Whip Dance

A new dancer came forth upon the floor and began, a tall brute near her with the leather, to perform a whip dance...
...In the whip dance, though there are various versions of it, depending on the locality, the girl is almost never struck with the whip, unless, of course, she does not perform well.
When the whip is cracked, however, the girl will commonly react as though she has been struck.
this, conjoined with the music, and her beauty, and the obvious symbolism of her beauty beneath total male discipline, can be extremely, powerfully erotic. In an elegant, civilized context, one of beauty and music, it makes clear and bespeaks the raw and essential primitives of the ancient, genetic, biological sexual relationship of men and women.... The whip dance continued before us..
The whip dance was now approaching its climax... I turned my attention to the dancer on the floor. She lay now on her back, one knee lifted, her arms at her sides, palms down, before the brute with his whip, who towered over her. Her head, too, was turned to the side. Then she turned her head to face the brute who tyrannized her. She looked deeply into his eyes. then, delicately, in a graceful gesture, she turned her hands, putting their backs to the floor, exposing her palms, and the soft flesh of her palms, to him, indicating her surrender, her submission, her vulnerability and her readiness. There was applause, the striking of the left shoulder, from the tables. The brute then crouched beside her and encircled her neck with the coils of his whip. He drew her to her knees then before him. She looked up at him, her neck in the whip coils, his. There was more applause. Then the brute looked to Policrates, who indicated a table. He then pulled the girl to her feet and, running her over the tiles, and then releasing the coils from her neck, threw her stumbling into the arms of waiting pirates who, with a cry of pleasure, sized her and began to work their lusty wills upon her. There was more applause, and laughter.
Rogue of Gor, Page 191
 

I watched the dancing girl of Port Kar writhing on the square of sand between the tables, under the whips of masters, in a Paga tavern in Port Kar…
…It is called the Whip Dance, the dance the girl upon the sand danced.
She wore a delicate vest and belt of chains and jewels, with shimmering metal droplets attached.
And she wore ankle rings, and linked slave bracelets, again with shimmering droplets pendent upon them; and a locked collar, matching.
She danced under ships' lanterns, hanging from the ceiling of the paga tavern, it located near the wharves bounding the great arsenal.
I heard the snapping of the whips, her cries.
The dancing girls of Port Kar are said to be the best of all Gor. They are sought eagerly in the many cities of the planet. They are slave to the core, vicious, treacherous, cunning, seductive, sensuous, dangerous, desirable, excruciatingly desirable.
Raiders of Gor, Page 100


Whip Dance
performed by
~*drifter*~{DE}~R~
on September 20, 2003
first place SlaveFest

: ~Having watched the others dance she knealt securely at His feet her hand as always upon His thigh. The girls form naked save the swath of red about her hips and the collar locked securely around her slender throat her delicate fingers patting the time on her thighs as she hums softly to herself the sound of the drums leading her.~
Mm mm mm, mm mm mm
Mm mm mm, mm mm mm mm mm, yeah
~Midnight skies flash as her head jerks up at His voice crashing like the waves over her form "Dance or Die". Gulping hard at the glint of steel in His voice echoed by the harsh gaze which rakes over her form as He grabs her arm tossing her and His whip to the nearest Guard, she whimpers. Caught immediately by the big brute she is upended over his shoulder and carried to the pit where the ruffian dumps the tiny beauty unceremoniously to her hands and knees upon the sands. Scrambling in the pit she finds her knees beneath her instinctively kneeling with her thighs parted fully, naturally, the bloom of her womanhood displayed for the eyes of all. Delicate fingers flutter to her thighs upturned in complete submission as a shudder of terror runs through her form.~


~The powerful Male voice behind her and the CRACK of the whip jolting her to respond as she begins to sing the voice filled with a tulmult of emotion brazen and bold like something from a local paga tavern~
Lovin' you has got to be~That Male voice echoing the girl's~ (take her to the other side)
~As the whip snaps behind her bringing her fully to her feet with a start her pulse pounding as she is tossed upwards her eyes snapping round from He that owns her to he that will rend her flesh from bones should she prove displeasing a look of sheer terror on her face as the curls of mahogany fall round slender shoulders~
'tween the dias and the deep green sea~ (take her to the other side)
~Again the leather snakes out this time the girl drops to her belly seeking to avoid its terrifying touch. The slender form falling face first to the sands prone before all who have come to see her humiliation at the whim of her Master. His words still ringing in her ears "Dance or Die". The prayer that this dance or this day not be her last falling whispered from within full lips which look to have been bruised by the harsh kiss of some Master or another, seeing the way he makes her move it may well have been the one with the whip~
Forget about her foolish pride (take her to the other side)
~With all the force possesed of those brutish arms he flings the rawhide through the air with a hiss that seems to grip her about the waist to drag her to her knees. The coppery tresses fall away from her face revealing eyes the color of midnight awash with the fear of that sound, her head snapping back as she catches sight of the gaze belonging to he who holds the whip. The long tail now dangling menacingly between his fingers as he smirks almost snarling at the naked slave trembling before him~
Oh take her to the other side (take her to the other side)


: ~The girls lips part as she hears His words again in her mind her eyes darting to Him once again. Tiny hands come up in a feeble attempt to fend the lash's attack off as again the titan before weilds the weapon every woman fears and yet all must someday kiss. Its clap like a jarring roll of thunder in her ears. Yet not until she sees the brow of her Master knit together does she leap to her feet, her fear of His anger greater even than that of the whip. The girls hands rake into her hair the curls enveloping the tiny fingers hiding them as her elbows come up to crush inward and flex out before her face as she bounces her head turning left then right and back again as her voice rings out the kalika and sisturns driving her almost as harshly as the gnashing of the whip at the air about her form as she leaps left to avoid another stinging snatch at her flesh by the scourge~
her mama told her there'd be days like this, and man she wasn't foolin'
~The eyes like midnight skies filled with starlight widen as the kiss of the knout caresses over her hips the sanguine silks hung low there falling away, torn from her by the tip of her tormentor's tongue. A thin red ridge rising upon sunbronzed flesh along the mark of her slavery at her left thigh as the seething sizzle of leather is heard once more behind her. Spinning off on tiny toes, the beast seeking refuge from the Guard doling out distress with the flick of His wrist. The tiny form stutter stepping to a halt lifted up upon tiny toes only to turn and bolt in another direction, her attempt at fleeing futile and forlorn.~
'cause she just can't believe the way you kiss, Uh huh
~The girls eyes find a path to free her from the tortorous touch of the whip as she coils around the pole in the center of the circle of sand. The girl leaning left then right her hips swaying as her form seeks to become one with the hardened staff, seeking its protection from the lash leaping through the air. The velvety voice calling out to the assemblage as she ducks once more behind the pole her form shifting to look from behind one side then the other, the copper of her curls shimmering in the light of the fire as they whip round her form~
 

: she opened up her mouth with baited breath, she said she'd never leave you
~Coquetishlty she slips from behind the pole her eyes now locked onto the Guard with the whip. Willowy fingers raking up along her sides as she moves with a tiny bouncing steps through the sands, her hips rocking hard to the beat her head snapping left and right the curls snapping back and forth as she raises her arms out to her sides her palms flashing up and back as she twirls her head completely around the tails of her hair flickering over the Guards hands as her belly undulates the toes of her left foot pointed into the sands her knee cocked so that her form writhes in a single continuous ripple~
You love her, you hate her, she tried to take the loss
~Tiny feet stamping the ground with each word as if to punctuate the speed~
she's been cryin' you a river but now she's gotta get across
~The tiny twister spins off and slams to a halt her hands dropping to her hips as she brazenly looks up at the One who owns her with eyes like stormy skies the tone suddenly accusatory as her left brow cocks as if daring Him to deny the words. With a smirk upon full lips she spins away her head snapping round as the hips rock hands brought one after another up to her shoulders in tiny fists only to fall away and return in time to the rythm, her feet managing a cross step stuttering her toes through the sands as if stopped at the edge of some body of water. The fevered pitch of her movements knocking the breath from her she looks to the male voice imploringly and he seeing her distress takes the words up~
Forget about her foolish pride(take her to the other side)Oh take her to the other side(take her to the other side)
Lovin' you has got to be(take her to the other side)'tween the dias and the deep green sea(take her to the other side)


: ~the girls form prancing now round the outer edge of the pit as she seeks to draw a reprieve from the Guard with the whip her form dropping to the sands her thighs parting fully her eyes lowered as her fingers draw along the sides of her breasts offering them up to him. her hips rolling as she moans the words flowing through her entire being as she pleads to be forgiven and left to complete the task knowing deep within he is taking great pleasure in forcing her again to writhe as the whip snakes out hissing through the air. Having caught her breath her voice takes over once again~
she was lookin' for another kind of love.. Oh lordy how she needed it.
~The lithelil body shifting in the sand she turns brazenly to the Guard planting her deliacte hands upon shapely hips, almost defiantly~
The kind that likes to leap without a shove... Oh Master, best believe it
~Jolted from her respite by the biting of the whip upon the sands between her splayed thighs the girls head snaps up drawing her fully from the sands once more. Upon her toes once again she spins frenetically, the girls motions seeming to blur for a moment as she seeks to twist her way from the hissing snapping whip's crack. The long fingers raking back the curls as she stops suddenly her gaze raised to the throng watching, boldly her form now swaying from side to side more gently, though the beat has not changed the intent has~
To save a lot of time and foolish pride she'll say what's on her mind, now


: ~Suddenly, the whip craks again over her head and the tiny beast drops once more to her knees and then forward to her belly her hips rolling like the never ending tides. With a sudden thrust of her shoulders she rolls to her back her hips grinding upwards to the air as she moans softly. The curls of mahogany and copper clinging to her ample breasts along with tiny grains of sand flickering in the light of the firelight. Caramel mosels atop her firm mounds screaming in their tautness to be suckled, the girl's eyes closing as she cries out~
You loved her, you hate her, you cut her down to size You blinded her with love and yeah it opened up her eyes
~Ten thousand pin pricks of silver starlight seeming to shimmer in midnight blue eyes as they flash open suddenly jerked upwards by the sound of that snapping leather lash. The male voice ringing out again~
Lovin' you has got to be (take her to the other side)
~the whip catching the very tip of a ripened nipple bringing the beast instantly to her feet~
"Tween the dias and the deep green sea (take her to the other side) her conscience got to be her guide (take her to the other side) Oh Master take her, take take take take take ow
~Again the tiny form bounces her hands rising to come over her head as the male singer drives her with his voice as much as the Guard drives her with the whip. Eyes now wild her own voice rings out~
Take her to the other side
she's lookin' for another kind of love, Oh lordy how she needs it, The kind that likes to leap without a shove Master, you best believe it
~The tiny dancers form glistening with a sheen of sweat which sparkleslike tiny jewels in the glow of the torches. Shifting in the sands as she sings her hands lowering to slide over her belly as her right foot lifts from the sands and kicks outward across her leftleg turning her entire form round away from the onlookers. Up onto tiny feet she is thrust as the whip lands over her well rounded ass, the very tip coiling itself around a toned left thigh to lick at the brand there. The girls heart pounding as she looks back over her shoulder from the Guard to He that owns her, seeing neither appeased she moans and turns again to the crowd~


: Now she ain't one for sayin' long goodbyes, she hopes all is forgiven
~The voice callng out to them for support she winks to one Master and smiles her hips rolling hard and thrusting forward as she seeks to assuage them as well as He that owns her. The long fingers rise snatching her own curls jerking her head left and right once more. The collar gleaming at her throat identifying her as slave her own nakedness announcing it, her wantoness in her movements leaving no chance for her to mistake what she is. The whip stinging the air again she laughs knowing now as surely as the three moons will rise over the thassa that she is only what He wants her to be.~
You loved her, you hate her, she could have been your lover
~ Wildly searching fingers gripping the circlet of gold at her throat as she winks her hips rocking once more her left knee cocked exposing her slave flesh fully. The undulaions continuing as her fingers dance their way down to the brand at her thigh her eyes sparkling as she moans out softly in recognition of what she has become~
she knows she had it comin' yeah so take her to the other side
~the girls form spinning free of the sands out onto the tiles a blur of naked flesh curls and golden bells as she twirls to the Guard. Writhing against him she coils herself into the whips caress, her fingers looping its length round her waist as the male voice in the background sings harder her form rippling in responce~
Take her to the other side Take her to the other side Lovin' you has got to be (take her to the other side) 'Tween the dias and the deep green sea (take her to the other side) her conscience's got to be her guide (take her to the other side)


: ~three tiny steps backwards drawing the Guard behind her~
Oh Master take her to the other side(take her to the other side)
~the tiny form bent at the waist the girl wiggles her way with the guard in tow back over the floors
Lovin' you has got to be(take her to the other side)
~stopping almost to her Master she leans up pressing a kiss to the Guards cheek with a wink, her hips rolling against him again as she steps back and spins away dropping to the floor
'Tween the dias and the deep green sea(take her to the other side)
Forget about her foolish pride(take her to the other side)
~the last line sung as the girl rolls along the floor over and over again uncoiling from within the grasp of the whip~
Master take her take her take her take her to the other side(take her to the other side)(take her to the other side)
~The roll stopping at the tips of her Master's boots. The tiny dancer laid out on her back the spine arches her head thrown back her breasts heaving, the mahogany curls fanning out around her and clinging against glistneing flesh she moans~
"la Va kajira, Master me ja lina"

 
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