What Price Freedom?

Amee Flynn Johanna Thorelli Jerelyn Parker
Lynda Tatad Lynda Tatad2 Miyaka Yuuki
Miyaka Yuuki2 Mary Jo Jeffers Tamra Farran
Amee Flynn: Wow! that was great! i loved it!! you know, i think i'll die laughing because i was wondering what it would be like if the High Ones stopped off on Earth and lost a couple of crewmembers, leaving them with the earth humans, what kind of jobs they'd have, and especially the period of time when many humans would be pregiduced against the elves. i can't wait till i hear some more of your work. thanks for gracing us with that. :)
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Johanna Thorelli: It's beautiful! I think it was so nice when Winnowill turned good, at last, and Rayek got peace. Will that ever happen? I really liked that story!
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Jerelyn Parker: *squeal* I just read "What Price Freedom". GOOD! Really good! You really caught me there at the end.
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Lynda Tatad: Great story!! You've got the feel of "Rogue's Curse" down pat! What will the outcome be? I'm on the edge of my seat!!
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Lynda Tatad2: YAY!!!!! Thunderous Applause!!!!! Bravo! Encore!! I love happy endings! Your story was well told, and with suspense. I was very happy with how everything turned out. I especially loved the part where Rayak is seeing his fellow elves after awakening and being surprised at how small everyone is! The humor towards the end had a vintage Pini feel :-). Thanks for sharing your story with us!
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Miyaka Yuuki: AAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRGGGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Get out the next part. NOW!!! I can't stand it!!! Rayek can't die!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ummm, sorry about that little outburst. Please write the next part soon. Please? Please?! PLEASE?!?!?!?!?!?!

*HG*
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Miyaka Yuuki 2: YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LIKE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Although I kept expecting something else to happen. Something to do with my story and spoilers. Ah well. Heeheehee. Arigato gozaimasu!!!! (Thank you very much!!!!) It was cool!
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Mary Jo Jeffers: I like reading your stories. They seem to flow nicely. And I don't have an adequate description other than they "feel" right to me. They're easy to read which makes them even easier to follow without realizing any time has passed. Like the above, I am also looking forward to hearing more from this Story. I'm babbling, probably, but I have trouble with "critique syntax" without sounding like a complete idiot. :-} "Uh, yeah. Liked story. Good. Cool, uh, words. And stuff. Liked. Want more."
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Tamra Farran: Wow. i'm scared. (please let rayek be alright!)
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