she begins to sing the voice filled with a tulmult of
emotion brazen and bold like something from a local paga tavern~
Lovin' you has got to be~That Male voice echoing the girl's~ (take her
to the other side)
~As the whip snaps behind her bringing her fully to her feet with a
start her pulse pounding as she is tossed upwards her eyes snapping
round from He that owns her to he that will rend her flesh from bones
should she prove displeasing a look of sheer terror on her face as the
curls of mahogany fall round slender shoulders~
'tween the dias and the deep green sea~ (take her to the other side)
~Again the leather snakes out this time the girl drops to her belly
seeking to avoid its terrifying touch. The slender form falling face
first to the sands prone before all who have come to see her
humiliation at the whim of her Master. His words still ringing in her
ears "Dance or Die". The prayer that this dance or this day not be her
last falling whispered from within full lips which look to have been
bruised by the harsh kiss of some Master or another, seeing the way he
makes her move it may well have been the one with the whip~
Forget about her foolish pride (take her to the other side)
~With all the force possesed of those brutish arms he flings the
rawhide through the air with a hiss that seems to grip her about the
waist to drag her to her knees. The coppery tresses fall away from her
face revealing eyes the color of midnight awash with the fear of that
sound, her head snapping back as she catches sight of the gaze
belonging to he who holds the whip. The long tail now dangling
menacingly between his fingers as he smirks almost snarling at the
naked slave trembling before him~
Oh take her to the other side (take her to the other side)
: ~The girls lips part as she hears His words again in her mind her
eyes darting to Him once again. Tiny hands come up in a feeble attempt
to fend the lash's attack off as again the titan before weilds the
weapon every woman fears and yet all must someday kiss. Its clap like a
jarring roll of thunder in her ears. Yet not until she sees the brow of
her Master knit together does she leap to her feet, her fear of His
anger greater even than that of the whip. The girls hands rake into her
hair the curls enveloping the tiny fingers hiding them as her elbows
come up to crush inward and flex out before her face as she bounces her
head turning left then right and back again as her voice rings out the
kalika and sisturns driving her almost as harshly as the gnashing of
the whip at the air about her form as she leaps left to avoid another
stinging snatch at her flesh by the scourge~
her mama told her there'd be days like this, and man she wasn't foolin'
~The eyes like midnight skies filled with starlight widen as the kiss
of the knout caresses over her hips the sanguine silks hung low there
falling away, torn from her by the tip of her tormentor's tongue. A
thin red ridge rising upon sunbronzed flesh along the mark of her
slavery at her left thigh as the seething sizzle of leather is heard
once more behind her. Spinning off on tiny toes, the beast seeking
refuge from the Guard doling out distress with the flick of His wrist.
The tiny form stutter stepping to a halt lifted up upon tiny toes only
to turn and bolt in another direction, her attempt at fleeing futile
and forlorn.~
'cause she just can't believe the way you kiss, Uh huh
~The girls eyes find a path to free her from the tortorous touch of the
whip as she coils around the pole in the center of the circle of sand.
The girl leaning left then right her hips swaying as her form seeks to
become one with the hardened staff, seeking its protection from the
lash leaping through the air. The velvety voice calling out to the
assemblage as she ducks once more behind the pole her form shifting to
look from behind one side then the other, the copper of her curls
shimmering in the light of the fire as they whip round her form~
: she opened up her mouth with baited breath, she said she'd never
leave you
~Coquetishlty she slips from behind the pole her eyes now locked onto
the Guard with the whip. Willowy fingers raking up along her sides as
she moves with a tiny bouncing steps through the sands, her hips
rocking hard to the beat her head snapping left and right the curls
snapping back and forth as she raises her arms out to her sides her
palms flashing up and back as she twirls her head completely around the
tails of her hair flickering over the Guards hands as her belly
undulates the toes of her left foot pointed into the sands her knee
cocked so that her form writhes in a single continuous ripple~
You love her, you hate her, she tried to take the loss
~Tiny feet stamping the ground with each word as if to punctuate the
speed~
she's been cryin' you a river but now she's gotta get across
~The tiny twister spins off and slams to a halt her hands dropping to
her hips as she brazenly looks up at the One who owns her with eyes
like stormy skies the tone suddenly accusatory as her left brow cocks
as if daring Him to deny the words. With a smirk upon full lips she
spins away her head snapping round as the hips rock hands brought one
after another up to her shoulders in tiny fists only to fall away and
return in time to the rythm, her feet managing a cross step stuttering
her toes through the sands as if stopped at the edge of some body of
water. The fevered pitch of her movements knocking the breath from her
she looks to the male voice imploringly and he seeing her distress
takes the words up~
Forget about her foolish pride(take her to the other side)Oh take her
to the other side(take her to the other side)
Lovin' you has got to be(take her to the other side)'tween the dias and
the deep green sea(take her to the other side)
: ~the girls form prancing now round the outer edge of the pit as she
seeks to draw a reprieve from the Guard with the whip her form dropping
to the sands her thighs parting fully her eyes lowered as her fingers
draw along the sides of her breasts offering them up to him. her hips
rolling as she moans the words flowing through her entire being as she
pleads to be forgiven and left to complete the task knowing deep within
he is taking great pleasure in forcing her again to writhe as the whip
snakes out hissing through the air. Having caught her breath her voice
takes over once again~
she was lookin' for another kind of love.. Oh lordy how she needed it.
~The lithelil body shifting in the sand she turns brazenly to the Guard
planting her deliacte hands upon shapely hips, almost defiantly~
The kind that likes to leap without a shove... Oh Master, best believe
it
~Jolted from her respite by the biting of the whip upon the sands
between her splayed thighs the girls head snaps up drawing her fully
from the sands once more. Upon her toes once again she spins
frenetically, the girls motions seeming to blur for a moment as she
seeks to twist her way from the hissing snapping whip's crack. The long
fingers raking back the curls as she stops suddenly her gaze raised to
the throng watching, boldly her form now swaying from side to side more
gently, though the beat has not changed the intent has~
To save a lot of time and foolish pride she'll say what's on her mind,
now
: ~Suddenly, the whip craks again over her head and the tiny beast
drops once more to her knees and then forward to her belly her hips
rolling like the never ending tides. With a sudden thrust of her
shoulders she rolls to her back her hips grinding upwards to the air as
she moans softly. The curls of mahogany and copper clinging to her
ample breasts along with tiny grains of sand flickering in the light of
the firelight. Caramel mosels atop her firm mounds screaming in their
tautness to be suckled, the girl's eyes closing as she cries out~
You loved her, you hate her, you cut her down to size You blinded her
with love and yeah it opened up her eyes
~Ten thousand pin pricks of silver starlight seeming to shimmer in
midnight blue eyes as they flash open suddenly jerked upwards by the
sound of that snapping leather lash. The male voice ringing out again~
Lovin' you has got to be (take her to the other side)
~the whip catching the very tip of a ripened nipple bringing the beast
instantly to her feet~
"Tween the dias and the deep green sea (take her to the other side) her
conscience got to be her guide (take her to the other side) Oh Master
take her, take take take take take ow
~Again the tiny form bounces her hands rising to come over her head as
the male singer drives her with his voice as much as the Guard drives
her with the whip. Eyes now wild her own voice rings out~
Take her to the other side
she's lookin' for another kind of love, Oh lordy how she needs it, The
kind that likes to leap without a shove Master, you best believe it
~The tiny dancers form glistening with a sheen of sweat which
sparkleslike tiny jewels in the glow of the torches. Shifting in the
sands as she sings her hands lowering to slide over her belly as her
right foot lifts from the sands and kicks outward across her leftleg
turning her entire form round away from the onlookers. Up onto tiny
feet she is thrust as the whip lands over her well rounded ass, the
very tip coiling itself around a toned left thigh to lick at the brand
there. The girls heart pounding as she looks back over her shoulder
from the Guard to He that owns her, seeing neither appeased she moans
and turns again to the crowd~
: Now she ain't one for sayin' long goodbyes, she hopes all is forgiven
~The voice callng out to them for support she winks to one Master and
smiles her hips rolling hard and thrusting forward as she seeks to
assuage them as well as He that owns her. The long fingers rise
snatching her own curls jerking her head left and right once more. The
collar gleaming at her throat identifying her as slave her own
nakedness announcing it, her wantoness in her movements leaving no
chance for her to mistake what she is. The whip stinging the air again
she laughs knowing now as surely as the three moons will rise over the
thassa that she is only what He wants her to be.~
You loved her, you hate her, she could have been your lover
~ Wildly searching fingers gripping the circlet of gold at her throat
as she winks her hips rocking once more her left knee cocked exposing
her slave flesh fully. The undulaions continuing as her fingers dance
their way down to the brand at her thigh her eyes sparkling as she
moans out softly in recognition of what she has become~
she knows she had it comin' yeah so take her to the other side
~the girls form spinning free of the sands out onto the tiles a blur of
naked flesh curls and golden bells as she twirls to the Guard. Writhing
against him she coils herself into the whips caress, her fingers
looping its length round her waist as the male voice in the background
sings harder her form rippling in responce~
Take her to the other side Take her to the other side Lovin' you has
got to be (take her to the other side) 'Tween the dias and the deep
green sea (take her to the other side) her conscience's got to be her
guide (take her to the other side)
: ~three tiny steps backwards drawing the Guard behind her~
Oh Master take her to the other side(take her to the other side)
~the tiny form bent at the waist the girl wiggles her way with the
guard in tow back over the floors
Lovin' you has got to be(take her to the other side)
~stopping almost to her Master she leans up pressing a kiss to the
Guards cheek with a wink, her hips rolling against him again as she
steps back and spins away dropping to the floor
'Tween the dias and the deep green sea(take her to the other side)
Forget about her foolish pride(take her to the other side)
~the last line sung as the girl rolls along the floor over and over
again uncoiling from within the grasp of the whip~
Master take her take her take her take her to the other side(take her
to the other side)(take her to the other side)
~The roll stopping at the tips of her Master's boots. The tiny dancer
laid out on her back the spine arches her head thrown back her breasts
heaving, the mahogany curls fanning out around her and clinging against
glistneing flesh she moans~
"la Va kajira, Master me ja lina"