Standard Disclaimer!
Back in Bethleheim I owned nothing.
In the present Santa Claus gives me...nothing...
well the coal...guess Msting is considered being bad :(
well at least I can start a fire now :)
But where I get nothing you get ..um..something?
12 days..no its to late for 12..
Bells...na..a reindeer?..to smelly
how about another MST?
good
fyi their was a mst for Darkscribes before this and I skipped a story
in my contimuim that i will do next but I wanted to get this done
for X-mas.
well enjoy /\_/\
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Misato: Well the party starts in soon, you guys want to exchange gifts now?
Asuka: Why did we have to use that dumb name swap?
Shinji: We don't have enough money to buy gifts for everybody.
Rei: If you managed your money better you would have.
Misato: Well I thought with just having to get one gift you could spend more
on the gift...'I need to cut back on the Yebisu.'
Rei: Why did you put paper over the boxes?
Asuka: Why are we even celibrating Christmass, isn't it catholic?
Shinji: Yeah, we're not Catholic.
Rei: Are foes are Angels of the religion, get to know your foe?
Misato: Nah! X-mas is so commercialized now its just an excuse to give gifts.
Now you guys rembered the list right?
Shinji: I hope so 'otherwise somebody will be very upset.'
Rei: Yes the list was
name- to buy for
Misato-Shinji
Rei-Misato
Asuka-Rei
Shinji-Asuka
Asuka: I'm so pissed you took Hikari off the list
Misato: We had to make cuts somewhere or the list would be a mile long, ne Shinji.
Shinji: Well..you see..um...
Rei: Shinji-kuns popularity has gotten rather high.
Asuka: Lets just open the presents now , Shinji why don't you have a bow on your
head?
Misato: Rules, nobody can be a gift for the other person
Rei: It was because of you we made that rule.
Misato: Oh yeah. Shinji you go first.
Shinji: Ok 'opens his gift' its a box of new cello cords!
Asuka: THATS IT!!
Misato: Do you know how expensive those things ARE! well its my turn 'takes a book out of a bag'
Rei...I don't need "Getting over your Alcholism: For dummies"
Rei: I believe you do...am I to destroy the paper?
Asuka: You never got a gift before....yes you are.
Rei: 'sets into paper with a passion tiny bits remain' what is this?
Asuka: Its cloths you need to wear more than that stupid school uniform! My turn
this better be good. 'opens her present' wha..how..YIPPIE!
Misato: What did you get her Shinji-kun?
Shinji: Just a pair of earrings she was looking at.
Rei: Those require you're ears to have holes correct, I cannot use them, my ears
don't have holes.
Misato: Rei..you have your ears pierced, you're not born like that.
Rei: Oh.
Shinji: Well the others should be arriving soon, is everything ready?
Misato: Booze is up, egg nog for you young-uns, food, tree, and a movie
to watch when you get tired of standing.
Shinji: I'll set the snack table.
Asuka/Rei: I'll help, you help Misato.
Misato: Just go.
Asuka/Rei: Ok
Ritsuko arrives with tuperwear container: Hey Misato, going to be a big bash this year?
Misato: Well with the current situation with our pilots...and maybe miss Hokari now.
Ritsuko: Another one?
Misato: I don't know the whole story but after his visit things have gotten odd again.
Ritsuko What do you mean?
Misato: She's either over here now or calling, Shinji-kun really is developing a
following..whats in the container?
Ritsuko: Bits of the last angel..the one the Mass Prod Eva's got ahold of.
Misato:WHY DID YOU BRING THAT HERE!
Ritsuko: I'm taking it home for study but haven't gotten the chance yet.
Misato: Well stick it in the fridge or something
Ritsuko: That was my plan...so what did you get him?
Misato: They imposed rules..I had to change the plan.
Ritsuko: Would have been funny.
The other guest arrive, that being Touji, Kensuke, Hikari, Makoto, Shigiru, Maya,
and Kaji, who arrived later and looking peaked.
Its your general party with Misato getting drunk along with the other Techs and
Kaji, kids hanging out talking...teasing..Touji and hikari avoiding each other.
Misato attacks the kids...no..She jumped Shinji while wearing Missle-toe on her head
after about an hour and a half.
Shinji: I need a break 'sits on couch.'
Touji: Hey, you got a movie in their?
Kensuke: Looks like it, hit play, I need to rest.
(Begin MST look for the >>> and sudden leaving and coming MST-ers)
From: spardue@zebra.net (Stephen Pardue)
Here's the results of my first fanfic efforts.
I have to thank everyone on the FFML for their C&C, it was invaluable.
Please, let me know what you think.
As usual, all rights for "Neon Genesis Evangelion" belong to Gainax, etc...
Misato's Christmas Party
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>>>Touji: They made a a movie about today?
>>>Rei sitting down: I do not believe so.
>>>Shinji: 'how does she do that' Going to watch it with us?
>>>Asuka taking a seat too: Of coarse, this party takes it out of you.
>>>Kensuke: Yeah sure its all the party.
>>>Asuka: Shin-chan, get us something to drink.
>>>Shinji: 'I knew it' sure..'gets up and heads to kitchen.'
Shinji and Asuka stood in the door, staring at the fir tree in the
living room. From the hall closet came the sounds of boxes being moved.
Misato emerged in her usual after-work attire, cutoffs and a tank top,
>>>Kensuke: MERRY CHRISTMAS!!
>>>Touji: Its exactly what I wanted!
>>>Maya: Hey guys its those movies Sempai was talking about!
>>>Makoto: I have to watch this.
>>>Shigeru: Me too..
>>>And about 2 minuts later the whole party is taking a break to watch
>>> a movie.
carrying several boxes stacked precariously in her arms.
"I knew I kept these decorations when I moved! Shinji - you better
hurry and get this place cleaned up.
>>>Ritsuko: You'll never clean this place on your own will you?
>>>Misato: Why should I, Shinji-kun does it so well.
>>>Shinji: Here you..hey my seat!
>>>Maya: Sorry Shinji-kun but you snooze you lose.
>>>Makoto: Since you're up, get me a sandwich?
>>>Maya/Shigeru: Me too!
>>>Shinji: 'Why don't they just give me a butlers suit and make it official'
Our guests will be here in a couple
of hours." Misato picked up a beer from the table and took a long
swallow.
Shinji's face dropped. "Guests? When did you decide to have a
party?".
>>>Kaji: Its Tuesday, so its party night.
>>>Asuka: More like a weeknight.
Misato finished off her beer and wiped the foam from her mouth,
and smirked. "Why yesterday of course, when my three pilots told me how
much they needed one!"
>>>Rei: I do not rember ever claiming to want a party.
>>>Kensuke: Do you ever ask for anything?
She lowered her voice and stared at Asuka and
Shinji. "You didn't *seriously* think I was going to let the three of
you get away with that 'I don't want to celebrate Christmas' crap did
you?
>>>Touji: Why would you celebrate Christmas anyway, isn't that Catholic.
>>>Misato: We've been over this already so drop it.
>>>Maya: We didn't hear it, don't get all upset.
Besides, you can't trim the tree without a party. Say - where's
Rei? Why isn't she here to help?"
>>>Kaji: She wasn't ordered too.
>>>Asuka: I wish, she never leaves now, just like.
>>>Hikari: What don't want your friend around anymore.
>>>Shinji arrives with a sandwich for Maya, Makoto, Shigeru, and himself.
Asuka - who had been silently staring at the tree - turned and
gave Misato a disgusted look. "*How* much have you been drinking? She
doesn't live here, you know! And we just found out about your stupid
party!"
>>>Kensuke: And the spirit has touched us all, Asuka just yelled and didn't
>>> throw a bottle.
>>>Asuka: I'm saving it for the enima I'm giving you for x-mas.
Misato hiccuped and lifted her nose at Asuka. "I haven't had any
more to drink than usual."
>>>Ritsuko: Translation 7-8 minimum.
>>>Misato: I've cut back.
She had a hurt look on her face. Shinji and Asuka both rolled their eyes.
"Hey - why are you two doing that!" Misato put her beer back on
the table and placed her hands on her hips. "Stop goofing off and get to
work! Shinji, clean this place up! And Asuka - go call Rei!"
>>>Asuka: And if she had a phone that would mean something.
>>>Rei: I have the Nerv Issued cell-phone.
>>>Kaji: But its broken.
>>>Rei: Your point?
>>>Shinji: It won't work.
"She said she had something to do tonight."
>>>Ritsuko: Thats odd, usually give her the holidays off from the tests.
>>>Maya: I'm dreaming of an orange Christmas...
"Then go find her!"
"But why should *I* have to go get her! I'm not the one who's
always mooning after her and peeping at her in her swimsuit!
>>>Rei: If I learn its anybody but Shinji-kun I will hurt them.
>>>Kensuke/Touji: We know better!
>>>Makoto/Kaji: Eyes only for one.
That's what Shinji's for!"
>>>Ritsuko: And the shopping, cleaning, laundry....
>>>Shinji: Somebody has to do it.
"Uh-hey! I don't do that! I do not peep at my fellow pilots in
their swimsuits!"
Asuka narrowed her eyes. "Oh! So you peep at us without our
swimsuits?"
>>>Ritsuko: If they parade around naked yeah.
>>>Asuka/Rei: Its not a parade.
>>>Shinji: Kami-sama stop!
>>>Asseble: Shinji you play-boy!
"Yes - I mean, no! No!"
Misato got another beer out of the refrigerator. After living with
the two of them for a while, she was used to their bickering.
>>>Misato: Asuka thinks she's right....regardless of truth.
>>>Asuka: I am right!
>>>Kaji/Shinji: Yes, she is.
"Now, now
Asuka." She flourished her hand in the girl's direction. "If you don't
hurry and get Rei,you won't have time to get ready before Kaji gets
here."
>>>Shigeru: Ah the Kaji-manuver a classic.
>>>Misato: But it doesn't work anymore thank Kami.
"Kaji? Kaji! He's coming?" Asuka asked excitedly.
>>>Ritsuko/Misato: I hope not!
>>>Makoto: Would kill my hopes.
>>>Kaji: No 'points to Shinji' he already did.
"Well of course! And so is Ritsuko, Hikari, Touji, Kensuke . . . "
>>>Misato: The Pope, satan, the surviving angels...
>>>Shinji: And I get to cook for ALL of um.
Asuka was out the door before Misato could finish. Shinji had been
picking up Misato's empty beer cans from the table. His face got
gloomier as her list of guests continued to grow.
>>>Shinji: All the food...all that cleaning..noise..yippie.
>>>Group: You know you love it!
>>>Ritsuko: Um..Maya-kun, what are you eating?
>>>Maya: Sandwich.
>>>Ritsuko: ' HOLY HELL!'
"Do you think you have enough alcohol in the apartment for that
many guests?" he asked sarcastically.
>>>Misato: No, thats just for me, they can't touch my stuff.
>>>Hikari: But it looks like a brewery in thier!
>>>Misato: I own stock.
"Don't be silly, Shinji. Of course not! I'm having more
delivered." She looked guilty for a moment as she handed Shinji a slip
of paper and said, "Oh yeah, by the way, this is your portion of the
expenses.
>>>Shinji: Expenses! I can't even drink!!
>>>Misato: Drink, why I'd love one 'lost my special eggnog' Thanks for asking.
>>>Shinji: Hi...'gets up and goes to fetch a drink.'
Don't worry about paying me now, you can give it to me next
payday!"
Shinji groaned. He was glad that Asuka had already left the
apartment.
>>>Touji: Be a level 10 Asuka rant.
>>>Shigiru: Isn't that when she breaks walls down?
-*-
Shinji knew the party would be bad when Misato came out of her
room dressed as a reindeer.
>>>Every man save Shinji's jaw has hit the floor.
>>>Hikari: I am so glad I've stopped seeing you.
>>>Touji: But..but..LOOK!
>>>Kaji: You always did know how to dress.
>>>Misato beet red: I don't where stuff like..like..that!
Shinji thought that Misato's everyday
outfits were very daring, and she wore even less at home, but the
reindeer outfit... the horns... the tail... was, well... disturbing.
>>>Ritsuko: Shinji-kun isn't a normal male is he.
>>>Hikari/Asuka: Thank Kami!
>>>Rei: What does a reindeer have to do with Christmas?
He
usually tried not to think about that sort of thing too much, especially
about Misato, Asuka or Rei. There was too much potential for
embarrassment, and he had been ridiculed enough as it was.
>>>Shigeru: Does he have a spine ?
>>>Makoto: Is he? even a guy?
>>>Shinji returning: I am..just more important things to think about.
>>>Girls: Like what?
>>>Touji: No Shinji bashing on x-mas.
Shinji figured that Misato must be pretty loaded, even by her
standards, to wear that outfit. Her face was red enough to confirm his
fears.
>>>Maya: Its about as red as it is now...how much have you drank
>>>Misato downing what Shinji just gave her: Not much.
>>>Ritsuko: Just the shock of that costume.
"Shinji! What do you think?"
Misato stood in the middle of the room posing.
>>>Again, all eyes save Shinji's buldge from their sockets.
"Well?"
Shinji looked at her, and then quickly looked at the floor. A slow
blush began to spread across his cheeks. "Do you have to embarrass me
like this?" He asked quietly.
>>>Rei: He does not appear to be embarrassed, he's seems more..
>>>Hikari: Um..Rei, don't continue.
Misato leveled a frank stare at Shinji and said: "Why? Don't you
like my outfit? Don't I look good in it?"
"Well, yes... but..."
>>>Kensuke: I can die a happy man now.
>>>Kaji/Makoto: Who called you a man in the first place?
>>>Misato: Same could be said about you two.
Misato held Shinji's gaze as she slowly sauntered over to where he
was standing. She slowly leaned forward until her eyes were looking
directly into his, their faces only inches apart.
>>>Ritsuko: Is this going to be like last time you did that?
>>>Misato: That was a movie..and I wouldn't mind....what?
>>>Others: What movie?
>>>Kaji: A sick piece of...
>>>Ritsuko: A good movie that you picked out.
"Shinji, Don't you like to look at me in it?" Misato's voice was
low and sultry.
Shinji's face reddened even more, it was all he could do to stare
at the floor. "Why do you always do this to me?"
>>>Rei: She has issues with younger males?
>>>Asuka: She's depreaved.
>>>Kaji: Wants to piss me off?
>>>Misato: He's just to fun to play with.
>>>Maya blushing: Major! thats sinful!
>>>Ritsuko: Maya...she didn't mean...'I don't think.'
Misato laughed and gave Shinji her brightest smile and ruffled his
hair. "Because its fun!" With a toss of her hips she disappeared into
the kitchen. "What! No more beer?!
>>>Shinji: What happend to all those cases! 'sips his eggnog'
>>>Misato: You mean my chaser?
>>>Shinji: ya....hic 'downs the rest of his eggnog.'
>>>Ritsuko Mis-chan..I think I know what happend to you're eggnog.
I guess I'll just have to drink
something else until the liquor people arrive.
>>>Asuka: Arrive, you mean the actually left, thought you were having a tap
>>> installed in the bathroom.
>>>Maya: Major!
Have you ever had egg nog
Shinji? I've got a great recipe for it here, you'll love it! Especially
with my *secret* ingredient. I bet you can't guess what it is!"
Shinji groaned.
>>>Kaji: Look at you, how can it be a secret.
>>>Makoto/Shigeru: Sake.
>>>Touji/Kensuke/Hikari: Agreed.
>>>Shinji: Nutmeg?
>>>Misato: You..you..how did you..
>>>Others: Nutmeg?
-*-
Once the party began, Shinji found himself paired up with Rei.
>>>Rei: I like Christmass.
>>>Asuka: BULLSH*T!
>>>Makoto: Ok..what the hell was that?
He
thought it was rather odd to begin with. After all, he was a quiet
person, and Rei was a positive recluse.
>>>Kaji: More like a mute mental patient.
>>>Touji: You haven't seen her upset.
>>>kaji: And you have?
>>>All the Toili people: YES!
But the more he thought about
it, the more he realized that there was really no one else at the party
for either one of them to pal around with.
>>>Kensuke: You just don't think about us do you?
>>>Shinji: I lova ya guzz...bezzt friends A guy ..could have..
>>>Rei: He is intoxicated, Major, what did you do?
>>>Misato: Oops, shouldn't have left that lying around...he'll be fine.
Of course, Shinji's friends
were present, but they were busy mooning around after Misato. Shinji
didn't want to watch her flirt any more tonight.
>>>Makoto: I do!
>>>Shigeru: What about Maya and her 'sempai?'
No one, it seemed, was safe.
>>>Ritsuko: How safe can you be with giant monsters trying to kill you?
They had started out by trimming the tree. Some guests had brought
ornaments as gifts, and several of the boxes Misato had pulled from the
closet had ornaments in them.
>>>Misato: Where the hell those come from?
>>>Shinji: Ya got dem when drunk shappen 'slumps over leaning next to hikari who
>>> just smiles wickedly at Asuka and Rei.'
>>>Asuka/Rei: 'That should be my seat.'
But, by the time all of these were hung,
the tree still had several yawning bare spots. Then Misato had the
bright idea of wrapping wire around the necks of her empty liquor
bottles and hanging them from the tree.
>>>Misato: Now thats beutiful, why can't science make a beer tree?
>>>Shigeru: Thats a new form of recycling.
>>>Rei: If the tree falls it could kill somebody.
Ritsuko had pointed out that the heavy bottles would probably
break the branches. But Misato had countered by retrieving a box of
empty miniatures from her room.
>>>Misato: My emergency Asuka repelent.
>>>Asuka: What about her?
>>>Rei: What?
>>>Misato: Guess her too.
"Don't you ever throw away your empties, Misato?" Kaji asked.
She stuck her tongue out at him. "That's what Shinji's for!"
>>>Maya: MAJOR!
>>>Asuka: How old are you? she didn't mean her tongue!
>>>Ritsuko: Are you sure?
>>>Hikari: Be quiet, you're disturbing us.
>>>Kensuke: Touji, calm down, not your...wait it is your fault so get over it.
Surprisingly, the empty miniatures actually looked quite good on
the tree. Misato insisted that the Americans did it all the time, but no
one believed her.
>>>Shinji: Why na?
>>>Misato: Nobody ever does.
>>>Asuka: Americans, bet they use guns or something.
Eventually most of the guests left, leaving only Ritsuko, Kaji,
Hikari, Rei and Shinji's friends.
Asuka was stalking Kaji, who was trying his best to avoid her.
>>>Kaji: I'm just a lady killer.
>>>Misato: Then call the cops and put you in jail.
>>>Asuka: I..don't see a reason to chase you..Um..really...
>>>Hikari/Rei snicker.
Ritsuko seemed to be amused by the whole thing, and kept trying to tease
Misato about losing Kaji to Asuka.
>>>Ritsuko: More like losing somebody else.
>>>Kaji: Thats a crock!
>>>Makoto beams happily.
>>>Misato: Not you Makoto-kun.
>>>Makoto deflates.
So the merry band simply floated in
circles around the room - Touji and Kensuke chasing Misato, who flirted
with the boys and bantered with Ritsuko, who was protecting Kaji from
Asuka.
>>>Shinji: DA room ain't dat big.
>>>Hikari: Its like the Katsuragi 500.
>>>Ritsuko: Why would I protect him?
Shinji and Rei sat against the wall, watching the whole sordid
affair unwind before their eyes.
>>>Rei: That would be boring, I require a window.
>>>Asuka: Like looking at two bumps on a log.
Shinji watched Rei as she followed the increasingly drunken
movements of Misato with calm disinterest. When Asuka had returned with
Rei, she had not expressed any opinion about the party.
>>>Asuka: And this is differnet because?
>>>Kensuke: She would usually say something about it being impractical.
>>>Rei shuts her mouth as Kensuke took her words.
Rei had done as
she was asked, and had helped set out the refreshments, but then she had
taken a cup of punch and sat where she was now.
>>>Makoto: What you think suger or alcohol?
>>>Shigeru: I'd say suger high.
>>>Kaji: I'm in on that bet.
No amount of inducement
had led her toward conversation, and eventually the others had given up
trying to talk to her.
>>>Rei: Quiters.
>>>Shinji: I like talking to ya 'smiles widely'
>>>Rei: You are the exception.
Asuka had been more derogatory than usual about
Rei's attitude. But, as usual, Rei had simply ignored her.
>>>Rei: I do not ignore, I don't care.
>>>Ritsuko: I'd say thats worse.
Now Shinji
watched her closely, wondering about her silence.
"Umm, are you enjoying the party Rei?"
"No."
"Really? Why not?"
>>>Asuka: Have to have more than just one emotion to enjoy anything.
>>>Shigeru: Theirs hardly anybody there, what kind of fun can you have?
"I . . . dislike holidays."
"Huh! You do?"
"Yes."
"Didn't your family celebrate any holidays?"
>>>Ritsuko: Rei..family...right..that would be a funny thing to watch.
>>>Rei: I will not let you put me back in that tank.
>>>Ritsuko: Thought you'd like to spend the Holidays with your sisters.
"..."
Shinji didn't think it was possible, but Rei seemed to draw even
more into herself,
>>>Touji: Wouldn't that create a black-hole?
>>>Ritsuko: One would think but since were not all dead, guess not.
exuding a cold aura which discouraged conversation.
>>>Shinji: Scary!
>>>Hikari: hush hush just rest your head 'This is so nice!'
>>>Kaji: Looks like she'd steal his soul like that.
Shinji mentally kicked himself. Family was a sore point for the Eva
pilots. He pressed on though, determined to talk to her.
>>>Misato: Shinji drunk?
>>>Maya: Very just look at him.
>>>Misato: Not that one, the movie one.
>>>Maya: Doubt it.
"My father never celebrated holidays with me. Never. Even my
earliest memories of Christmas, with my mother,
>>>Ritsuko: Or your mother, you were what a toddler?
>>>Shinji: Dad's a bastard
have no images of my
father. It almost seemed like he didn't exist for me until my mother
died. Not that he did anything after her death either."
>>>Kaji: So dumping you off is nothing?
>>>Asuka: Calling you to pilot is nothing?
>>>Shinji: ZZZZZZZZzzzzzzzz.
>>>Rei: That would be his escape route number 34.
Shinji's voice was filled with bitterness and self-pity.
Rei turned her head to look at Shinji. Her eyes softened a little,
>>>Touji: So their just granite?
>>>Rei: I can be soft if I wish.
>>>Ritsuko: You're arms can fall off if you want to as well.
>>>Maya: How much have you had to drink sempai?
but otherwise her face showed no change in expression. He continued
speaking.
"The first Christmas I really celebrated was after I left home.
That was a few years ago. The school I was at arranged for me to spend
Christmas and New Years with the family of another student there.
>>>Kaji: Ok...so they want him to see what a normal family does so he
>>> can live in more shame?
>>>Misato: Hey, he's in a norma...no its not really normal is it.
>>>Ritsuko: If you live in England.
I was
uncomfortable, watching people who love each other express their
happiness, when I was alone. That's why I didn't want to celebrate
Christmas this year - I didn't want to have and try to reach out to
others, knowing that I'm not really a part of their family, that I'm an
outsider."
>>>Ritsuko: He's a fun-black hole, he just destroyed that party.
>>>Misato: Thank heavens he's past out..I don't rember having any beef here.
>>>Ritsuko: 'thats it..whoever ate that food may die!'
Rei considered Shinji, without changing her expression. "What
about Major Katsuragi and Asuka?"
>>>Asuka/Misato: Yeah!
>>>Hikari: He can't answer you...he can barely sit up straight.
Shinji noticed that she did not include herself. It was just like
her to exclude herself from the group.
>>>Touji: Is it because she isn't?
>>>Kensuke: Or is it her low self-esteem?
>>>Asuka: Its her freak vibe.
>>>Rei: Hey.
"Well, I live with them. Misato has been very kind to me. And I
even get along with Asuka some now, but they're not family.
>>>Ritsuko: Is that why he's talking to Rei?
>>>Rei: Don't bring that into this or I'll reveal the trutha bout your head.
>>>Maya: Sempai?
>>>Ritsuko: Ok ok.
I'm not sure
I've ever had a real family." Shinji placed his hands in his lap and
stared at the floor glumly.
>>>Misato: The floor and ceiling are his family, spends enough time with them.
>>>Asuka:Don't forget that damn SDAT.
Rei looked out at the party again. Misato was teasing Touji
mercilessly, and Hikari's face was getting red as she tried to drag him
away.
>>>Hikari: I gave up trying that for better things.
>>>Kensuke: And who do you have to blaim?
>>>Touji: I blaim Misato and Kami, how else could she look so good?
>>>Hikari: BAKA!
Asuka had her hand over her eyes and shook her head as she stood
by Hikari. When Rei spoke, her voice was soft, barely above a whisper.
>>>Asuka: Why does the director make such pains to state the obvious?
"My first memory is of Commander Ikari, watching me.
>>>Girls: EW!!! pervert!!
>>>Misato: Don't they have laws against that kind of thing?
Family makes
me uncomfortable." Rei continued to watch the rest of the party goers
while she spoke.
>>>Makoto: Maybe thats why Ayanami's always been odd,..the commander.ew.
Shinji stared at Rei. He didn't think that his father had real
feelings for Rei.
>>>Shinji a bit more awake: Or feelins a tol.
It might appear that he did, but Shinji's own bitter
experience told him that his father only used people.
>>>Kaji: Thats an understate ment, pawns on a chess board.
>>>Ritsuko: Actually, he doesn't know how to play chess.
Rei continued to
watch the party, but despite her outburst, she betrayed no emotion.
"I don't know what to say, Rei."
>>>Asuka: Gee, what a surprize.
>>>Touji: Mega-playboy doesn't need to say a word.
>>>Maya: Mega-playboy?
"Then don't say anything."
-*-
Asuka was tired of chasing Kaji, and tired of watching Hikari get
jealous of the attention Misato was giving Touji. She was more or less
resigned to the fact that Kaji wasn't really interested in her as a
woman.
>>>Kaji: What?
>>>Ritsuko: YOu are so sick Kaji.
>>>Asuka: Better things than somebody that doesn't know how to shave.
>>>kaji: I don't..want..to..cut.....
>>>Touji/Kensuke: WUSS
Why would he be when he had a woman like Misato to chase after?
Not that Misato was all that hot. Men were just idiots.
>>>Makoto: Sounds like alot of jealousy their.
>>>Shigeru: Not hot? well I guess its normal for girls to say stuff like that.
>>>Misato: Its so hard being attractive.
Tokyo 3 wasn't what she had expected.
Bored, she wandered away from the main group. Then she saw Shinji
and Rei sitting together under the mistletoe.
>>>Misato: Oh crap I forgot about that!
>>>Rei: That is a poinous plant.
>>>Misato: But its fun too.
Now, Asuka knew that they weren't sitting there on purpose. The
two of them were so dense that they probably didn't even know that the
mistletoe was there.
>>>Asuka: Or what it stands for, baka
>>>Touji: Hey, he's not that bad..when he's sober.
Heck! The two of them probably didn't even know
what mistletoe meant! Asuka thought about the situation for a minute,
and struggled with her conscience.
>>>Kensuke: Thats a one sided battle. Devil has no conscience.
>>>Touji: So we better get ready for the worst of it.
>>>Asuka: 'must control...temper...its..a holida...'SCREW IT DIE 'chases Touji+
>>> Kensuke around the apartment'
She wanted to make a scene. Shouldn't
she feel some guilt about it? Probably, but she didn't!
>>>Makoto: Don't they have words to describe people like that.
>>>Rei/Ritsuko: Sadiest.
>>>Misato/Maya/Kaji: Confused.
Oh well, she
couldn't live with herself if she let this opportunity slip by.
"Say," she said brightly, "when did this start?"
Rei looked at her for a second, and then asked in a soft voice,
"What do you mean?"
>>>Rei: The 3rd impact?
>>>Kaji: Rei talking when not asked a direct question?
>>>Misato: People at my parties not drinking!
"When did the two of you become an item, eh?"
Shinji looked away from Rei quickly. "What?" His voice cracked as
he spoke.
"When did the two of you get so cozy?
>>>Ritsuko: I'd say after that 'eggnog' hit him.
>>>Hikari: Its not 'my' fault he sat down here 'blushes.'
>>>Asuka: But you're not moving either.
I mean, you've spent the
whole night together, ignoring everyone so that you could sit alone in a
quiet corner under the mistletoe."
Shinji's face began to redden. "M-m-mistletoe?" He slowly looked
up.
>>>Misato: So...Asuka you want them to kiss?
>>>Rei: I could get to like the holidays.
>>>Asuka: um..crap.
>>>Hikari: Where are Touji and Kensuke?
>>>Asuka: Don't worry about them.
Everyone else had started to gather around the three of them when
they heard Asuka's first exclamation.
>>>Maya: Guess its not much of a party if that gets everybodies attention.
>>>Makoto: I think it makes great entertainment.
Now they began to encourage Shinji
and Rei to kiss. Misato was at the front of the pack. "Yea Shinji! Kiss
'er! Go on! Be a man about it!" She slammed down the rest of her beer.
"Kaji, gimme anudder beer!"
>>>Misato: Can't use my number one, so use the secondaries.
>>>Kaji: Secondaries?
>>>Misato: Why else would Makoto be here?
>>>Makoto: Did you want another beer?
>>>Ritsuko: Sad...very..very sad
Rei looked at Misato, who was listing dangerously,
>>>Rei: That is like the Titanic.
then Asuka.
Asuka began to sweat under Rei's cool gaze. Deciding that she preferred
to be in control, Asuka took the offensive again.
>>>Kaji: And that means she's about to punch Rei.
>>>Asuka: No, I've seen how that turns out, not to well.
"Well, what's the matter? Don't you believe in the holiday
spirit?"
>>>Rei: No.
>>>Ritsuko: Surprize surprize.
Asuka arched her eyebrow and looked down her nose at Shinji and
Rei, her hands on her hips.
Rei's eyes bored into Asuka's.
>>>Makoto: Got the bored part right, Yawn do something.
Then she turned toward Shinji and
placed a hand on his cheek. His eyes began to dart from Rei to Asuka to
Misato and back.
>>>Ritsuko: Looking for an escape route.
>>>Shigeru: From what, isn't Rei nutered like a little kid?
Then Rei leaned forward and kissed him gently on the
lips.
Asuka snickered.
>>>Crowd: Whoh!
>>>Misato: Never thought I'd see the day.
>>>Makoto/Shigeru: Those two..actually know how?
Rei parted her lips slightly and pulled Shinji's body closer to
hers. Shinji, who had been very still from the time Rei had placed her
hand on his cheek until now, began to squirm and make muffled noises.
>>>Kaji: Seems like Miss Ayanami here knows what she's after.
>>>Shigeru: And its in the middle of Shinji-kuns mouth.
>>>Asuka: What did I do?
>>>Rei: Gave me the best x-mas gift.
Rei let her tongue slip into Shinji's mouth, where it soon encountered
his. Shinji stopped squirming and stiffened. His eyes rolled up into his
head as his mind shut down.
>>>Rei: What no music?
>>>Asuka/Hikari: Sshh.
>>>Misato/Ritsuko: Oh, you guys too huh.
Asuka stared at the two of them with her eyes wide and her mouth
gaping open. "Arrrrrrgh! She's giving him tongue!" She yelled in
disbelief.
>>>Rei: No, I am allowing him to help me exercise it.
>>>Shinji: Whaz that..is that me?
>>>Ritsuko: If you keep on drinking yes.
"Awww-right Rei! Yeah! Finally, some action!" Misato screamed,
then passed out.
>>>Misato: Well she is now anyway.
>>>Rei: Not with Hokari-san holding him.
>>>Maya: What has been going on here?
Kaji laughed and caught her as she collapsed, then he
and Ritsuko began to carry Misato to her room.
Rei broke the kiss and pulled back from Shinji.
"Good night, Shinji."
>>>Shinji: That was so touching.
>>>Asuka: 'need to get him liqured up more'
>>>Rei:That was a nice custom.
Rei's voice was soft, for his ears alone. Shinji could hear the
emotion in her words, though her face betrayed none. Then she stood and
left, ignoring the others.
>>>Ritsuko: Just like she arrived.
>>>Hikari: How can she do that, she doesn't change her pitch but..
>>>Asuka: Baka can tell...its the oddest thing.
>>>Shinji/Rei: Its a gift.
Asuka stood staring at Shinji, a look of pure amazement on her
face.
>>>Maya: And Shinji-kuns..is he breathing?
"The First Child is weird Shinji, very weird. Who would ever want
to kiss you? I mean, you weren't very good when I did . . . " The gasps
from behind made her stop,
>>>Rei: You never think before speaking, that is why you can't be trusted.
>>>Asuka: But..that was before..not now..Now I wa...SHIT!!
>>>OTher at party: You WANT TO!
>>>Shinji: ZZZZZZZZZzzzzzzzzzZZZZZz
and she realized what she had just said, and
whom she had said it in front of. She stared in horror at Hikari, who
was trying to stifle a laugh.
>>>Hikari: You suck at secrets.
>>>Asuka: HIKARI!
>>>Kaji: Good thing you never got ahold of my pc.
"Ach, Mein Gott!" Asuka screamed, then ran to her room and slammed
the door shut.
Touji and Kensuke stood around Shinji and slapped his shoulders.
"Shinji! You've kissed them both, you dog! I never thought you had it in
you!" Touji exclaimed.
>>>Asuka: Never thought it either until you did it.
>>>Kaji: My lessons payed off...and then some.
Kensuke couldn't hold in his excitement. "Yeah! Why didn't you
tell us? That's quite a coup! I wish I'd brought my camera."
>>>Rei/Asuka/Hikari: We'd break it.
Shinji ignored them both, and stared at the door Rei had left
through.
-*-
Shinji sat alone in front of the Christmas tree. After Rei left,
with Misato passed out in her room and Asuka barricaded in hers, the
others had left.
>>>Ritsuko: Nobody else to torture?
>>>Kaji:All the action is done.
>>>Hikari: Or lust over.
>>>Makoto: Yeah..
As usual, it had been up to him to see them out and
thank them for coming, then clean up the mess everyone else had made.
Still, staring at the tree shining softly in the corner made him think
of the good things that were in his life,
>>>Misato: Beer laden Trees!
>>>Kaji: Women that know what they want and take it.
>>>Rei: The second put me up to it 'mental note-find that plant'
even if there were few enough of them.
Despite the horror of the Angels, Shinji realized that these past
months had been the best in his life.
>>>Misato: See, it was good for him to move in here.
>>>Ritsuko: Do you know how sad that statement really is?
>>>Rei: No.
>>>Ritsuko: Nor would you, the best part of his life is life or death fights!
He could finally see the worth in
himself, that he was valued by others. Although awkward at first, he
really enjoyed living with Misato and Asuka. They did pick on him a lot.
>>>Maya: Won't that cause a complex?
>>>Shigeru: You mean he doesn't have them all yet?
Misato was always making him cook and clean, and Asuka insulted him as
much at the apartment as anywhere else.
>>>Asuka: Oh, this is one of those movies.
>>>Rei: Yes, you are a cruel and spitless...'bitch' was it.
>>>Kaji: Yes, but don't use such language.
>>>Rei: Who are you to tell ME what to say agent Kaji.
>>>Kaji: Nevermind.
Yet Shinji thought that this
must be what a real family was like. He had told Rei that he didn't
consider the two to be his family, but now, as he thought back to the
party, he realized that Misato, Asuka, and even Rei, might be the only
family he would ever have.
>>>Makoto: So his family member just slipped him the tounge?
>>>Ritsuko: Yes, if he considers them family.
>>>Makoto: Shinji needs to date.
>>>Hikari: Yes, outside the family.
The thought made him sigh.
The door buzzed as someone rang the bell. Shinji glanced at the
clock, and wondered who it might be.
>>>Asuka: Shit, like we can't already tell.
>>>Misato: We know but its still fun to watch..to bad Shinji-kuns out.
He stood up and went to answer the door.
-*-
Rei walked slowly back to the door of Shinji's apartment. In the
shadows she had waited until the others left, watching them disappear
into the night.
>>>Ritsuko: She's standing under the light, not a good place to hid.
>>>Maya: Maybe we're just ignoring her.
Then she had returned to the apartment. She rested her
head against the apartment door and breathed slowly, a faint blush
spreading across her cheeks.
>>>Kaji: I really didn't think it was possible.
>>>Rei: I enjoy movies with this premise.
>>>Techies: What has been happening!
In her mind's eye, images flashed.
Rei, kissing Shinji.
-Why?-
>>>Rei: Because it is enjoyable.
>>>Asuka: To piss me off.
>>>Misato: Can't it be both?
Asuka, staring down at Rei.
*The Second Child.*
Rei, on a stretcher in front of Eva-01.
*You are expendable.*
>>>Ritsuko: Even the commander knows how to celebrate the season.
>>>Maya: Expendable?
>>>Ritsuko: yeah, usually just says living dead girl.
A woman, kneeling over Rei, her hands on Rei's throat.
*You can be replaced.*
>>>Rei: Psyco hose beast.
>>>Misato: That hair color looks familiar.
>>>ritsuko: WHY SHOULD IT!
Blurred bodies, floating in yellow fluid.
-Can I die?-
Students at the school, laughing.
-If I cannot die, can I live?-
>>>Asuka: Well if you're not dead your alive so did you even need to ask that
>>> question.
>>>Rei: Yes.
>>>Asuka: I am tired of spoon feeding you lifes answers!
Shinji, staring at Rei as she leaves.
-If I cannot live, can I love?-
Commander Ikari, smiling at Rei.
-If I cannot love, can I be loved?-
>>>Shigeru: Is the commander sick in the head or something.
>>>Makoto: Why is Rei thinking of the commander?
>>>Rei: I...she is confused.
Dr. Akagi, standing behind Commander Ikari.
-What is love?-
>>>Kaji: A surplus of chemicals in the brain.
>>>Asuka/Hikari: You have no soul do you?
>>>Rei: What?
A blurred woman, holding her child.
Misato, crying into Shinji's empty plugsuit.
Hikari, handing a box lunch to Touji.
Rei, kissing Shinji.
-Is this love?-
>>>Hikari: All but Touji, creep never even said thank you, just ate and left!
>>>Asuka: I told you, didn't I tell you, but NOOOOO "He's a nice guy"
Rei, standing behind Touji on the school roof.
-What is love?-
*Love is when Two are One.*
*One Body.*
*One Mind.*
*One Soul.*
>>>Makoto: So love is a big blender?
>>>Kaji: Yup, love soup.
Eva-00, standing in its berth.
-Do I love Eva?-
*You are One with Eva.*
Rei, kissing Shinji.
-I will be One with Shinji.-
>>>Ritsuko: This 'being one' business could get really sick.
>>>Techies: Do they really make movies like that!
*Yes.*
*We will be One with Shinji.*
Rei rang the buzzer on the apartment door and waited.
>>>Asuka: And waited and waited and waited...
-*-
When he opened the door, Shinji was surprised to see Rei standing
at the rail, looking at him. Rei's eyes seemed to be glowing in the dim
half-light coming from inside the apartment.
>>>Ritsuko: Not that again, last time that happend the commander wanted
>>> to use her as the light source for the Geo-front.
>>>Shigeru: She can be so creepy.
>>>Rei: Watch your tounge.
>>>Misato: 'Maybe its good Shinji's past out..'
Her eyes locked with his, and Shinji could not look away.
"Ahhh . . . "
>>>Ritsuko: You will be assimilated, you have no choice.
>>>Misato: That part comes later.
Shinji swallowed. He could feel his hands trembling. Rei's stare
held his eyes.
"Oh, ummm . . . " Shinji could feel chills running up his spine
from Rei's gaze. "C-come in . . . "
Rei held Shinji's eyes for several long seconds. Then she walked
past Shinji into the apartment.
>>>Hikari: Why do you do that?
>>>Rei: It gives me a sense of impowerment.
>>>Shinji awake again: You have pretty eyes.
-*-
Rei stood in front of the tree, watching the blinking lights. She
could hear Shinji in the kitchen. Soon he reappeared, carrying two cups
of steaming tea. He handed one to Rei, then sat on the couch.
>>>Ritsuko: Need the caffiene for something?
>>>Misato: Going to be a 'long' night?
>>>Shinji: Whats happend...the movies almost over 'what the hell did I drink'
Rei sipped her tea. "It's good."
"Thanks. I've gotten a lot of practice in the kitchen recently.
Misato and Asuka don't cook much."
>>>Shinji: More like not at all.
>>>Misato/Asuka: I can make instant.
Shinji looked at Rei, who was still
staring at the tree. He placed his cup back on the saucer and held it in
his lap. He watched the steam rise from the tea.
>>>Shigeru: Another lull in the story?
>>>Maya: Its sweat.
Rei looked out the window.
>>>Asuka: AHAHAHAHAHAHAHA looking out the window
>>>Rei: But I haven't had much chance to.
In the crisp winter sky she could just
make out the sparkle of stars over the glow from the city.
>>>Ritsuko: And if we had seasons that would mean something.
"Ummm, what did you want?" Shinji asked.
Rei still stared intently out the window. "What am I?"
>>>Asuka: A doll.
>>>Misato: 1st child.
>>>Ritsuko: Don't ask me.
>>>Techies: An albino girl.
>>>Shinji/Rei: a person.
Shinji watched Rei quietly. Her voice was calm and impenetrable,
as always. "What do you mean?"
"What am I, to *you*, Shinji Ikari?"
>>>Hikari: Going staight for the throat.
>>>Rei: Why waste time.
Shinji was getting worried about what Rei's question. It seemed
like the conversation was sure to result in his embarrassment. "You're a
friend, Rei."
"A friend?" There was still no change in Rei's voice.
>>>Asuka: And she's going to need to be told what a friend is I bet.
"Y-yes."
Rei turned and looked at Shinji, meeting his eyes with hers. "What
is friendship?"
>>>Kaji: Asuka nailed that one.
>>>Shinji: Thats a hard question to answer.
Now Shinji was unnerved. "What do you mean 'what is friendship'?"
Rei's gaze continued to bore into Shinji. He thought that he had
never seen Rei look so... hungry?
>>>Misato: Hungry for what we might ask 'nugdes Rei's back.'
>>>Rei blushing lightly: I will not answer that.
>>>Maya: OH my.
>>>Ritsuko: Remember you're a vegitarian, you can't kill, cook, and eat him.
Rei spoke, in her usual voice, but did not meet Shinji's eyes.
"Can friendship be... love?"
Shinji stared at Rei. He was worried about this conversation. He
didn't think his father would approve of this.
>>>Shinji: No, that would involve me being happy so he'd hate the idea.
>>>Kaji: 'Sweat ignorence...well at least he 'is' happy'
Shinji stood and
nervously wiped his hands on his pants. "I'm sorry, I don't
understand..."
Rei walked forward until she stood in front of Shinji.
"Love is..."
>>>Hikari: This is touching.
>>>Asuka: I don't like being touched their.
She wrapped her arms around his neck.
"One Body..."
She rested her head on his shoulder. She could feel Shinji
tremble.
>>>Shinji: I guess I'm just their for decoration, I'm not doing or saying anything.
"One Mind..."
Rei smiled her small smile, and whispered into his ear.
"One Soul..."
>>>Rei: I did that.
>>>Makoto: That you did, and has anybody seen her smile?
>>>All: Now we have.
Shinji could not stop trembling. He could feel Rei's body pressed
against his. He slowly lifted his arms and placed them around Rei's
waist. She squeezed him tightly as she softly spoke.
>>>Asuka: What the hell is that!
>>>Rei: He acted.
>>>Maya: Shinji-kun does know how to make a good scene.
"We will be One, Shinji."
Rei lifted her head and gazed deeply into his eyes. Shinji was
really worried now. "Ummm... Rei..."
Rei pulled Shinji's head down and kissed him deeply.
>>>Rei: Don't talk, you will only try to get away.
>>>Hikari: Afraid he'll not want the 'one' business?
>>>Shinji: I really need to stop drinking, what lead up to this?
Shinji was stiff at first, but gradually relaxed and began to
return Rei's kiss. After a long while, Rei broke off the kiss and took
Shinji's hand. He still trembled, but followed her willingly.
>>>Shigeru: She shoots she scores!
>>>Ritsuko: How long was that kiss?
>>>Asuka/Hikari: To long.
>>>Shinji: I think something very bad is going to happen.
>>>Rei: 'Mental note- still need to sound proof his room.'
-*-
Asuka silently slid her door shut and fumed. First Kaji chased
after Misato. Then 'Wonder Girl' actually kissed that idiot Shinji, and
now this.
>>>Asuka: Stupid paper thin walls.
>>>Misato: Its a good thing I'm to drunk to hear.
>>>Ritsuko: That would be an odd site.
>>>Makoto: Is it hot in here?
>>>Shigeru: Merry Christmass!
"Asuka, " she thought, "your life is crap."
-*-
When Misato dragged herself out of bed the next morning, she had a
terrible hangover. "Why did I let myself go off and drink like that last
night?"
>>>Shinji: You do that everynight.
Misato pulled a housecoat on, and stumbled into the hall. "A hot
bath and an ice cold beer are what I need,"
>>>Maya: You have a hangover..and you're going to drink a beer.
>>>Hikari: Her tolerance must be sky high by now.
>>>Misato: Unfortunaly, it takes about a case to feel anything.
she thought to herself.
She walked to the kitchen and pulled the refrigerator door open.
She could see that Shinji had already wrapped the party leftovers and
put them away. "Damn, I hate neat freaks,"
>>>Ritsuko: But still you have him clean everything.
>>>MIsato: He does it so well.
>>>Shinji: So I don't like messes.
>>>Kaji: I think you're in a big one now.
Misato thought to herself.
She took a beer and shuffled toward the bath, still only half-awake.
She saw Shinji coming out of the bath drying his hair. When he saw
Misato, he quickly slid the door shut behind him.
>>>Ritsuko: He's showering NOW!
>>>Rei and Shinji blush.
>>>Misato: Now thats a record.
"G-g-good morning," he stuttered.
Not in the mood to talk, Misato grunted and waited for him to move
out of her way. When he still stood frozen in place, she placed her free
hand on his shoulder and started pushing until she could get to the
door.
>>>Shinji: The wall must taste good.
>>>Asuka: I want a different present Shinji.
>>>Hikari/Rei: I want a present too.
>>>Kaji: Calm down you kids.
"Let that be a lesson to you Shinji," Misato said. "Never come
between me and my bath when I have a hangover." She turned and entered
the bath, shutting the door behind her, ignoring Shinji's wide eyes and
trembling body.
>>>Makoto wiping his nose.
>>>Kaji: No they won't show that.
>>>Misato: What are you two talking about?
>>>Makoto/Kaji: Nothing.
"Good morning, Major."
Misato screamed and spun around when she heard the disembodied
voice floating out of the steam. She saw a shape emerging from the mist.
>>>Asuka: Its like a horror movie : "The Seductriss of the Mist"
>>>Makoto: What do you think's been happening here?
>>>Maya/Shigeru: I have no clue.
The figure paused and looked at her intently as she pressed her back to
the tile wall.
"Are you feeling well?" the blurry figure asked in an emotionless
voice. Misato just nodded quickly. The figure watched for another few
seconds before exiting the bath.
>>>Kaji: And there goes the towel!
>>>Shinji: Misato-san what did I tell you about walking around like that.
>>>Shigeru/Makoto: SHE DOES THAT OFTEN?!?!?!
>>>Asuka/Rei: You never said anything about that.
>>>Shinji: Um...she stopped before Asuka moved in.
>>>Misato: I liked the feeling of freedom.
Misato slumped down against the wall and sipped her beer. She must
have had a *lot* more to drink last night than she thought. She could've
sworn that was Rei!
Half a beer later, as she relaxed in the steaming water of the
bath, Misato decided that she had just imagined the entire affair.
Rei wouldn't have stayed last night.
Would she?
>>>Asuka: NO!
>>>Hikari: I hope not.
>>>Rei: I did, and Shinji-kun enjoyed my visit didn't you.
>>>Shinji: um..you see..movie..and..
>>>Makoto: Not making us believe you.
-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-==-
Steve Pardue
spardue@zebra.net
(End MST)
Makoto: That was fun Katsuragi-san but I better get going.
Shigeru/Maya: Yeah, its late.
Misato: Sure, Hikari want a ride home?...hikari?
Shinji with hikari slumped against him: She's...already asleep.
Asuka: HOW COULD SHE!
Ritsuko: Sorry but we have an incident.
Rei: As long as it doesn't interfere with my x-mas night presnt 'looks at Shinji'
Ritsuko: Put your hormones in check: Shinji, Maya, Shigeru, Makoto you are all to
be put under quaranteen.
Accused: WHY!
Ritsuko pulls out the empty angel meat container: You have eaten my angel sample, you may
be contaminated we need to run checks.
Misato: WHAT why did you wait?
Kaji: Didn't want to ruin the party.
Asuka: You ruined everything else!
Ritsuko: To bad, men! 'clicks her finger and an group of men in bio-wear suits come in
and take the 4 to quaranteen'
Misato: How long will it last?
Kaji: Until we're sure their ok.
Asuka/Rei/hikari: But what about Shinji!
Ritsuko: Sorry no comminication is allowed, well I better go home to sleep.
Misato: No, you're going to the lab.
Ritsuko: This late?
Misato points at three...VERY pissed off girls.
Hikari: You will help him now.
Rei: Failure is not an option, and speed is of the essence.
Asuka: If he's not back in two days I start putting dishes of anti-freeze outside your
apartment
Kaji: Things are getting odd. well anyway MERRY X-MAS!
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Mst Author notes
and their was my x-mas special hoped you liked it and now for my x-mas list
I want Peace and stuff...new anime..few games and what you can do for me is
I WANT ALL READERS OF THIS MST TO REVIEW IT FOR ME PLEASE /\_/\
what follows is my doctrine on fanfiction, if you read it on my last
ds mst its the same, so don't read anyfuther
MERRY CHRISTMASS TO ALL and to other religiouns I wish you joy as well.
Hello to all readers and welcome to the Zentrodie Doctrine
As some of you may know I am a fanfic writer, and with that comes alot of pressure.
Being a fanfic writer has become a dangerous profession lately and some writers are dropping off.
What can be said about this? What can be done? and What is being done?
I'd like to address this issue, but let me get off a few ground rules for those who are still
reading.
1) This is my opinion. (I will discuss what that means)
2) This is not a flame on authors, styles, or others opinions.
3) As I deal primalily with Evangelion fanfiction, my examples will be odd for those not familiar
with the show, you may
feel free to swith the name shinji with tenchi, mamoru or any other leading male protagonist,
same with the famale lead roles.
With that done, allow me to begin in earnest.
Fanfics have come underfire by just about everybody lately, either by people who claim themselves
better than the writer,
don't like the work, or simply don't know how to give constructive critisism.
By writing fanfiction, the author is giving his/her opinion or desire for what the show could or
should have had in it.
As everybody has their own opinion, not everybody will agree with what the author suggests.
If a reader who favors a
Shinji-Rei pairing reads a fic about Shinji-Asuka they tend to flame the story based on their
own preferance. Nothing is
wrong with that opinion but to hate the story, even if written well, based on it is simply in
poor form.
I have read several fics in which the characters are portrayed very poorly, or OOC, and one
thing comes to my mind, how
did that happen? Maybe that was simply how the writer viewed the show? that is quite possible,
we as viewers have different
views as well. I try to bear with it or simply stop reading.
The use of AC or SI is something I myself frown upon, but again my opinion. I would think if an
additional character should
have been in the show the writers of it would have added them, as for SI, we all like the shows
we watch but its a bit much to
put are selves in it. But hey if you want to write a SI, and can do it well, without
OOC'ness or simply write a really good story,more power to you.
Now by now you may be asking "Who the hell are you to say anything about how I write, you SUCK
as a writer yourself!"
I must admit, as a original fic writer I am fairly bad, but as a MST writer I excel. And who
am I to say this? nobody, you
have the right, ne the privilage to believe or blow off any or all of what I have written here.
I have one humble request to ask
of you though, follow what I have next.
If you find yourself reading a fic you just don't like or simply hate don't flame pointlessly,
do the following.
1) In your review, say what you didn't like about it, calmly. Ex: you didn't use proper grammer
and your characterization was
flawed. Not, that never happen stop writting you suck!
2) Don't write a review for a fic that features a character pairing you dislike, if you must put
yourself into the shoes of one that
likes said pairing. Ex: I don't like Rei-Shinji pairings, but you could use a bit more work on
development and discription.
Not: Asuka-Shinji is the only real couple, Rei's his mom and thats just plain SICK!
3)If you can't think of anything positive about the fic or don't want to give a good review
(by good I don't mean saying its good,
I following the prior examples) stop reading, hit the back button and leave the fic be to those
who do like it.
It may be wishful thinking for people to follow said examples but hey, I'm just asking.
I may sound foolish to state such feelings
but it is my opinion. Give credit where credit is due and try not to simply say hateful things
for no reason. If you want those
poor writers to improve and possible write a fic you DO like, give them support not flames.
A hopeless romantic
Zentrodie
p.s.
I got the idea for this after reading several harsh reviews and some good ones, plus ppl said to
use
actual examples, but no, I will not point out one or two people that would make me a hipocrit.