25 Words That Can Hurt Your
Résumé
By Laura
Morsch, CareerBuilder.com
So, you're experienced? Before you advertise this in your résumé, be
sure you can prove it.
Often, when job seekers try to sell themselves to potential employers,
they load their résumés with vague claims that are transparent to hiring
managers, according to Scott Bennett, author of "The Elements of Résumé
Style" (AMACOM). By contrast, the most successful job seekers avoid these
vague phrases on their résumés in favor of
accomplishments.
Instead of making empty claims to demonstrate your work ethic, use
brief, specific examples to demonstrate your skills. In other words, show,
don't tell.
Bennett offers these examples:
Instead of...
"Experience working in fast-paced environment"
Try...
"Registered 120+ third-shift emergency patients per night"
Instead of...
"Excellent written communication skills"
Try...
"Wrote jargon-free User Guide for 11,000 users"
Instead of...
"Team player with cross-functional awareness"
Try...
"Collaborated with clients, A/R and Sales to increase speed of receivables
and prevent interruption of service to clients."
Instead of...
"Demonstrated success in analyzing client needs"
Try...
"Created and implemented comprehensive needs assessment mechanism to help
forecast demand for services and staffing."
The worst offenders
It’s
good to be hard-working and ambitious, right? The hiring manager won't be
convinced if you can't provide solid examples to back up your claims. Bennett
suggests being extra-careful before putting these nice-sounding but empty words
in your résumé.
Aggressive
Ambitious
Competent
Creative
Detail-oriented
Determined
Efficient
Experienced
Flexible
Goal-oriented
Hard-working
Independent
Innovative
Knowledgeable
Logical
Motivated
Meticulous
People person
Professional
Reliable
Resourceful
Self-motivated
Successful
Team player
Well-organized
Laura Morsch is a writer for
CareerBuilder.com. She researches and writes about job search strategy, career
management, hiring trends and workplace issues.