V.2
Crusty and easily broken
In my hands.
Like all of us,
It is dead.
Failure leads to death.
Crusty and easily broken.
I am thinly covered.
Nineteen years old.
This shell is dead.
V.3
Broken
Hands.
Us.
Dead.
Failure.
Protect.
Nineteen.
Broken.
Hands.
Dead.
V.4
Broken.
Dead.
Nineteen.
Dead.
Just to throw a little different style onto the original, I
simply started deleting words and phrases.