bad description

{This was written for an assignment; which was to write 2 descriptions of the same room... this is the one that makes it look bad}

            The room is cluttered by four huge pieces of furniture: The off-brown couch, the tiny love seat, The desk with the computer on it, and the shelf containing the television, the tape player, c.d. player, VCR, and the nintendo. There isn’t any room to walk. There isn’t any room to do anything. The room is too cramped.
            The room is always full of people. It is full of noise, full of people lazily wasting away time. There is always someone talking about nothing in particular. Everyone always play stupid games. When I sit here I see that little pest on floor making a mess with his toys. Leaving them on the floor for everyone to trip on. He is such a monster.
            Out of the stereo blasts crap that some people refer to as music. It stirs me up and bothers me. You can just sit there and die from the agony of that stuff. The computer is slow and empty of fun. We should get newer and better games. People always waste their time playing dumb games on it. The Internet connection we have is so slow. We need to get a faster modem so that you can enjoy the time on. It’s boring waiting forever for something to happen. It is such a waste of time.
            This room is the worst room in the whole house. I hate the time that I am forced to spend caged within the walls of this room.

Written by:
Jonathan Johnston


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