Pat Shanahan - 07/17/00 22:55:42
My Email:patshanahan@eircom.net

Comments:
I picked up your name while searching for Robert Pirsing's other books. Have you read ZEN BONE ZEN FLESH

Mark Budman - 05/15/00 18:54:48
My URL:http://www.oocities.org/Athens/Delphi/3220/
Your interests?: writing
Any remark?: Zoeland

Comments:
Hi, Avital. Nice page and pics. Is "The Devil In Moscow" by Michail Bulgakov "Master & Margarita"?

Martin Ramos - 05/14/00 23:30:12
My Email:becquer41@hotmail.com
Favorite story?: The Metamorphosis
Your favorite books?: Light in August, Dragons in Eden, The short stories of Flannery O'Connor
Your favorite music?: Beatles, 60's rock, classical
Your favorite movies?: A Fistful of Dollars, Goldfinger
Your interests?: Art, writing, reading, Internet
Any remark?: Puerto Rico, Chicago, IL

Comments:
Interesting that you should like Bach. His music is used in a technique of second language instruction developed by Georgi Lozanov, a Bulgarian psychotherapist. It's called Suggestopedia and has been developed in Eastern Europe with some success.

jai - 05/12/00 08:32:24
My Email:jai@hexworthy.freeserve.co.uk
Favorite story?: all of them!
Your favorite books?: The Affirmation Christiopher priest, Alexandria Quartet, Durrell, Love in the time of Cholera,
Your favorite music?: Beethoven, Stravinsky, Prokofiev, PJ Harvey
Your favorite movies?: teh Draughtsman's Contract
Your interests?: writing, reading, movies, music, gardening. horseriding, walking, travelling
Any remark?: Cornwall

Comments:
hi Avital! lovely your photos. Your husband is indeed talented. great site!

Erica Hoffer - 04/01/00 20:11:17
My Email:erica@tx.technion.ac.il
Your favorite books?: Last:Towards the end of time by J. Updike
Your favorite music?: Last:Cesaria Evora
Your favorite movies?: W. Allen of course
Your interests?: Literature, art, travel, etc
Any remark?: Israel

Comments:
I liked your page, and when I'll have time I'll comment on your literary tastes, most of which I have read as well What are you doing right now and where?

miriam hammel - 12/27/99 15:45:31
My URL:http://www.oocities.org/hammel_m
My Email:hammely@netvision.net.il
Favorite story?: all of them

Comments:
darling, now i am on the web too thanks to my dearly beloved GADY. as u see he is typing for me a wonderful millenium to all of u and a warm hug from all of us

Jim - 12/25/99 22:38:10
My URL:Under re-construction
My Email:konomos@jerusalemail.com
Favorite story?: Of yours? The "Internet Girl" story
Your favorite books?: The Bible
Your favorite music?: Celtic, Greek, Folk, some Classical and modern
Your favorite movies?: Soylent Green was the best of all time. I like epics.
Your interests?: Computers - Israel - the environment
Any remark?: Tempe, Arizona

Comments:
I was randomly surfing through Israeli sites on the Geocities engine, when I found your page. Very nice! Shalom, Jim

Steve Armstrong - 09/28/99 00:42:59
My URL:http://www.angelfire.com/nc/labspa/
My Email:yobtya@yahoo.com

Comments:
My Dear long lost friend,   I hope things have been going well for you.  As you may have seen on the world news, our area was hit by a hurricane and torrential rain.  My house (see the web site) made it through with minor damage. Take care and caio, Steve

Steven Mather - 08/10/99 14:32:56
My URL:http://www.oocities.org/Paris/LeftBank/1835
My Email:sdmather@iname.com
Favorite story?: Everything you write, of course
Your favorite books?: Romantic Faction
Your favorite music?: Wildy eclectic
Your favorite movies?: Period dramas
Your interests?: Film, music, literature
Any remark?: Adelaide, Australia

Comments:
Its wonderful to visit again Avital and I am delighted that you are still attracting so many adoring friends. I hope you will meet me on our bridge again some day - I have a balloon for you :)

gady - 07/07/99 08:52:09
My Email:ein li
Favorite story?: my life
Your favorite books?: the holy bible
Your favorite music?: margalit zanani
Your favorite movies?: bambi
Your interests?: bibi netanyahoo
Any remark?: behind th corner

Comments:
as agreed i found u in yahoo tell noa i still love her inform tom i do miss him i hope the economica helped i shaved power to the people

Martin - 05/21/99 23:50:40
My URL:http://www.anzwers.net/free/money
My Email:battaliou@usa.net

Comments:
Hey! Want to earn some money with your webpage?

Vance White - 05/04/99 19:20:35
My Email:vancew@bellsouth.net
Favorite story?: Long...Live
Your favorite books?: Tom Clancy's
Your favorite music?: Country
Your favorite movies?: Action
Your interests?: Travel & Writing
Any remark?: Fayetteville, Georgia, USA

Comments:
You have a great web page. I like your writing very much. I have not read many stories from a female prospective so this was a bit of an educational process as well as enjoyable reading. Have you written a novel yet? If you have only been writing in English, what language did yo previously write in? You English is better than mine.

Shawn Merwin - 04/22/99 15:36:25
My Email:merwin@netsync.net
Any remark?: Fredonia NY USA

Comments:
Sorry I couldn't stay long to read. Lovely site for a lovely person!

Jack Ryan - 04/03/99 17:52:18
My Email:code4@goodnet.com
Favorite story?: Still deciding that
Your favorite books?: Stephen Hunter
Your favorite music?: Jazz/Big Band
Your favorite movies?: Millers Crossing
Your interests?: Shooting sports
Any remark?: Chicago now Phoenix

Comments:
See you in chat lovely lady

- 03/12/99 17:48:26

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debbie ice - 03/12/99 17:43:39
My Email:tjmd45@aol.com
Favorite story?: tie-The Frame/Somewhere Station
Your favorite books?: Sound and the Fury
Your favorite music?: depends on mood-like it all/ blues, Bach (probably favorite), even like sheryl crow
Your favorite movies?: shindlers list
Any remark?: USA-Northeast but originaly from South

Comments:


Vanessa Dodge - 03/02/99 14:19:06
My Email:vdodge@emory.edu
Favorite story?: Favorite story by Avital - Berries and Breezes!
Your favorite books?: The Unbearable Lightness of Being by Milan Kundera, Lolita by Vlad Nabokov, Lord of the Rings by JRR Tolkien, many more...
Your favorite music?: An eclectic mix - I like folk music from round the world, classical, opera, love to dance to cheezy 80's pop tunes.
Your favorite movies?: Star Trek II : The Wrath of Khan, The Sacrifice, Summer Madness - anything which can make me laugh hard.
Your interests?: Writing, theatre (performing and directing), spinning, astronomy, animal behavior (particularly primates), food!
Any remark?: St. Louis, Portland, Vancouver, London, Boulder, Atlanta...wherever I have a roof over my head and something to eat!

Comments:
I like your site, Avital. You look strikingly like an old friend of mine (her name is Dylan Yates - you aren't any relation, by any chance, are you?)

Kevin Dolgin - 02/20/99 10:42:27
My URL:http://As if I were smart enough to make one
My Email:kdolgin@club-internet.fr
Favorite story?: My favorite story of yours, Avital, is 'The Old Cinema'. If I take the rest of humanity into account...hmm...Maybe 'For Esmé With Love and S ualor', by Salinger.
Your favorite books?: Oh my. This is an impossible question. It's like asking 'what's your favorite time to have sex?' Let's see, a few that are in your list are in mine as well, and we must exclude Shakespeare because that goes without saying. There's everything by Nabokov, of course, and everything by Primo Levi, and then there's Twain, and Dumas for pure swashbuckling and...I really do have to stop.
Your favorite music?: This is just as bad as the previous question. I'll say this - my two favorite composers of music from this century may be Prokofiev and Jimmy Page.
Your favorite movies?: Will this get easier? Umm, most things by Jean Renoir, Everything by the Marx Brothers, then there's FFC, of course (you never know who's whatching...)
Your interests?: Sex, aviation, physics, writing, sex, guitar, piano, flute, drums, sex, bass, tickleasaurus (game invented by my sons), reading great vast quantities, and sex.
Any remark?: New York - then Dijon - then New York - then Paris. Other places in between

Comments:
I've only just discovered this site, Avital! Has it always been here? (HAW HAW). OK, I'm not that computer-friendly. How wonderful, I almost feel like we've sat down and had tea together in your living room, something which I would love to be able to d . I look forward to reading some of the stories here that I haven't read yet. PS When I opened the site my computer nearly rang with joy "A whole site by Avital!" it sung.

Chuck Ivie - 02/20/99 00:36:08
My URL:http://www.oocities.org/CapeCanaveral/Hangar/5945/
My Email:civie@gte.net
Favorite story?: The Last Physicist by Kevin Dolgen
Your favorite books?: Anything by A.C Clark or Issac Asimov
Your favorite music?: Mozart, Bethoven, and most modern Jazz
Your favorite movies?: 2001, Being There, Tootsie, The Day the Earth Stood Still
Your interests?: Writing, reading (good stuff), Astronomy, Physics
Any remark?: Apple Valley Ca

Comments:
I Avital Nice to see your website. It gives me access to more of your stories.

J. Michael Kearney - 01/27/99 06:52:21
My Email:jk2454@erols.com
Favorite story?: Of yours? "The Old Cinema" - Very well crafted.
Your favorite books?: "Zen & The Art of Motorcycle Maintenance" (Pirsig) "Job: A Comedy of Justice" (Heinlein) "Memories, Dreams & Reflections (Jaffe/Jung) "Cold Mountain" (Frazier) "Talks With A Devil" (Ouspensky) anything by Robert Anton Wilson Your favorite music?: Alternative (Everclear,Bush,Sponge) Bing Crosby, Dean Martin, Vanessa Williams, some classical & some techno
Your favorite movies?: "Blade Runner" "Repo Man" "The Man Who Would Be King" "The Ruling Class" "Forrest Gump" "The Right Stuff" "The Searchers" & "They Died With Their Boots On"
Your interests?: Writing, Running (slower and slower), Chess, Reading, Physical Conditioning, basketball, swimming
Any remark?: born, Staten Island, NY (the 5th boro), now Inwood section of Manhattan & Sparta (northwest NJ)

Comments:
Great Web site Avital...sorry I didn't sign in earlier, but I've put this on my "favorites" list. Great job Avital!

gady - 01/23/99 21:04:29

Comments:
well some 60 days ago i was in hospital for bypasses operation which is by now over and i accept e mail again in bugeilat@netvision.net.il my old lady expects to hear fro u i love u 2 bi bi

Jeff Jackson - 01/12/99 18:59:30
My Email:jacksonjlj@yahoo.com
Any remark?: Syracuse, NY

Comments:
Cool site. Makes me want to do my own now.

Terry Bain - 12/28/98 22:27:28
My URL:http://members.aol.com/tbain
My Email:TerryBain@bigfoot.com
Favorite story?: "Neighbors" and "What We Talk About When We Talk About Love" by Raymond Carver; "Hills Like White Elephants" by Hemingway; "Good Country People" by Flannery O'Conner
Your favorite books?: The Unbearable Lightness of Being by Kundera; Winnie the Pooh by Milne
Your favorite music?: Van Morrison; k.d. lang; J.S. Bach; Gershwin; Cole Porter; Sarah Vauhn; Ray Charles
Your favorite movies?: Five Easy Pieces; Miller's Crossing; Chinatown; Woody Allen movies, especially Manhattan
Your interests?: Writing and books
Any remark?: Spokane, Wa, USA

Comments:
I finally got around to visiting. I do enjoy your imagery and wish you a slice of orange once a day. If not orage, then strawberry.

Felicia - 12/23/98 21:56:34
My URL:http://www.oocities.org/SoHo/Atrium/1647/
Favorite story?: anthing by Avital
Any remark?: Tulsa, OK

Comments:
Wonderful page, Avital. Sorry I haven't left a message sooner. Thanks for the New Year's card. Best of the New Year to you, too. May it be a great year for both of us -- and we'll both be published. Hugs, felicia

Hani - 12/22/98 17:14:29
My Email:hanime@netscape.net
Favorite story?: if I must...Somewhere Station, Jane's Cats and Major Chaos
Your favorite books?: i forgot...haven't been reading lately
Your favorite music?: flamenco
Your favorite movies?: most of hitchcock and Kurosawa, many of Robert de Niro, two of Michael Keaton (Beetle Juice and Clean and Sober),
Your interests?: photography, sex and cooking...all at the same time.
Any remark?: i wish i know...

Comments:
love your imagination and sense of humor...the stories are deep and passionate...intense and clear images in very few words...the beauty and warmth of your personality trickles into your writings...i'm a lot more complete because i have you as a friend... ish you many more years and many more stories (and, god willing, a few books :)

Oren Shafir - 11/17/98 10:53:14
My URL:http://www.oocities.org/SoHo/Coffeehouse/4658/snickersnack1.html
My Email:rhymothologist@mailexcite.com
Favorite story?: My Girlfriend's Boyfriend
Your favorite books?: Woman Warrior, Alice in Wonderland
Your favorite music?: Jethro Tull, Beatles, Lenny Kravitz, and lots more
Your favorite movies?: Dersu Uzula, Harold and Maude, Casablanca, and lots more
Your interests?: writing, soccer, movies
Any remark?: American-Israeli living in Denmark

Comments:
We Israelis have a way of getting around, don't we? I like your stories: personal and intense

Jenny Ruth Yasi - 11/14/98 15:40:13
My URL:http://home.maine.rr.com/singingrocks
My Email:singing@maine.rr.com
Favorite story?: wow. a tough one. Um. Jane Smiley's novella...what was it called?
Your favorite books?: oh no! How in the world?! Um...Collected Stories of William Faulkner. Madame Bovary. Burmese Days. Dosteyevsky.
Your favorite music?: Beatles
Your favorite movies?: arhhhggghhh. Don't make me. Its this French film called something like "Shampoo." Jacques Cocteau's "La Belle et La Bete." Um. They don't count. I can't decide.
Your interests?: singing, dancing, herbalism, motherhood/wifehood/community, gardening, Burma, Buddhism, (not neccessarily in this order) writing, reading, herbal medicine, beekeeping
Any remark?: an island of the coast of Maine, USA

Comments:
Hi Avital! On the Z site, I didn't know you were a woman, and so I was avoiding you because I was beginning to feel a bit harrassed by a little cadre there, trying to figure out how to get back on the topic of reality, and and and...so now I feel so fooli hly paranoid and pleased to have discovered a new potential friend and ally! HI!ALRIGHT! So I'll go and read one of yours ASAP. You look so much like my sister (well, I guess we are all sisters, right?) Peace, jenny

Mare Freed - 11/01/98 03:30:49
My Email:mare@unforgettable.com

Comments:
Avital, This is a great website! Wonderful stories, and I like the format a lot. Best wishes for writing... Mare Freed (from Zoetrope)

Yobtya - 10/15/98 23:22:48
My Email:you've still got it
Favorite story?: Major Chaos
Your interests?: food, languages, travel
Any remark?: Everywhere/nowhere

Comments:
Avi, Once again, dear, I've gone through your writings. I still feel the strongest about the Major. How can you not? He is me later in my life. Ciao guapa, Steve

ribber - 10/13/98 11:19:42
My URL:http://pages.whowhere.com/arts/ribber
My Email:ribber@mailcity.com
Favorite story?: major chaos
Your favorite books?: ada-nabokov, spring snow-mishima
Your favorite music?: xtc,tmbg,elvis costello
Your favorite movies?: pre code (1929-1933)
Your interests?: one track mind, im told
Any remark?: anni rules!!

Comments:
thanks for inviting me to this place, i will return to watch it grow! earth gets smaller when artists share their fruits. pq

Larry - 10/13/98 01:34:22
My Email:metafiction@hotmail.com

Comments:
Avital:

I read all your stories on your web page. At first, I was reading them, judging them individually on how they appealed to me, their implications and creativity, and for their appeal (perhaps) to a print market (though I admit being no expert i that feild). On approaching completion of the stories--I read them in order--I discovered that I was reading a necklace of stories. One worn and fingered by an woman who is intense, poetic, sensual, and, at times, wanten of emotional/creative gratifica ion. I found myself thinking not only as a critic of literature, but as a voyeur into a women's life. I have never trusted my judgements about people, even from their admissions, and especially never from their writing, so I will refrain from an attempt to explain you, and stick only to the impression your writing made on me.

Individually, I felt that there were only a few stories that could stand on their own as complete works: Bach Over Water, Somewhere Station, Major Chaos, Second Thoughts, and mayb Frame. The rest, I found to be eliptical and vague (I confess I only read those stories once. Vagueness can repel me.)

If I had to choose a favorite, it would be Somewhere Station, though the title still confuses me. I feel that it embodies what I f und to be the sense of fantasy, and dream-like adventure and impetuousness that the colection has. The glider in My Way could be the perfect symbol of the free and sensuos journey the stories provide as a whole. Even "You Gotta Do it" is a message for t ose afraid to live outside themselves, and focuses on the texuality of desire.

If I were to market this collection, and I think you should try it (I will search some feminist lit journals for you) I would make the corner story of the collection "Frame". The reason I say this is because something struck me about the possibility of a frame being the perfect metaphoric vehicle.

Consider a story as a view through a window; you see the picture/text the writer has created, and add to it your life experie ces, making it complete, a story. The pane of glass is unobtrusive, and does not effect your view. Suppose a bird shits on the glass--suddenly the writers creative vehicle is visible, and not only is the view important, but the process. (The bird shit i not important, only the recognition of process and its importance to the final product, like strokes on a painting). All this is held together by the frame--the life experiences of the reader, of the writer, who become co-creators, and who, as a team, f rm a constant. (ie--if a different person looks through the window, it becomes a different view/story).

Anthologized writers are so acutely aware of the implications of their work. Years of analysis could not explain completely the intent and implicati ns and inspiration of some of the world's greatest work (Ulysses comes to mind). Perhaps you are aware of the direction your writing has taken as a collection. I say this because I was not aware of the direction of mine until I stood back from it and an lized it (with the help of a freind). I really admire your style. It is poetic in its brevity, and captures very human emotions in an eliptical and sensuous fashion. I would persue a publisher. If you can afford to self-publish a booklet, a few hundre copies, perhaps that is an idea too. It is work worth deseminating.

Hope this helps.

Larry

Ilana - 10/12/98 20:09:51

Comments:
BEAUTIFUL :)

Michael - 10/11/98 04:44:40
My Email:you have it
Favorite story?: No favourites
Your favorite books?: Cheque
Your favorite music?: I sing in the shower
Your favorite movies?: Flying High
Your interests?: Many and varied
Any remark?: You said it so well.

Comments:
So many stories...don't stop writing...or I will have nothing to read. So many people on the net..it is a strain not to be anonymouse soemtimes.

Michelle - 09/29/98 14:15:34
My Email:Mvi@knowingbetter.com
Favorite story?: Somewhere station
Your favorite books?: Mann,Sartre,Vinovitch + 1000 others...
Your favorite music?: Classic,Jazz,Rock
Your favorite movies?: Too many to mention
Your interests?: Life
Any remark?: Wow!

Comments:
What a mixture of emotions and humor! It is simply excellent. Don`t ever stop...

ben dod - 09/23/98 11:47:00
My Email:its time u know
Your interests?: good looking boys

Comments:
long time we have not met so have a nice day and take care gady

Junebugg66 - 09/11/98 03:49:12
Favorite story?: 1st
Your favorite books?: Proust
Your favorite music?: Late Beethoven String Quartets and Piano Sonatas
Your favorite movies?: La Strada, Death in Venice
Your interests?: Movies, and playing chamber music
Any remark?: Do what you want to do. Do it as much as you want, however you want, whenever you want, and with whomever you want.

Comments:
Was fun chatting, enjoyed your thoughts and writing, and will make pizza for you anyday.

HAL_PLUS - 09/09/98 03:37:17
My Email:zaali@yahool.com
Favorite story?: Little Red Hood:)
Your favorite books?: By AnniChaos
Your favorite music?: By Avital
Your favorite movies?: By AnniChaos
Your interests?: AnniChaos
Any remark?: Love you:)

Comments:
You were so wonderful in chat, just indelible...I really like (love?) you. I wish all the luck in the world and to stay as feminine as you were today:)Take care sweetheart,for you just HAL:)

Walesca - 08/31/98 04:41:40
My URL:http://www.angelfire.com/ut/nickteresa
Favorite story?: The Frame, but I enjoyed them all
Your favorite books?: Anything by Sidney Sheldon
Your favorite music?: Loves most music
Your favorite movies?: It's an oldie...Funny Girl
Your interests?: Reading, playing piano/organ

Comments:
I'm here again Anni...hope this message takes...LOL.......I enjoyed your page and stories...((((((((((hugs))))))))))

Jack Alan Edgar - 08/23/98 04:15:06
My URL:http://unsung.websolut.com
My Email:bugbird@ulster.net
Favorite story?: The Open Window - SAKI
Your interests?: MUSIC MUSIC MUSIC

Comments:
GREAT SITE And GREAT STORIES!!!!

Nysredhead - 08/19/98 14:51:44
My URL:http://unsung.websolut.com
My Email:unsung@websolut,com
Favorite story?: i loved them all
Your favorite music?: Windham Hill collections
Your favorite movies?: Wuthering Heights
Your interests?: lots and various
Any remark?: keep up the good work Anni

Comments:


yingale - 08/18/98 13:03:31

Comments:
once again i had the pleasure of visiting you you give us endless pride and pleasure

Pierre - 08/15/98 13:47:32

Comments:
Hi me again---love your second page too--love the Bach story and like you in long hair better but that is a me thing-----Fount ZEN and Motorcycle interesting--but you spelled his name wrong--lol you have an awareness of nature and yourself that i envy and if i am not careful i may learn something from this page---sheeeshhh 8:()

Pierre - 08/13/98 15:04:50
My Email:frog92@erols.com
Favorite story?: all of them
Your favorite books?: Historical fiction
Your favorite music?: Like all kinds
Your favorite movies?: Action
Your interests?: law, hunting fishing motorcycles

Comments:
Very good love the stories and found them enlightening

AviatorKarl - 08/03/98 22:50:30
My Email:pilotkarl@earthlink.net
Favorite story?: A Thorn in the Desert
Your favorite books?: Aviation related
Your favorite music?: 80's and 90's
Your favorite movies?: When Harry met Sally, Forrest Gump
Your interests?: Flying, photography, reading, spending quiet time with special people
Any remark?: Outstanding

Comments:
That story reminds me of me. I am very much the type to lend a hand to a friend although I don't want anything in return. I am the type who seeks the shadows yet has longings for something more. Keep up the great work and see you in SSH. Karl

H.R.H GADY HAMMEL - 07/16/98 09:59:12
My Email:BUGEILAT@NETVISION.NET.IL
Favorite story?: NOA BAT 17
Your favorite books?: OHEL HDOD TOM
Your favorite music?: LEONARD COHEN
Your favorite movies?: HERCULES
Your interests?: MY SELF
Any remark?: I LOVE U 2

Comments:
ITS TIME I SEE BOTH MY NAMES GADY AND AVITAL IN A POSSITIVE CONNECTION. KISS YOUR CHILDREN ON MY BEHALF AND TELL THEM HOW NICE I AM SEE U SOME TIME MY LORDSHIP GADY & SONS

ribber23 - 07/15/98 17:30:39
My Email:ribber@mailcity.com
Favorite story?: the frame
Your favorite books?: nabokov
Your favorite music?: xtc
Your favorite movies?: old ones
Your interests?: everything
Any remark?: juxtaposition is everything

Comments:
nice site, was able to read the stuff easily, unlike others that i have encountered. i like the style, i, myself tend towards bitterness, but may have something to do with life. thanks for sharing!

marta prostak - 07/15/98 06:14:22
Favorite story?: My WAY
Your favorite books?: fiction
Your favorite music?: classical
Your favorite movies?: humour
Your interests?: General
Any remark?: I like your humour

Comments:
In my way i enjoyed last sentence... can tell by the new double seat. exellent suprise ending. in all your stories i enjoyed your metaphores and wit. keep on the good work.

MIRIAM HAMMEL - 07/14/98 13:49:36
Favorite story?: NOA AND TOM
Your favorite books?: AVITALS
Your favorite music?: CHILDREN VOICES
Your favorite movies?: YOUR VISITS
Your interests?: FAMILY
Any remark?: I LOVE YOU

Comments:
I LOVE YOU A LOT.KISSES MIRIAM NOA AND TOM I MISS YOU. BRING YOUR MOM AND DAD AT THE SOONEST. I HUG YOU.

TALTOS_2010 - 07/14/98 05:00:03
My URL:http://members.tripod.com/~TALTOS_2010/index.html
My Email:taltos@deathsdoor.com
Favorite story?: blues
Your favorite books?: dune
Your favorite music?: old stuff...lol
Your favorite movies?: scarface...J.F.K
Your interests?: raeding..beach bum..computers..
Any remark?: wonderful page!!!!

Comments:
damn Good!!!!!!

Pradeep - 07/09/98 18:45:25
My URL:http://members.theglobe.com/pradeeps
My Email:pradeeps@hotmail.com
Favorite story?: fountainhead
Your favorite books?: lust for life - Irving Stone
Your favorite music?: child in time - deep purple
Your favorite movies?: ghost
Your interests?: photography, travelling

Comments:
u seem to be a very interesting person! i read your impressions of India & followed the link to your page. good work. keep it up!

Phaedra - 07/03/98 00:29:18
My Email:phaedran@mpx.com.au
Favorite story?: Frame
Your favorite books?: Britannica
Your favorite music?: take my breath away and ode to joy
Your favorite movies?: pretty woman
Your interests?: reading, writing, skiing, dancing, chatting,
Any remark?: loved it all Anni and think your just wonderful

Comments:


Michael Tomlin - 06/20/98 19:28:07
My Email:Ryjlox@hotmail.com
Favorite story?: All of them
Your favorite books?: Anything Sci Fi
Your favorite music?: Anything
Your favorite movies?: Sci Fi, Action
Your interests?: I'll give anything a shot once.

Comments:
You are a very wonderful writer and I hope to see some of these published. I hope you have a wonderful life.

skully - 06/19/98 18:29:43
My Email:skully33487@yahoo.com
Favorite story?: aesops fables
Your favorite books?: fear and loathing in las vegas
Your favorite music?: early pink floyd
Your favorite movies?: west side story
Your interests?: acting
Any remark?: arg

Comments:
Annie, love your site! you are so deep! I'm glad to be one of your friends. see you in ssh.

Dominique (aka Upsydasy) - 06/14/98 16:07:26
My URL:http://come.to/upsydasy
My Email:aries@total.net

Comments:

Wow your site is truly remarkable. You write so well, I read every story then went back and read a few over again. How can one so young be so wise. I'd swear that you wrote about me here and there and I think I've met some of the others...indeed you ar very gifted :)

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Musical_mind - 06/14/98 05:11:32
My Email:Have to see my site :-)
Favorite story?: You Gotta Do It
Your favorite books?: The How To Book for Giraffes
Your favorite music?: jazz
Your favorite movies?: any that are well made
Your interests?: music

Comments:

I really enjoyed reading your stories. They show a lot of insight into the way we view everyday things. I think they may in fact show insight into yourself as well. Thank you for sharing your words and thoughts. MM :-) /FONT>

sky_sweetie - 06/13/98 13:45:12
My URL:http://members.tripod.com/~sky7/index.html
My Email:sky_7@hotmail.come
Favorite story?: My Way
Your favorite books?: V.C Andrews
Your favorite music?: brain adams and bon jovi
Your favorite movies?: get back to you on this one
Your interests?: reading....taking walks....and chat (of course)
Any remark?: yes

Comments:
cool page........i love the stories....yu should write a book......i will buy one

yobtya - 06/13/98 13:24:43
My Email:you've already got it

Comments:
Anni, Anni, Anni.... Dear I laughed and cried in your stories. Don pissed me off, Major Chaos had me in stitches. I'm sure I know his brother, Major Disaster. See you in the room later on, amiga.

Hy - 04/16/98 03:11:26
My Email:hy5@netcom.com
Favorite story?: Need to read them.
Your favorite books?: Need to read them.
Your favorite music?: Highwaymen (orignal group) and Beachboys.
Your favorite movies?: Apollo13. Pink Panthers
Your interests?: Aviation, computers, boating, folk music, cars, raising hell
Any remark?: Hi from Hy.

Comments:
Nice to visit your site.

Dan (freetel) - 04/02/98 00:36:20
My URL:http://oocities.com/TimesSquare/Arena/4168/
My Email:jjdc@sprint.ca
Favorite story?: Blues Woman
Your favorite music?: Old Rock and Roll
Your favorite movies?: Any sci-fi
Your interests?: Music,computers
Any remark?: They were all great stories

Comments:
I've never met anyone who could write quite like you. Please continue the great work,I think that you're great..

Tim.....:) - 03/28/98 04:12:52
My Email:tcadena@flash.net

Comments:
If we don't wear our masks....then who will want to see us? Thank you for letting me see in, but even more, thank you for openning my eyes. And for those others who are reading this, curious to see who else has been touched by the words.......i could ery possibly be the real Major Chaos....hahaha

David - 03/25/98 16:35:05
My Email:dsteelman@eosinc.com
Favorite story?: Jury is still out...
Your favorite books?: Blind Date...Jerzy Kozinski, Beach Music...Pat Conroy...The World According to Garp...John Irwin
Your favorite music?: Borasca...Ottmar Liebert....Diva...Annie Lenox...anything by Eric Clapton, Queen, or Joe Cocker
Your favorite movies?: Butch Cassidy...The Graduate...Romancing the Stone
Your interests?: Golf, Mexico, writing, Brazilian women

Comments:
Your stories are wonderful..... When you think of beauty, what image comes to mind???

pippi - 03/22/98 02:04:03
My URL:http://www.dlcwest.com/~pippi
My Email:pippi@dlcwest.com
Favorite story?: cant pick
Your favorite books?: don't discriminate, I like or dont
Your favorite music?: industrial right now, but it changes often
Your favorite movies?: make me laugh, transport me to a distant time, give me hope for the future of the apocalypse
Your interests?: far, far too many to keep track
Any remark?: Wow, what splendid stories you write!

Comments:
hmm, is that different from remarks? I only want to express my profound pleasure in the stories contained within the cyberstream of your site.

Jeff - 03/21/98 23:07:16
My Email:jeffneed@coolgold.com.au
Your favorite music?: Celine Dion. Mariah. Any one with a good voice
Your favorite movies?: Not a movie watcher
Your interests?: Sport, politics, social world events, CHATTING TO YOU *grin*
Any remark?: Live, love, laugh

Comments:
Pleasure to meet your acquaintance. One slight criticism. Please don't messgae me when I'm trying to fill your comment part.*grin* Nice page here, Holly Chaos. Care to come and teach me all about html? Then again.... Hope all is going well in your life and keep on keeping on.:):) Byyye XXX

Dean - 02/26/98 10:25:04
My Email:dreinhardt@hotmail.com

Comments:
Just checked your home page out Avital.... i must come back and read tonight....looks very interesting...

Jace - 02/25/98 15:49:24
My Email:rsvpme@hotmail.com
Favorite story?: you gotta do it
Your favorite books?: Miller...Nin...Trungpa
Your favorite music?: Bach....periods of classical
Your favorite movies?: adventure..release
Your interests?: thoughts..thinking

Comments:
You touched a cyber cord with that tune of thought

Jean Pierre Jacquemart - 02/12/98 22:32:21
My Email:swalk_777@yahoo.com
Your favorite books?: The Bible
Your favorite music?: Bach
Your interests?: Love with a big "L"

Comments:
Dear Avital, I really enjoyed talking to you on 11 February. I have printed your 1st story and I will read it. I hope to talk to you again. Greetings to your husband and family. Jean Pierre

The Mind - 01/28/98 06:57:27
My URL:http://www.international.pc.com
My Email:ogod@hotmail.com
Favorite story?: The story of "O"
Your favorite books?: My Secret Garden
Your favorite music?: Il Barbiere de Saville
Your favorite movies?: The English Patient
Your interests?: You know it already
Any remark?: Great stuff

Comments:
You are a smart cookie. Well done. The Mind aka Ogod

Jamie - 01/27/98 14:21:09
My Email:jamestrg@sprint.com.au

Comments:
wow.. lovely!! i hope Don is behaving...

Tom Johnson - 01/24/98 03:19:40
My Email:Dreamweaver2@juno.com
Favorite story?: American Girl
Your favorite books?: Anne McCaffery
Your favorite music?: If it moves me All
Your favorite movies?: Science Fiction
Your interests?: Life, Love and Writing
Any remark?: I enjoy writing and enjoyed our discourse this afternoon, We must talk again

Comments:


Michael - 01/20/98 18:22:27
My URL:http://www.spiegel.de
My Email:michhir@berlin.snafu.de
Favorite story?: havent read yet
Your favorite books?: all of Seymour
Your favorite music?: Bowie,Reed and Wagner
Your favorite movies?: Brazil
Your interests?: travelin and writin
Any remark?: none

Comments:
Hi,Have to read all that stories later, I like your page-design, Bye Michael from Berlin and Gute Nacht

Julee - 01/19/98 22:57:32
My URL:http://www.oocities.org/NapaValley/4577
My Email:julee@auslink.net
Favorite story?: A Thorn in the desert and (still!) The Blues Woman
Your favorite books?: All books are my friends.
Your favorite music?: You know the score!!
Your favorite movies?: I've framed this before
Your interests?: The basics in life....food, wine, music and of course the love of a good man (my darling husband, Steve, in case you didn't realise!!!!)
Any remark?: All the literary greats are sighing with joy as they watch the development of a peer in their midst.

Comments:
May Hadyn and Bach and a large glass of delicious wine inspire you to continue to write such creative and unique pieces of literature. With friendship Julee

Johnni - 01/03/98 04:08:49
My Email:johnbates@iname.com
Favorite story?: all of them
Your favorite books?: Jabberwocky - Lewis Carol
Your favorite music?: Laurie Anderson
Your favorite movies?: too many to list
Your interests?: Seduction

Comments:
well what an amazing woman you are Avital You have some great insights into the world of loss and the world of joy....You write wonderfully well, I think. It is like poetry more than prose.Lastly i just wanted to say how much your words moved me....Favourite story would be Blues Woman...Adios for now and keep writing

rajiv butalia - 12/21/97 06:13:09
Favorite story?: five
Your favorite music?: CSNY/ Neil young/Tull
Your interests?: trekking/relaxing/swimming
Any remark?: happy birthday

Comments:
loved the story, seems we all will break down if we dont relax soon. In any case you are righ....is it a real life...the absurdity of it all was very nicely brought...the part about the secretaries laughing was a nice touch....loved the part about them me suring time they spent at the hospital....cant blame them though most are rats caught in a maze.... but hope lies eternal....we will do it ...find the time for the real things..have fun

shaio bose - 12/15/97 13:05:34
My URL:http://www.angelfire.com

Comments:
hi, Avital, what a lovely name, what does it mean? major chaos sounds an interesting character - cheers.

Maury - 12/13/97 15:02:13
My Email:Thruway 17 @ aol .com
Favorite story?: all of them
Your favorite books?: weathering Hights
Your favorite music?: Pink Floyed is one of my all time favorits
Your favorite movies?: anything with Mike douglas , dustin huffman , i like drama , and comedy
Your interests?: site seing , the outdoors , classy romance
Any remark?: your the best .. keep up the god work

Comments:
you have a lot to offer , you have style , dignity , and i love your love for your family ... happy holidays to all...

Bobby - 11/29/97 21:40:47
My URL:http://www.oocities.org/Broadway/Stage/1443/
My Email:uniquer@technologist.com

Comments:
Thank you for everything.

Sam - 11/21/97 13:24:18
My Email:sam@ilovechocolate.com
Favorite story?: so far... just read the Frame.. i'm still chatting with u!
Your favorite books?: vikram seth, roald dahl
Your favorite music?: light rock..
Your favorite movies?: countless!!!
Your interests?: hmmm...
Any remark?: you're one of the INTERESTING persons i've met on freetel!!! u'r kinda smart

Comments:
i'll BE BACK!!.. (and out for blood!!)...after i've read all the stories

Peter - 11/14/97 22:36:57
My Email:psamec@iaw.on.ca
Favorite story?: All!
Your favorite books?: Cat In The Hat :)
Your favorite music?: Lorenna McKennitt
Your favorite movies?: Bambi
Your interests?: Farm Animals
Any remark?: baaaaa

Comments:
Reading Avital's stories reminds me what Lao Tzu ( 870-490 BC) once said, "A good traveller has no fixed plans on arriving." I have enjoyed the journeys the writer has taken me on and am looking forward to climbing aboard again. Please keep up the great work, Avital! *<:-)

Oded - 11/13/97 19:02:20
My Email:shunra2@hotmail.com
Favorite story?: didn't finish reading yet..
Your favorite books?: your list has few of them!
Your favorite music?: Marisa monte + shouth american in general...
Your favorite movies?: The gipsys time (the actual name is in france, and i can't replicate it)
Your interests?: Many......
Any remark?: From Freetel (remeber?)

Comments:
Avital, you are amasingly sensible and talented. Loved to read the storys (I just started and i'll probably return here to sign when i'll finish) I was shocked to find so many things in your favorite list that I thought I was the only one that could combine in HIS list. Marisa monte, Over tombs and heros, The devil in moscow, Alomodovar ..... Havn't finished yet, Have to go by now, But i'll be back,

Ilana - 10/27/97 01:22:13
My URL:http:// hahaha
My Email:dandi@inter.net.il
Any remark?: love you

Comments:


Gio/artist-Freetel - 10/24/97 14:09:54
My Email:dgraphic@sierra.net
Favorite story?: Blues Woman
Your favorite books?: dont read much...
Your favorite music?: Broadway stuff
Your favorite movies?: True Lies
Your interests?: Computer Graphics
Any remark?: just a short one...

Comments:
You are very talented and creative nice young lady...hope you find a publisher for your great short stories.... nice chatting with you on freetel and I hope that you had a good time.......D/Graphics 97

Al Rivera - 10/23/97 20:25:51
My Email:leareth@superlink.net
Favorite story?: gotcha
Your favorite books?: a separate peace
Your favorite music?: steely dan
Your favorite movies?: the doors
Your interests?: computers music
Any remark?: nice job Avital

Comments:


romola - 10/22/97 09:00:36
Favorite story?: Major Chaos & Blues Woman
Your interests?: Reading, writing, cinema,ideation,living

Comments:
Spent an enjoyable afternoon at your library - and sat awhile reading through your writing.Appreciate the invitation to your space. Here's to the stories in your head...

Edward - 10/13/97 11:44:54
My Email:ecobb@itlite.com.au
Favorite story?: I liked them all equally
Your favorite books?: Thrillers and Humourous
Your favorite music?: anything with acoustic guitar
Your favorite movies?: too many good ones to remember
Your interests?: music, reading, writing, travelling, internet
Any remark?: Glad we met!:)

Comments:
Your stories make me mellow and relaxed..they are indeed surreal..surely you have had some published already. :)

Laurie Shaw - 10/08/97 13:53:40
My Email:shawtec@ois.com.au
Favorite story?: Major Chaos
Your favorite books?: Catch 22
Your favorite music?: Jimmy Barnes, Tina Turner
Your favorite movies?: Roadside Propherts
Your interests?: motorcycles, windsurfing

Comments:
I loved Major Chaos. For a while there I thought I was Major Chaos but my skin has always been a little green and just because you have bulgy eyes doesn't mean you have to be a frog.

Laurie Shaw - 10/08/97 13:44:26
My Email:shawtec@ois.com.au
Favorite story?: Major Chaos
Your favorite books?: Catch 22

Comments:


Abdallah Fadhel - 10/02/97 08:10:26
My URL:http://freekuwait.com
My Email:webmaster@freekuwait.com
Favorite story?: blue woman
Your favorite music?: classical..and classical rock..
Your favorite movies?: all woody Allen's
Your interests?: reading, scuba diving, cinema and more...
Any remark?: from Kuwait

Comments:
very nice page...I love it.

Norm from Texas - 09/30/97 03:04:09
Favorite story?: The One Now in YOur Mind
Your favorite books?: I forget the name! Hahaha
Your favorite music?: 50's & Popular
Your favorite movies?: Old Tarzan Movies!!
Your interests?: Little of lots; lots of none!
Any remark?: Your writing is warm and from the heart...You're not GAY are you?

Comments:
You are a nice lady Avital. Enjoy life to its fullest! Stormin TX

- 09/28/97 21:01:01
My Email:locks@sti.com.br
Favorite story?: Really
Your favorite books?: Gabriel G. Marques
Your favorite music?: Classic,Rock,Blues
Your favorite movies?: Paris Texas
Your interests?: Music,My family
Any remark?: A great idea!!!

Comments:


Pablo - 09/26/97 15:00:48

Comments:
Wtiting stories or decorating stores, it is not a letter that will make a difference. I love everything you do... Glad to be part of your life, and thanks for being part of mine. Pablo

Klara - 09/26/97 07:42:50
My URL:http://www.oocities.org/Heartland/Meadows/7532
My Email:alvaro@ocean.org.il
Favorite story?: The beach, Really??
Your favorite books?: Little women, Pride and prejudice, Sense and sensibility.........
Your favorite music?: quiet, romantic songs (oldies mostly)
Your favorite movies?: All kinds except horror movies.
Your interests?: Reading, surf the net, play with my boy, baking.........
Any remark?: Keep writting!!!!

Comments:
I love yor stories. They make me think. Steven Mather keeps sending me your stories, and it makes my day!! :)

darling angus - 09/26/97 00:18:24
Favorite story?: blue
Any remark?: :)

Comments:
well done kiss

Micha Van Camp - 09/25/97 19:44:23
My Email:m.vancamp@club.innet.be
Favorite story?: Blues Woman
Your favorite books?: too much to handle
Your favorite music?: rock,funck,jazz,...

Comments:
My compliments for the stories Viv!!!! Plse go on this way :-)))))

Julee - 09/25/97 12:03:45
My URL:http://www.oocities.org/NapaValley/4577
My Email:julee@light.iinet.net.au
Favorite story?: Blues Woman
Your favorite books?: Mystery, short stories, cook books, travel books ... lots really, I adore books.
Your favorite music?: Celtic, jazz, instrumental.
Your favorite movies?: Suspense/action
Your interests?: Gourmet cooking, growing bulbs, learning about roses, walking the dog, spending time with my husband.
Any remark?: Keep on writing :)

Comments:
I find your stories quite challenging to read... they make me think beyond the written word, and each time I re-read a story it brings me new insights. Keep on being creative!!!

Hagit - 09/25/97 11:43:50
My URL:http://www.don't.have.one.net

Comments:
Kol Hakvod !!!!!! :)

Pres - 09/25/97 07:10:51
My URL:http://www.oocities.org/Area51/7849
My Email:drstrluv@ix.netcom.com
Favorite story?: Really??
Your favorite books?: The Doomsday Book, The Forge of God, anything by Wm. Gibson
Your favorite music?: early 80's new wave
Your favorite movies?: Blade Runner, The Joy Luck Club, The Shawshank Redemption
Your interests?: jewelry making, aquariums, sci/tech, photography/graphics, chat

Comments:
Love your stories... they paint vivid images and are thought provoking. Keep up the good work! :)

Steven D. Mather - 09/25/97 02:50:48
My URL:http://www.oocities.org/Paris/LeftBank/1835
My Email:sdmather@gpo.com.au
Favorite story?: Major Chaos
Your favorite books?: Historical Romantic Faction
Your favorite music?: Totally Eclectic
Your favorite movies?: Historical, Musicals, Adventure
Your interests?: Computers, Art, Writing
Any remark?: Yes :)

Comments:
I find your stories intriguing, amazing,challenging and often confusing. They are extremely evocative. I love the contrasts within them and the surreal pictures that you paint. You have a unique view of the world "little sister". Please keep writing and s aring your stories.

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