Annotated Bibliography

 



Beals, Timothy.  "Between Teachers and Computers:  Does Text Checking Software Really
     Improve Student Writing?"  English Journal  87.1 (Oct 98):  67-72.

          This article presents an analysis of the value of text checking software to teacher and to
     students.  The basic focus is whether it is worthwhile to use the text checking software
     or whether it is actually an annoying, ineffective tool.  The writer, Timothy Beals, sampled
     a number of text checking programs, and found that most of them were "more annoying than
     helpful, largely because they uncovered far more "errors" than there really were." (71)

          In order to help teachers and students decide whether text checking software is
     something they want to utilize, Beals makes three recommendations from his experience.
     First, he suggests that teachers compare the various programs which are available to  "be
     sure grammar and style checkers perform and accomplish what you want to achieve in a
     way  that is helpful and meaningful for you and your students." (71) Secondly, he suggests
     that teachers make sure they discuss their "reasons for using a grammar and style checker."
     (71)  He notes that it is important that students are made to be aware that it is "unrealistic
     to expect computer software" to be as effective or careful in locating or explaining problems.

Brent, Doug.  "Rhetorics of the Web:  Implications for Teachers of Literacy"  Online Essay.
     http://www.acs.ucalgary.ca/~dabrent/webliteracies/wayin.htm. (Accessed March 13, 1999).

          In this essay, Doug Brent asks the question of whether or not hypertext "is an
     effective medium for argument--what in the original sense of the term may be called
     "rhetoric"?  More specifically, what would be the effects both on readers and on writers
     if discursive argument migrated to a hypertext environment?" (1)  He examines the pros
     and cons of arguments being written in a hypertext format.  His main concerns focus on
     whether hypertext is "the right medium to foster the mental discipline and social inquiry"
     which has been essential to argumentative discourse for the past "three thousand years. (1)
     (Doug Brent also has a very useful home page which has other rhetoric based essay
      links:  http://www.acs.ucalgary.ca/~dabrent/mystuff.html)
 

Center for Applied Special Technology.  "The Role of Online Communications in Schools:
     A National Study"  http://www.cast.org/publications/stsstudy/.  (accessed March 15,
     1999):  1-9.

          This website offers the results of a study in which researchers determined that
     students writing a research project utilizing computers with online access will perform
     better than students writing a research project utilizing computers, but without online
     access.  The goals of the study were to "measure the effects of online use on student
     learning including information processing, communication, and presentation skills"  and
     also to "gain insights into what it takes to use online communications in school." (2)
     The study included "500 fourth and sixth graders in 28 elementary and middle school
     classes from 7 large urban districts across the United States..." (2)   The students
     completed the same assignment.  When the projects were evaluated, those created
     by students with online access received higher scores.  Through questionnaires and
     interviews, researchers found that teachers believed that "e-mail and message boards
     helped their students learn from other students, teachers, and the community at large." (6)
 
Graves, Donna.  "Using Telecomputing Technology to Make World Connections in the
     Writing Class."  English Journal 84.6 (Oct 95):  41-45.

          This article described how students in an 8th Grade English class were able to use
     the internet to correspond with penpals worldwide, utilize bulletin boards, and get
     responses to their creative writing.  The teacher, Donna Graves, found that utilizing
     internet resources tied into her curriculum by connecting to cooperative learning
     objectives (the students worked in teams while on the computers).  It also helped
     the students to gain insight into other cultures;  for example, during a period of unrest in
     Russia, her students were receiving daily e-mail messages from Russian students which
     helped to give Graves' students "a new appreciation of freedom." (44)  Graves made use
     an online conference called "WorldClassroom" which helps teachers to make connections
     with other classrooms worldwide, and she provided their phone number :  1-800-866-
     4452.

Harris, Judi.  "Educational Teleresearch:  A Means, Not An End"  Learning and Leading
     With Technology (Nov 98):  42-46.

          For teachers interested in using the internet in their classrooms for teleresearch,
     Judi Harris offers six purposes to consider.  She states that teleresearch is valuable
     to help students "proactive information seeking skills" (43) ; to help students find
     answers to their questions or just to learn more about a topic; to review "multiple
     perspectives" (44);  to "generate data needed to help explore a topic" (43);  to solve
     real-life problems;  and to publish their written "synthesized or critiqued informational
     overview for others to see (45).  She believes that the "most important trend in the
     evolution of online resources is the development of a simple way for learners to share
     information." (46)  She offers an online example of information which can be useful to
     teachers and students who are teleresearching:  Web66, and international school web
     site registry, web.66.coled.umn.edu/schools.html .

Inkspot.  An Resource for Writers, Teachers and Students.  http://www.inkspot.com/
     index.html. (Accessed March 10, 1999).

         This is a site where writers can go for information about writing, chat boards,
     publication information, and advice.  It has many links to areas which can be helpful
     for teachers of all grade levels and for adult writers, as well.  For teachers,  just scroll
     down until you see the area for "young writers" and click on it, and you will be connected
     to the special Inkspot area for dealing with students.  For adult writers, the information
     needed can be found on the homepage that appears when going to the web address.

K-12 Sources--Curriculum--Lesson Plans.  Internet Site.  Online:  http://www.execpc.
     com/~dboals/k-12.html.  (Date Accessed March 10, 1999).

          An awesome site with so much that a researcher could spend hours just sorting
     through it all.  There are links to museums, lesson plans, world wide pen pals (key
     pad pals?) , technology education sources, school websites, etc.  A couple of really
     interesting sites that can be accessed through this page are "My Virtual Reference
     Desk--Education and Teaching" (<http://www.refdesk.com/educate.html>)  A
     page of  useful reference links for students and teachers.  Also, Project Maker,
     http://edweb.sdsu.edu/EDFIRST/ProjectMaker.html.  A source that gives useful
     suggestions for using the internet in a writing classroom.
 

Lyman, Huntington.  "The Promise and Problems of English Online:  A Primer for High
     School Teachers." English Journal 87.1  (Oct 98):  56-62.

          This article explores the benefits of using the internet to teach and also the possible
     problems.  The author, Huntington Lyman, states that, "It is essential for all teachers
     to recognize both the many instructional possibilities of the internet as well as the very
     real dangers." (56)  He offers benefits such as practice using the computer, learning
     about other cultures, developing a better understanding of how to write for varied
     audiences, student publishing and the wealth of online reference materials. In addition,
     he discusses the possible problems, such as inappropriate materials being accessed by
     students (for this scenario, he points out that students can quickly click to a different page
     if they hear a teacher coming) ,  distractions, overwhelming amounts of information to sort
     through, and the expense.  He also offers suggestions for teachers trying to incorporate
     the internet into their classrooms, including giving students contracts to make them aware
     of "expectations and consequences" (61) regarding online use.  He believes that it is
     important for teachers to use the internet in the classroom, and states that "the flaws and
     dangers of the internet are the flaws and dangers inherent in living in a country in which
     access to information and freedom of speech are available to all."  (61)

Lyman, Huntington.  Homepage of Huntington Lyman.  http://www.people.virginia.edu/~hl5s/
     (Accessed March 15, 1999)

          On this homepage, Huntington Lyman offers information about how teachers can best
    use the internet, as well as links to various writings about education.  He offers an
    overview for researchers of what qualitative research is and what quantitative research is.
    There are links to numerous teacher resources as well.  (The  above article from English
    Journal is also available online through this site.)

McGlinn, Marguerite.  "Moving and Grooving on the Internet Highway:  One Teacher's
     Experience With the Internet" English Journal (October 1995):  45-57.

          This article documents the experiences of a literature and writing teacher at an all-girls
     secondary school who designed a research project in which all of the research would be
     done just using the internet.   The girls were assigned to work in groups which the teacher
     had carefully constructed blending computer literate girls with computer phobic girls.
     The original plan was to do the research during class and study periods, but everyone
     soon found that using the internet was time consuming.  The girls began meeting outside
     of school time to do the research.  One conclusion that McGlinn made was that using
     the internet as a research tool in a traditional classroom time period of 45 minutes is
     unrealistic and frustrating.  The benefit she noted was that the girls became very
     comfortable with using the internet.
 

Mellon, Constance A.  "Digital Storytelling:  Effective Learning Through the Internet"
     Educational Technology   39.2 (March-April 1999):  45-51.

           Constance Mellon is a teacher who was originally resistant to the idea of using
     the internet in her storytelling classes.  She saw storytelling as an oral form, and did
     not believe the internet would be a useful tool to her.  Then, one semester, she had
     an especially large class, and decided to try "Digital Storytelling" for students who would
     be willing to take part.  Digital storytelling is an online format in which the students
     write personal stories in response to prompts.  She was happy to find that her students
     wrote more personal and heartfelt stories online than they told orally.  When she
     questioned her students as to how they felt about the process, she received positive
     feedback.  They all said they enjoyed it, they liked being able to edit what they said, they
     liked being able to avoid standing in front of others to tell their stories, and they enjoyed
     the convenience of being able to write and respond whenever they wanted to do so.  One
     student commented that she felt that she was part of "a storytelling family" and Mellon
     noted that she felt a greater sense of community with these students than those she met with
     face to face.  The URL of this storytelling class is available at http://soe.eastnet.ecu.edu/
     lset/mellon/dst/default.htm.  (I accessed it 3-17-99, but the stories would not come on
     screen.  However, there is other interesting information there about storytelling online.)

Moran, Charles.  "From a High Tech to a Low Tech Classroom:  You Can't Go Home
     Again."  Computers and Composition 15.1 (May 1998) 1-11.

          In this article, Charles Moran describes a difficult transition from a classroom in
     which he is able to teach using computer technology to a traditional classroom
     in which he has to make face-to-face contact with students.   He was surprised by
     his own inability to adjust to the change and his own resistance.  He resented having
     to make copies.  He felt uncomfortable having to look at the students face-to-face,
     believing that they expected him to keep them entertained, and as a result he lectured
     much more than he had in a computer classroom.  He lamented the fact that his teaching
     style became less student centered and more teacher centered.  He missed the space
     of a computer lab, and he felt confined in a traditional classroom.  As far as writing was
     concerned, he missed corresponding with the students on the computer.  He hated the
     fact that they took their rough drafts with them when they left class, and he never saw
     them again until they were a finished piece.  He missed the mid-stage of revision.  Moran
     felt that "in a computer classroom, community just seems to happen..." (7) ;whereas, in
     a traditional classroom a teacher must work to develop it.  He learned a lot through this
     experience, and concluded that educators must recognize that "moving from a traditional
     classroom to a computer classroom (or back) is" a substantial change. (7)

Mullen, Nina and Joe Lambert.  "Center For Digital Storytelling"  Online.
     <http://storycenter.org/desc.html> (Accessed March 18, 1999).

          One of the most exciting uses of the internet that I learned about through my
     research was digital storytelling.  Instead of telling a story orally, participants tell
     their stories digitally in an online forum.  It is something that can be used by
     educators at all grade levels to help students tell personal stories and become more
     comfortable with online communication.  While there are other digital storytelling sources,
     I think this site is especially useful because it has a "user-friendly" guide that tells
     how to get started in digital storytelling.  It has numerous links to other sites.  It also
     explains the basics of what digital storytelling is for those who happen to want more
     information.  Storytelling on the internet is a new way to pass along cultural and personal
     stories, and hopefully connect to story enthusiasts around the world.

Noden, Harry.  "A Journey Through Cyberspace:  Reading and Writing in a Virtual School."
     English Journal (October 1995): 19-26.

          Of all of the articles I have on this list, this one is a "must" read.  The author, Harry
     Noden, was so enthused about his students' experiences online, that the reader cannot
     help but become enthused as well.  Noden teaches 8th Grade Language Arts, and he
     wanted to find ways to share his students' writing with other students online.  He began
     sending out e-mail randomly, hoping to find schools overseas that would be interested.
     He was overwhelmed when he began getting responses from Japan, Antarctica, Brazil
     and New Zealand, just to name a few.  What began as a way to share student writing,
     developed into a way to share experiences and cultures.  He and his students became so
     involved and excited by the e-mail they were exchanging around the world that they
     began giving up their free-time and lunch hours to send and read e-mail.  To convince
     the principal of the value of having internet access, Noden asked him if he could think
     of a way to get students so excited about reading and writing that they would stand in
     line.  When the principal laughed at that idea, Noden showed him the line of students
     patiently waiting for a chance to get online. (26)  Noden refers to online writing as
     "Atwell in Cyberspace" (referring to writing workshop advocate Nancie Atwell) and he
      concludes that it is a "virtual school" in which everyone is connected in a multicultural
      mix 24 hours a day, with no walls to separate anyone.  (26)  This article has an excellent
      bibliography, too, which could be an aid to researchers seeking additional sources.

Owen, Trevor.  "Poems That Change the World:  Canada's Wired Writers"  English
     Journal (October 1995) :  48-51.

          In Canada, there is a program called WIER (Writers in Electronic Residence) which
     links students with professional writers online.  The students post poems, prose, and
     responses to others on the internet, and professional writers respond to them. (48)
     The students benefit from being part of a community that links them with other students,
     their own teachers and teachers from other schools, and professional writers.  (50)
     They get the opportunity to see their writing taken seriously by adults other than their
     teachers, and they are able to see that their writing has an audience beyond the
     walls of the classroom. (49)

Reissman, Rose.  "Flights of Fancy:  Capturing Viewpoint with Technology" Learning And
     Leading With Technology.  (September 1998) : 23-31.

          Rose Reissman, an elementary teacher, has written this article to show educators
     how computer technology can help "young children to join the circle of  readers,
     writers, and illustrators before" they even begin to write.  (31)  She uses computer
     programs such as Microsoft's Kid Pix t give the children a chance to help create
     stories based on minor characters in storybooks she reads to them.  She will read
     a story, then ask the children to name all of the characters, especially those besides
     the main characters.  Then, using the computer, she has them illustrate what they
     see that character doing, what he or she looks like, and what his or her own story
     might be.  Then, using the computer generated colorful illustrations, she has
     her students tell the story of that minor character orally, while she transcribes their
     words.  While, technically the children aren't "writing", Reissman believes that this
     experience will motivate them to look forward to writing, and that it "promotes
     critical, reflective and empathetic reading" (24) while giving them a chance to experience
     "writing" through imagery.

Shoemake, Barbara R.  "Cyberspace Class:  Rewards and Punishments"  Internet
     (online) http://www.kidsource.com/kidsource/content3/cyberspace.2.html
      (Date Accessed, March 10, 1999) 1-6.

          Barbara Shoemake is a teacher who requires her college students to communicate
     with her via e-mail.  She also uses newsgroups.  In this article, she documents her
     experiences in teaching a course in communications using the internet.  She attempted
     to use a "MOO" environment, but it resulted "in a couple of wasted class periods" (3)
     so she instead used an IRC for class meetings.  This was successful, and the class met
     online until the midpoint of the semester when the students requested at least one
     face to face meeting each week because "they felt disconnected from their classmates
     in the virtual environment."  (3)  Shoemake examines both the positive aspects of meeting
     online and the negative aspects.  She concluded that using the internet helped her more
     quiet students open up and it helped all of the students learn more about online
     communication. (4)  This site is linked to a much larger site which is also quite useful,
     called Kidsource:  (<http://www.kidsource.com/>).

Teaching With Electronic Technology.  Internet (online):  <http://www.wam.umd.edu/
     ~mlhall/teaching.html> (Accessed March 18, 1999)

          This is a large website which has numerous sources that can be valuable to
     educators of all subject areas and grade levels.  For English teachers, there are
     links to Greek mythology, folktale sources, slave narratives, on-line writing labs, and
     a virtual congress.  One source that can be linked through this site that I have found
     especially useful is the Purdue On-line Writing Lab: <http://owl.english.purdue.edu/>.
     This source has additional links which are helpful for teaching with computers.

Traubitz, Nancy.  "A Semester of Action Research:  Reinventing My English Teaching
     Through Technology"  English Journal (October 1998):  73-77.

          In this article, Nancy Traubitz explains how attempting to incorporate computer
     use in her English courses for average students helped her to become a better teacher.
     She had been frustrated when she realized that students in advanced classes had
     better access to computers, so she set out to arrange equal computer experiences
     for her students.  As a result, she met with hostility from many of her colleagues and she
     struggled with numerous problems (including passing a virus along to the school network
     from a student's disk that had traveled around (76) and causing the school's network
     to crash).  She found at the end of the year, though, that despite the problems, the
     students had become more interested in their work, attendance had improved, and
     students felt more confident using computers.

Wilhelm, Jeffrey.  "Creating the Missing Links:  Student Designed Learning on Hypermedia"
     English Journal  (October 1998):  34-40.

          The biggest focus of this essay was on how students can have fun while learning
     with hypermedia and how they can improve their writing.  Jeffrey Wilhelm followed
     the experiences of three students and tried to find ways to connect learning on the
     computer to their "real concerns and needs." (34)  Through using hypercards, graphics,
     scanning photos, creating pictures, recording sound and creating links, his students learned
     to be more active in class, and to see themselves as authors and readers.  Wilhelm was
     discouraged, however, because sometimes he would have trouble scheduling time in
     the computer lab for his students and sometimes the computers would malfunction, and
     remain unusable for days, negatively impacting student motivation.  (36-37)