Draft 2
Name:
Name of writer:
Date:
1) There should be a thesis. Is there a thesis?
What is the thesis?
2)Does the paper flow and logically connect from one point to the next?
Give an example.
If not, propose solutions and give examples.
3)What points seem unclear or need further explanation?
4) Where can detail be added?
5) Does the introduction grab you and set up the topic?
Explain.
If not, propose solutions.
6) What points seem to deviate from the topic? Explain.
7) Is information unnecessarily restated?
If so, where?
8) Are more examples needed?
If so, where?
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10) Does the conclusion do a good job of tying up the paper, and does it do more than merely rephrase the introduction?
If not, propose solutions.
11) If the paper does not have a title, or if the title seems bland, suggest another title.
12) I suggest that you
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