Charles MacCarthy's Banshee (11/5/04)
after sickness and delerium and a life of sinful indulgence
Charles MacCarthy stood before the judgement seat
he begged for mercy, and mercy triumped over justice
and a second chance he was given
his mother and his friends, everyone in town
couldn't believe their eyes and ears
when Charles sat up and began to speak, telling of his vision
everyone had thought he was dead
Three more years he was given
after which he would die without another second chance
Three years to change his ways and this he did
He turned his face towards God and ceased his evil ways
As promised after three years to the day he died
Shot by a bullet not aimed for him
Friends coming to comfort his mother were frightened to death
when a dreadful keening was heard on the road
The banshee appeared before them, a hideous old lady
in a cloak of ghostly white
She kept the travellers from resting till they reached MacCarthy's home
and pointed toward the house where the dead man lay
Her long horrible cry chilled their bones
as she mourned the last of the MacCarthy's line
She had mourned their dead for centuries
and here was Charles now dead with no heir
suddenly the banshee was silenced when an angel appeared
she could only barely stand the light of the angel's pressence,
but the angel made her stay if maybe but for a moment
he addressed the banshee and spoke:
"See this man's soul is clean,
he is a man who gave his life to the Lord.
"This is no time to mourn as you do
this man will see eternal life"
The apparition trembled and shivered at the angel's voice
and for the last of her line, the son with no heir
The banshee's voice also trembled erratic
one moment high piched, the next low like a man's
"For one this man was sinful for most his life
surely three years cannot cleanse years of debauchery
For two his was a high family of a long line
and he last, surely there can be no inheritance"
The wrist of the spectre burned bright white
when the angel took her hand
The angel spoke again, with authority and grace
his hand firm, but the burning slightly faded
"It was not any three years which saved this man
though he worked for the Lord
It was turning toward his God and away from his darkness
no amount of sin can withstand the blood of the Son"
"And for you, your time on earth has ended
your high family gone
they say you were too bad for heaven yet too good for hell
but you too will go to a final destination"
"Go now, if your life had not decided the choice is still yours
Go now, to wherever you believe,
if you believe in the holy blood or if else you want this man to burn
whichever you choose the man will still be saved"
The bent ghost of a woman turned to him in fear
for she believed the man was doomed
But she saw hope in the eyes of the angel
maybe, maybe there was hope for Charles' soul
as for her desire for the man's fate, she could not make up her mind
she desired justice for his crime and an end to be made
but she had seen the change in his final three years,
how his face shone with God's love which he now proclaimed
and how the angel's face shone with the same love
from God, even for the likes of her once human soul
and she began to look toward and receive it
and her mourning was forever ended
She appeared younger now, the red of weeping gone from her eyes
Now she echoed his earlier words
"This is no time to mourn as I have
this man will see eternal peace,
and so might I"
inspired by (and storyline in the first six stanzas taken from)
a folktale called "The Banshee of the MacCarthys"
from the book Irish Fairy and Folk Tales
compiled and edited by W.B. Yeats
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