good description

{This was written for an assignment; which was to write 2 descriptions of the same room... this is the one that makes it look good.}

           The room is dominated by four pieces of furniture: the comfortable brown couch, the small yet soft love seat, The sturdy desk with the computer on it, and the shelf containing the television, tape player, c.d. player, VCR, and the nintendo. There isn’t much space for moving, but it gives the room more of a lived in look.
           The room is always full of people doing things. It is full of activity, full of vibrance and life. There is always someone to talk to; someone to play games with. I can sit here and watch the baby on floor having fun playing with various toys. Leaving them on the floor like any other kid would. He is so cute.
           Out of the stereo comes music that creates an atmosphere of peace. You can sit here and relax while doing various things on the computer. The computer is full of fun things that you can do for a while. It contains games to play, things to type, and e-mail and Internet to communicate with people all over the world. It is so much fun.
           This room is the best room in the whole house. I enjoy the hours that I am able to spent as ease within the walls of this room.

Written by:
Jonathan Johnston


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