Yaolee Chen

English 101 My Best Conclusion

Glenn Simshaw

We, there fore, the Representatives of the United States of American, in General Congress, Assembled appealing to the Supreme Judge of the world for the rectitude of ours intentions, do, in the Name, and by authority of the good People of these colonies solemnly publish and declare, That these United Colonies are, and of Right out to be Free and Independent States; that they are absolved from all allegiance to the British Crown, and that all political connection between them and the Stat of Great Britain, is and ought to be totally dissolved; and that as Free and Independent States, they have full Power to levy war, conclude Peace, contract alliances, establish Commerce, and to do all other Acts and things which Independent States may of right do.--- And for the support of this Declaration, with affirms reliance on the Protection of Divine Providence, we mutually pledge to each other our Sieves, our Fortunes and our Sacred Honor. (The Declaration of Independence, July 4^th, 1776)

A good conclusion shall indicate the purpose of his article. Jefferson in his conclusion said the purpose of his article is to “have full Power to levy war, conclude Peace, contract alliances, establish Commerce, and to do all other Acts and things which Independent States may of right do”. Before the conclusion, the introduction is a statement of equal right movement, and the body paragraphs are a series of accusing on the action of the British tyranny. The article, unavoidable, is wordy, aimless, and pointless. The British had committed such and such the criminal acts according to my judgment based on the law of nature and of the natural God. Well, so what. He has established an absolute tyranny over us, and what can you do for help? So this is the purpose of the conclusion: Jefferson said, “all political connection between them and the State of Great Britain, is and ought to be totally dissolved.” Jefferson addresses why he is writing this article and the consequences of the declaration shall be that the US is going to be more powerful after its independence. And finally, he is going to summit his childish announcement to the highest court in the world (I don’t know where it is, either). But his conclusion is, now, heard by almost all the people of the free countries in the world. His purpose is simple and is clear that, so, we can have the power to do so and so. I consider the conclusion of the Declaration of Independence is my best conclusion.