Alright, here is my first fanfiction post. Well, I hope you like it and

comments are more than welcome. This is an alternate version

of the story. So, maybe one time I'll post the original version.

Yeah, maybe...

A/N: This originally start as an project for English class.

Supposed to be some sort of gothic short story. Showing we

understand and could use gothic elements in the story. Yeah...

Well somewhere along the line it warped itself as an labyrinth

fanfiction.So, I decided to finish it. I had to rewrite the assigment

six times. Kept warping itself into an labyrinth fanfiction...

Anyways, on with the fic...

The blood drip off the walls slithering like a serpent would on the

grass. The deep breathing of fear could be heard all around the

room. The walls were shaded, as not to see the colors. The

blood clurring scream could be heard off the walls and the many

stairwells.

Silence invaded.

Even the deep breathing couldn't be heard.

Smash!

The glass ornaments are falling down.

The sobbing, shattered the silence. The rapid footsteps could be

heard in the amazing yet, twisted room.

" I want out of here. "

no response.

" I know your there. "

Still nothing.

Walking around the many stairwells.

" ahh! "

moving from the edge to the door, where's it's safe.

Musical laughter.

The girl dropped her head. letting her long brown hair flow down

her back.

" When your ready to take up my offer, I'll let you go. "

" Jareth! "

More muscial laughter as the sound of boots clicking fades in

the distance.

Sarah leaned her head against the door.