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Najati Al Husseini
17th Nov, 2002
Copyright © Najati.net 2003
 
 
Baby Deer
 
My eyes rise… As they do, catch a surprise.
They follow your trail, your colors, your hair.
They try to follow, they do…
They finally reach, and halt on you.
 
My heart forgets his job,
My breath somehow gets stuck,
My blood suddenly Clots,
And my mind just stops!
 
A baby deer; on my land, HERE!
Walking steadily with no sign of fear.
A baby deer that made me smile,
A baby deer that is so fine.
 
Hard to see, I rise on feather.
Sneak slowly to see her better.
Cracked a bush, she stops to spot,
Ashamed I got, my legs just flopped.
 
Amazingly she got closer and smiled,
Felt my world become so bright,
Felt a feeling so pure and right,
I fell in love from the first sight.
 
I approached her and said many things,
Approached her and invited her in.
In candle light I made her sit,
Kept her curious till the end.
 
Your fifteenth present has reached it’s time,
Finally, would you… would you…
Would you be mine?
No Right Click
Opinion?

Dont like it.
Not my style.
It is alright.
I like it.
I LOVE it!


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