Ugly Old Men
('Clay Feet')

    
Claire's Place
A Poem by
   Claire (CollieGirl) and John B. Moss
   10/31/98
John's poetry
Their muscles are sinew,
their faces sag
their cheeks become Jowly.

Thin, frail,-- skeletal,
Fat hanging over their belts,
preceding them through doorways.

Hair, thin -- nonexistent
Eyes, lost in sagging folds of flesh

Legs, sinew, sticks, sans muscle

Teeth, too large for shrunken faces
and stained, or false.

   Yuck -UGLY.    No thankyou.

Once they were charmers,
Hair dark, a twinkle, a smile in the eye
these guys pushing walkers
   down hospital corridors...

Once they were sought after,
attentive to your every need.
Charmed to make your aquaintance,
  these guys pushing walkers.

Life passing them by,
erasing their loved ones,
-- outliving, out-loved.
These guys pushing walkers,
they shuffle along.

Ugly thoughts, dad. Sorry!


© 1998 - Claire (CollieGirl) and John B. Moss  --   Collaborating on the theme, Claire wrote the original poem and John parodied it after reflecting on the man's point of view (ahem).


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